Now I'm invested! Can't wait to see how this will play out! I do hope you will be able to update soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading! The plot bunnies have been hopping all over my brain, so I'm trying to harness their energy and move forward :)
Reviewer: ribboninthesky Signed
[Report This]Date: January 22 2012 04:07 am
Love it! your writing is beautiful! I would love to make a banner for you!
Author's Response:
Omg that would be a dream! I have no visual editing skills whatsoever and I was bemoaning my inability to make a banner :p I would love that :)
And thanks so much for reading!
[Report This]Date: January 22 2012 04:01 am
I like this story, as your writing is rather evocative of Arthurian legend. I thoroughly enjoy Arthur and Gwen on the TV series Merlin, but I'm pleased that Gwen is no servant. Morgana is more sympathetic, which is nice also.
That said, I think this chapter needs some serious editing. There were several sentences and quotes repeated, and it appears that some passages are mixed up in terms of what's happening. It throws off the pacing significantly. I was very confused about what was going on until I got to the end of the chapter.
Author's Response:
Yikes, thanks for the tip! The copy-paste function is messed up on my computer. I fixed it so it should be fine now.
Thanks so much for reading and commenting!
Reviewer: ribboninthesky Signed
[Report This]Date: January 22 2012 03:59 am