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Title: {Two}

How sweet of him.My heart melted

The Moore's part was SAD, wonder WHY HE did this AND why she let him do it?  The parents are the WORST I mean living with this monster under your roof?!...Oh well I'm not a parent so I CAN'T understand them.

WHERE are they NOW?

Moore' siblings.

Unfortunately Vincent was too little.

Update soon S.H

 

 

P.S. Françoise it's for woman and François it's for a man.

The florist was addressed as an he/him.

François 

 Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 02 2012 02:04 am
Title: {One}

Safehaven, thank-you for this story. Like everyone else, I would like to ask/beg you to please give Anna and Will an ending. Ana deserves to wooed, strengthen, and on the road to healing spirtually as well as mentally. Mr. Will needs to come full circle and  truly be the father figure in Elle's life. Finally, Gretchen needs to see her friend, her sister happy. Hopefully, the muse will not leave you alone until you finish this story. Then if by chance it touches your mind again, finish the Mating Season and the Ogre and Claire. Those stories are awesome and captures your attention with realness and romance. Again, Safehaven, thank you for your writing. I hope to read many more chapters and stories.

 Reviewer: zetacrave Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 02 2012 01:06 am
Title: {Two}

This is an awesome story... please update soon...

 Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 11:51 pm
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Such a intense and powerful story! Can't wait for more!

 Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 11:20 pm
Title: {Two}

This story is so beautiful and powerful

I love Will. Glenna must be some master of deception if she managed to hide her true self frm him. He knows what she is like now and she is gone. I love Ana. I love Ana. This story is so amazing and so are you. Please chapter three 

 Reviewer: forks and knives Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 11:07 pm
Title: {One}

I am in love with you. I love this story. I love these characters and what you make them do and say. This story is the the top. I am your fan FOREVER. Please keep going I love it

 Reviewer: forks and knives Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 10:33 pm
Title: {Two}

I am in love with this story.  Will's gesture is right on time.  I'm so glad that Elle knows the truth and I hope she and her mother can talk about it eventually.  I can't understand how Fredericks sister would assit her brother in raping her friend and I am sure that poor 12 year old brother is scarred with the memory of it all just like Ana.  It is a sad situation.

I have a feeling that Frederick and his sister will turn up again, but I hope that Ana has some compassion for that brother while Frederick and his sister should be up under the jail.  

Can't wait for more!

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 08:24 pm
Title: {Two}

So moving, loving it...

 Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 08:19 pm
Title: {One}

This is a beautiful story and I can't wait to read more. Chapter 2 brought tears to my eyes, especially the card that accompanied the flowers. Please update again soon!

 Reviewer: katie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 07:47 pm
Title: {Two}

A beautiful well written story. Please continue. Ana deserves all the happiness in the world.

 Reviewer: anj1874 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 06:25 pm
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I just had to read these two chapters over again, I love this story SafeHaven you a truly gifted writer.  For the life of me I can't understand what Will saw in Glenna, she's bony and sex with bone can't be enjoyable.  Will, from what you have written about him seems to be very intuitive, so how did that phony evil Glenna get past him?  Glenna couldn't have though that Will would ever marry her much less have children.  I  hope  that you give us a glimpse into Will thinking about starting a sexual dalliance with the evil one.

This is definitely one of my favorite new stories.  More please!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 06:18 pm
Title: {Two}

I really like this story

Please UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOON

I wonder what Glennda is upto?

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Date: April 01 2012 05:32 pm
Title: {Two}

If I had the words to write I would write them now. I am speechless from the beauty of this chapter. I will re-read it several times because it is that awesome. Please give Will and Ana an ending. I don't care if you put your other stories on hold, give Ana the peace that you have already started.

 Reviewer: for real Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 02:44 pm
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I know that I am one to talk but you HAVE to give Ana a happy ending! Finish this story. This chapter; the WHOLE smyphony of your writing was absolutely beautiful. I loved the flowers. I love Will that man is a MAN. FINISH THIS I AM BEGGING YOU WITH ALL THAT I HAVE

Spiderbite

 Reviewer: Spiderbite Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 02:25 pm
Title: {Two}

oooooh safe what a lovely story!!!! i fell INSTANTLY in love with all the characters - except glenna of course lol!!!! im really enjoying watching ana begin to heal while simultaneously opening her heart/body/soul up to will. he seems like the type to seek retribution from frederick once he finds out the whole story about what happened. really loved the flowers at the end and how that helped her replace a horrible memory with a fresh sweet new one!!!!! more please and welcome to the chamber!!!!!!

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Date: April 01 2012 02:17 pm
Title: {One}

I am in love with this already. Your choice of title has me giddy with expectations. Like every older man they want that younger woman but he sees how childess she is. He sees Ana and it is all over.  I love the start of this

 Reviewer: for real Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 02:13 pm
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Where the HECK have you been!!! This is a beautiful and awesome story. I love your characters and I can't wait for more of the backstory. I love Ana. I already know that. Gretchen is my road dog. Mr. William Kapori I can see something happening here. I want more and I am off to read it

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Date: April 01 2012 02:06 pm
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Great story

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Date: April 01 2012 11:46 am
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love this story, please upate soon

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 08:40 am
Title: {Two}

What a beautiful chapter. Will's absolute gentleness will be Ana's undoing. In the loveliest of ways, though. Ana still needs therapy, though.

I hope you will shed more light on Frederick, and especially, Monica. The fact that this woman would not only fight her little brother, but help facilitate the rape of one of her friends, all for the other brother. Did she supply women for him to rape on a regular basis? What happened with these people? I would love some answers to these question. Interesting dynamic with that.

Glenna, she needs to go anyway. Too immature and too desperate; and too young to be so.

Elle, while I don't like the fact that Hector took it upon himself to tell her how she was conceived, I'm still glad she knows. Ana might never have; and who could blame her? How do you tell your child something like that?

Will, what a wonderful man. Such kindness, compassion, and humanity. His stats arent bad either...lol! What the hell is he doing with someone like Glenna anyway?

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 08:04 am
Title: {Two}

This chapter was so powerful!!  I was surprised that Glenna was intuitive enough to know her time was over and that she didn't make a scene at the resturant.  I loved how Will was able to put Ana at ease with words and his mere presence.  Gretchen is too funny I love her.  Why was Ana so resistent to going to rape counseling?  When you had Ana recall that day that she was raped it was so powerful.  How could Monica do that to girl that was suppose to be her friend?  I really hope that karma has paid Monica a visit and the payback was worse than Ana suffered at the hands of Freddie!!!

Thank you for this amazing story, SafeHaven you are an phenomenal writer.  I am looking forward to reading more WIll and Ana!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 07:59 am
Title: {Two}

omg. it was a little sad how he treated glenna but i hope ana and will fall in love and that it works out with little drama and how sweet was that card? hell i'm in love with him...great work....please update soon........pretty please

 Reviewer: nala88 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 07:48 am
Title: {Two}

This is a wonderfully told story.

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 07:29 am
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Wow! Incredible work! I love Will. As for Ana...I admire her strength and courage. I'll be waiting for that update!

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Date: April 01 2012 06:04 am
Title: {Two}

Beautiful chapter. Monica and her brother should have been arrested. Will is so sweet, she needs happiness.

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Date: April 01 2012 05:44 am


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