Boy, I so want Daniel to get his! Also I'm a bit confused. In the beginning you said that Naill was the firstborn and then later you said Blaise was the first born. I thought Joe was with Lorriane first and she got pregnant and he found out after her married Blaise's mother and Daniel refused to let him be with Lorraine. Is there some sort of suprise coming? Maybe they both were pregnant at the same time and then Blaise came prematurely???
Now evil Daniel is claiming his daugter to Blaise after he rejected her all this time! I guess he's trying to get under Blaise's skin.
I can't wait for the next installment! Excellent writing.
Author's Response:
Uh oh, did I do that? Hmm I'll have to go back and check up on myself.
My intentions was for Niall to have been conceived during a "Final Tryst" and Niall should be the first born.
Woops.
Thank you for bringing that to my attention =)
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed
[Report This]Date: January 23 2012 01:15 pm
Daniel is an evil a hole and should die a horrible death!!! Okay, so he know that Niamh is his daughter what an jackass. Why did Joseph get caught up in Daniel's madness? I am on pins and needles awaiting another update. This story rocks!!!
Author's Response:
Joseph's naivety when he was younger will be shown soon. =)
Silly kid he was.....
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 23 2012 04:38 am