Title: Chapter 11 "The Darkness Will Rise from the Deep"

I'm glad that Gwen didn't allow her loyalty and friendship with Morgana to dismiss what she saw in Morgana's eyes.  But I am very interested in what she will do next - I hope she doesn't disregard it as a fleeting moment.  Heed your elders, Gwen!   

I'm always so nervous when I read this story - that's a good thing, though.  I'm that invested in these characters, Gwen in particular.  She's walking a tightrope! 

I've only cursory knowledge of Arthurian legend, so I have no idea who the father of Morgana's child is.  I know at least one version had Arthur and Morgana sleep together, one unknowing of the other, and produce Mordred.  But based on Arthur's actions, I'm assuming that's not the case. 

Update soon! 



Author's Response:

I always look forward to your reviews: they are so thoughtful and helpful and just warm my writer's heart :) I'm so glad you feel a sense of investment in these characters! When I'm writing I get so deep into my own attachments to the story that I sometimes worry if the readers feel the same way, so it's heartening to hear that you're able to connect to Gwen :)

 

I'm glad you picked up on Arthur not being Morgana's baby daddy, because that's not the route this story is going at all, and I tried to establish that pretty early on. I'm working on the next chapter right now :)

 

Thanks so much, once again. Reviews keep me going :)

Reviewer: ribboninthesky Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2012 12:16 am

Title: Chapter 11 "The Darkness Will Rise from the Deep"

How strong will ARWEN love be?  Will ARWEN communicate and share confidences with each other?  Will there be trust between them?  



Author's Response:

I certainly hope so since this is an ARWEN story :D

Reviewer: clarencestew14 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 09 2012 03:03 am

Title: Chapter 11 "The Darkness Will Rise from the Deep"

Gwen should listen to Angelique and avoid aiding Morgana in bringing this demon child into the world because it's a vessel of evil and nothing more!  Avalon and all of Albion will be in danger because of the birth of this abomination!  

Has Morgause succeeded in convincing Morgana to hate Gwen?  Morgana has changed!  Pure venom was directed at Gwen by those eyes!  Gwen should be wary!

Such a tender, affectionate, and beautiful awkward ARWEN moment!  Feel so sorry for them!  They can't give in to their feelings since their obligations won't allow them to!  Melwas also made it clear to Arthur that he won't rest until he made Gwen his woman! That odious, creepy cretin better keep his filthy hands to himself!  

Who was Gwen's mother?  Was she a sorceress, a descendent of a primordial magical entity, a priestess of the old Religion, or a goddess?   Would love a more than meets the eye Gwen!  Is there more to Gwen than people are led to believe?  If so, I can hardly wait for her powers to be directed against the forces of evil!

 



Author's Response:

Lara, I love your detailed reviews! :) I'm so glad you enjoyed the ARWEN moment too :)

Reviewer: lara smith Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2012 04:55 am

Title: Chapter 11 "The Darkness Will Rise from the Deep"

I think I heard a "dun, dun, dunnnnn" after reading that last sentence. 

 

This can't end well.....

 

Can it?



Author's Response:

Hahahaha, you're right it was a little dramatic and of the 'dun dun dunnnn' variety :p 

 

Reviewer: sallysparrow3 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 08 2012 03:48 am

Title: Chapter 11 "The Darkness Will Rise from the Deep"

Nicely done..... Love it.. Gwen not suppose to abandon Angelica warning... It terrified me.... 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! :) So glad you enjoyed.

 

Reviewer: Tazmin Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 08 2012 03:30 am

Title: Chapter 10 "The May Queen"

hi, we're waiting... Please update soon. Thanks.xxx

Reviewer: arthurgwen2010 Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 06 2012 10:39 pm

Title: Chapter 10 "The May Queen"

It was a wonderful chapter...& Arwen kiss for the first time.. By the way, Who is the father of morgana Baby? 

Reviewer: Tazmin Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 06 2012 10:07 pm

Title: Chapter 10 "The May Queen"

Just as amazing as the last 9 chapters cant wait for more! 

Reviewer: meme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2012 09:20 pm

Title: Chapter 10 "The May Queen"

These last two chapters were really good. Arthur and Guinevere undone by one little kiss. *sigh* I can't wait to read the enxt one. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much :) Glad you liked the kiss ;)

Reviewer: AGDoren Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2012 11:06 pm

Title: Chapter 10 "The May Queen"

Morgause forging the confrontation between Morgana and Guinevere?  Will Morgana become thirsty for power and seek Camelot for her son, Mordred, in which she thinks lawfully belongs to him and will see Guinevere as a threat and rival for the throne of Camelot?  Is the May Queen Guinevere?  Legends say Guinevere was out maying before she was abducted by Melwas.  Will Melwas attempt to kidnap Guinevere and try to make her his wife by rape?  Don't want that to happen because it will ruin ARWEN forever and I want Arthur to be Guinevere's first man, period!  How strong is Guinevere?  Did she inherited magical abilites from her ancestress?  



Author's Response:

Gwen has no magical ability, only knowledge of and connection to the pagan tradition that magic is a part of. I don't write rape scenarios because I'm not comfortable with handling that subject, so I can safely assure you none of that will occur :)
The rest...you'll have to wait and see...:)

Reviewer: lara smith Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2012 10:44 pm

Title: Chapter 1 "All my Dreams Come Back to Me"

I dunno what happened I always click the latest chapter but it always down to 1st chapter. What I mean is My fave Chapter so far is 10. Maybe because i using my phone. Anyways. Thanks again and I know more arwen momenTs To come.xxx

Reviewer: arthurgwen2010 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 04 2012 10:24 pm

Title: Chapter 1 "All my Dreams Come Back to Me"

yay... Thank you sooo much!!! Chapter is My fave now... I'm really,really happy. Lol.xxx

Author's Response:

Thank you! Glad you liked it :D

Reviewer: arthurgwen2010 Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 04 2012 10:16 pm

Title: Chapter 10 "The May Queen"

Wow!  If only all your chapters could be this long!  That was some ARWEN hotness!  Can hardly wait till they get more acquainted and not just in a physical sense!  Would love for them to develop an unbreakable spiritual bond something transcending the intimacy of their love!  

Who is this mysterious woman who enters Morgana's dreams and is trying to lure her into darkness?  What is her motive?  Have a strong feeling it's Morgause and that she is beginning to plant the seeds of discord and distrust and hatred in Morgana against Gwen!  Who is the May Queen?  Why would she be a threat to Morgana's child?  Is the child Mordred who is fated to bring about the demise of King Arthur and Camelot?  If so, then I'm hoping Lancelot doesn't show up at all because he was never in the original legends since you introduced Melwas, who was reputed to be quite a lecherous bastard who always lusted after Gwen and had her abducted and the original rescuer of her was none other than Arthur himself.  NO LANCELOT PLEASEEEEEEE!!!  If he is to be around, he'd better have nothing to do with a  love triangle as there could be so many more different story lines for him.  Why couldn't he have a love of his own and it better NOT BE GUINEVERE!  In the legends Elena loved Lancelot but her love wasn't returned.  She killed herself! SAD!!  Wouldn't minded if Elena had a happier ending for once and may Lancelot return her love and claim her as his one true love so ARWEN can finally be happy?  



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your lovely review! Don't worry this is an ARWEN story, no one shall mess with the glory that is ARWEN :D

Reviewer: lara smith Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2012 05:58 am

Title: Chapter 1 "All my Dreams Come Back to Me"

Enjoying this story so far and how things are developing between A/G and the four of them. I wonder who is the father of Morgana's baby... I hope its Merlin! 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review!  :) 

Reviewer: ella-rose88 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 04 2012 12:41 am

Title: Chapter 9 "The Witch's Quickening"

I am reading from Camelot Love and I am absolutely enjoying this fic. I love your writing style.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review! Your words are deeply appreciated :)

Reviewer: cvgirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 03 2012 05:28 pm

Title: Chapter 9 "The Witch's Quickening"

I'm really enjoying reading this story...love the budding relationship growing between Gwen & Arthur. 

Poor Morgana; can't imagine what she'll do now.

Looking forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! :)

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2012 05:21 pm

Title: Chapter 1 "All my Dreams Come Back to Me"

Thanks Gods... What a relieve.... Can't wait for the next chapter...!

Reviewer: T. Anonymous starstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2012 04:13 pm

Title: Chapter 1 "All my Dreams Come Back to Me"

please not arthur the father of morgana's child. Because if arthur i'm very very sad. hu hu hu... Please update soon.

Author's Response:

This is an ARWEN story, so no, Arthur is not the father. Don't worry! That's not the direction I'm taking this at all :)

Reviewer: arthurgwen2010 Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 03 2012 08:46 am

Title: Chapter 9 "The Witch's Quickening"

I was tempted to say that it was Merlin, but apparently not...I wonder about the mistery man then. Please don't wait too long to update!!!!

Reviewer: Elle Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2012 08:16 am

Title: Chapter 1 "All my Dreams Come Back to Me"

Okey... This really make me feel uncomfortable... Cross my finger, hope it's wasn't arthurs. If it does... Im sure Gwen wil have a broken heart... 



Author's Response:

Hi! I clarified this issue with a reviewer earlier on in the story, but Arthur is not the father, and that's not the direction I'm taking this story. This is an Arwen story :)

Reviewer: T. Anonymous starstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2012 06:48 am

Title: Chapter 9 "The Witch's Quickening"

That's disgusting!  Couldn't be?  Is Arthur the father?  Oh no!  What an irresponsible, lecherous, and despicable ANIMAL AND MONSTER is that ARTHUR PENDRAGON!  Can't believe Arthur impregnated his own half-sister (is she)?  What was Arthur thinking?  Is Arthur in love with Morgana and for how long?  Or was it a drunken mistake on the part of both parties?  

What will Uther do now that his own son has violated his ward?  Will ARWEN never be then since Arthur  will probably be forced to marry Morgana?  Will the dire prophecy come true then about Mordred sired by Arthur and his half-sibling and be the demise of the future king of Camelot?  

If Arthur is this sort of bastard then Gwen is better off not getting more acquainted with him as God knows what his dishonorable intentions are towards Gwen!  Poor Gwen though!  Just when she thought she found someone worthy to love, then he turns out to be the father of her dear friend's child!  Gwen definitely can not accept Melwas either!  

 

 



Author's Response:

Hey! I think I said this to an earlier reviewer but Arthur is NOT the father, and that's not the direction I'm taking this at all. This is an ARWEN story :)

Reviewer: lara smith Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 03 2012 06:16 am

Title: Chapter 8 "Shaken by Your Beauty"

The way you've written the small quips of attraction between Arthur and Gwen has made the mood heat up so far. Throughout the chapter, we can feel Gwen's stance start to break down but I like the way you said she would 'challenge his pride'. Whatever is going to happen, I still like to think Gwen as not the simpering female of the love story but a strong one. Arthur on the other hand, I wonder if you'll make him overly prattish, more so he can grow as a character, like in the series but he seems like he's already to change for her. Morgana.... what's in store for her? darkness or light?

ps. I am glad this chapter is long!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your words! I too picture Gwen as a strong character, even if Arthur makes her weak in the knees ;)  Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: A. Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 01 2012 08:12 pm

Title: Chapter 8 "Shaken by Your Beauty"

Seriously.... The interaction between Arthur and gwen,  Its really warm my heart... I'm sure Gwen felt nervous the whole time Arthur staring at her lips. Oh.. When can they share their first kiss. Really hope it will be soon..



Author's Response:

I hope so too :p Will have to see where the muse takes me. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: T. Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 01 2012 12:54 pm

Title: Chapter 8 "Shaken by Your Beauty"

Ohhhh, he wants to be a better man for her. :)



Author's Response:

He does :)

Reviewer: AGDoren Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2012 07:39 am

Title: Chapter 1 "All my Dreams Come Back to Me"

I just got finished watching Avalon High. Ironic that I'd come acress a book that's like, the same thing! :)

Reviewer: zebrafab Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2012 06:43 am



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