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Title: The Exile, Part II, Chapter VII: The Air In Camelot

We're on the same schedule again! :) I'm so happy with what you're doing with Elyan. Now here's an Elyan I can genuinely root for. Tilda's story was terribly sad, but I'm glad she shared it with Gwaine and Elyan. I almost did a fist-bump in the air when Elyan offered his resignation.
I also like how you're dealing with the bracelet plot...can't wait for the enchantment to be revealed.

Keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

Thanks dear.

Now here's an Elyan I can genuinely root for.

This was my goal. :)

Tilda needs some hugs and to get away from her husband poor thing.

 Reviewer: Anastasia_G Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22 2012 07:29 pm


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