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Title: Chapter 16

IM LOVING THE STORY!!!! You are doing a great job of giving insight to why the charactors feel the way do

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 21 2011 06:53 am
Title: Chapter 16

OMG!  I was so happy to see the update and I had no idea it was going to turn out like this!  I am so into this story...so on the edge of my seat!  I feel so sorry for Joseph and Lorriane.  OMG.  I hope they work things out and that all of them can be a family and get back at Daniel and "the family"  for all the heartache and grief they have caused!  I pray tht Niall will forgive his father.  I can't wait for the next update! Now I'm going back to read it again for the second time!!!

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2011 01:08 am
Title: Chapter 16

Damn, so Niall didn't know that Joseph was father.  So why does he hate him if he didn't know he true parentage?  Lorraine you are really stupid!!  Both of your children need to know the truth.  Lorraine were you raped by that ahole Daniel?  If that was the case I can understand you not telling Niamh about her father.  This is so good!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2011 01:03 am


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