Glenna needs to learn not to mess in grown folks' business. And this is grown folks. What a git. Will is going to destroy Glenna. Richly deserved, I might add.

I really love that this is a mature relationship. Love Elle and Will's father/daughter relationship. And Ana is still young enough to have another youngun, right?

I'll be glad when Will and Ana get some alone time. Elle is a sweetheart, but I'm with Gretchen, shut up!

Will is so tender with Ana. They have a natural rhythm.

Everytime I see Glenna, I think of the Wizard of Oz, but of the evil witch.

Loved the update, Chica.

This story is so awesome!! I love how you bring emotion to the characters. This could definitely be a movie!  Continue please, lol. 

Will for such a bright guy you are sap when it comes to woman.  Glenna was never worthy of you and that much evilness can not be hid.  You  need to decapitate the head of Medussa before she turns you into Stone!!  Ana is the woman for you and Glenna knows that.  That ho is psycho and bears watching!!

This story is so wonderful. I love Will and Ana. Please give me more of this romance. I love it so!!

Excellent.

I love this already.I love the emotion running through it. Will and Ana is already one of my favorites. well done

I truly love this story. i love how Will is with Ana and definitely putting Glenna in her place. i love the fatherly relationship he has with Elle and how they are protective of each other. i love that Will and Ana were able to spend time together. more please

This story is so wonderful. You are a marvelous writer. You can evoke such emotion from the reader. I love Will and Ana. I know that they did nothing because Ana is not ready for that is Will would never ask that of her so early. I love this romance I love it!!!!!!

Glenna is making a huge mistake going up against Will like this. Elle too, for that matter. Despite her getting to him at the beginning, Will didn't get to where he is in life by being anyone's fool. And Elle, she acts like a lioness protecting her cub when it comes to Ana. That little girl loves her momma something fierce! Edward wasn't kidding about her. Speaking of him, I think he should go to Elle, if not Will, with what Glenna has on him. His honestly could go a long way in this situation. At any rate, this is going to end badly for Glenna.

Gretchen, she made me cry with all those emotions going everywhere. She's so happy and hopeful to have her friend back. Elle wants desperately to see the real Ana, too. This is good.

Ana, she made me so proud. This takes courage and strength. She'll do it.

Will, he's a stand-up guy. He's just sweetly and gently bringing Ana out of her shell. It's the only way to proceed with Ana, really. She'll clam up with anything else. The Moores took enough from her and Elle, for that matter. Time to reclaim herself back. She'll never be the same, but she can be the best she can be. They took her love for herself, her trust in herself and ability to truly let go and love someone else. Twenty years is long enough!

Wonderful!!

What absolutely beautiful thing you have created here! I love it  Excellent

I love the way you write Will and Ana are my new power couple. Glenna I think will self destruct because they always do.  I want to know why Will would put up with her for so long. What happened to the people who hurt Ana.  This story is a beautiful thing

Absolutely loved this chapter. I love Will and Ana. I love thw way you write them. I think that they lost track of time and she got home so late. I doubt they would do anything so early. I love the romance you have going. Just kill Glenna or let Elle take care of her. I see that she has caused some fear in the office. I love Gretchen . I love this story more