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Title: One~

H O O K E D like a tick on a fat lazy dog!!!!!! LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! I APPLAUD YOU!!!!

 Reviewer: Creepy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2012 06:55 pm
Title: Prologue~

That had to be the most awesome beginning that I have ever read

 Reviewer: Creepy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2012 06:42 pm
Title: Two~

Thanks for a great update.  I am glad that I was wrong about Dina.  She just wants to die because she couldn't save Lure.  Her father was a monster.  It seems that Jarrid is a monster too and he wants Sarason.  I am sure that Jye will not allow that to happen. I hope that you will update soon.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2012 03:20 pm
Title: One~

Thanks for a great update.  I am in awe of this story.  I like Jye.  I feel bad for Sarason.  She is losing so much. But it seems that Phen made the right decision for her.  Dina is going to be a problem that Arabella will have to take care of sooner than later.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2012 02:59 pm
Title: Prologue~

Good start to the story.  Hopefull, the clan will be saved.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2012 02:33 pm
Title: Two~

Your hope of us reading will be made a reality because I for one will read it until the end or I can't for any reason.  This is an excellent read and I can't wait for another chapter, so please update soon you know maybe with  2-3 chapters at a time.

A New Fan,

Kim

 Reviewer: kimyso Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2012 03:48 am
Title: Two~

Wow what a amazing chapter, I loved it!

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2012 01:29 pm
Title: Two~

I feel for Dina and Arabella love the update

 Reviewer: JoVanAdDek Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2012 02:39 am
Title: Two~

I like the mood and tone you've set in the Sarason/Jye scenes, you can practically feel the tension ready to bubble over.  There's so much going on with the flashbacks but I think I'm folowing it.

Thanks for sharing.

 Reviewer: Meg Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2012 12:05 am
Title: Two~

I so love this story. Can't wait for more.

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2012 11:56 pm
Title: Two~

Wow, you've updated quickly! Please continue as this is fantastic. 

 Reviewer: Fifi La Frou Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 04 2012 11:26 pm
Title: Two~

I really love this story, and the development of the characters, I can't wait for an update, your writing is suspenseful and very good, thanks for sharing it with us

 Reviewer: Chocolatepink Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2012 09:15 pm
Title: Two~

Just started reading this sotory and seriously amazing loved it, cannot wait for the next update.

 Reviewer: Kay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 04 2012 07:48 pm
Title: Two~

What an update. I was so enthralled with your words. Please update soon.

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2012 07:44 pm
Title: Two~

I loved this chapter. I hate what happened to Sarason's mom but very surprised about Dina. I love how Jye protected Sarason it was beautiful the interaction between them are so sweet. Jye is going to have to hurt Jarrod because they are stupid. Please please update again. LOVE THIS STORY

 Reviewer: primesgirl4 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 04 2012 05:16 pm
Title: One~

Excellent!!!  Great detail.  Beautiful story telling.

 Reviewer: read a lot Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2012 05:12 am
Title: Prologue~

I immensely enjoyed this! More, please!

 Reviewer: DecemberUnrest Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2012 02:25 am
Title: One~

I hope the feeling still lurks for a while,lol.Dominion has caught my attention.Love me some vampires!!! Anxiously waiting for next update...

 Reviewer: cocoablue Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2012 12:34 am
Title: Prologue~

Awaiting more of this tale. 

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2012 10:13 pm
Title: One~

Two chapters in and it's already better than that Underworld crap. I'm really diggin' the interactions between Phen & Jye. How can you not respect the Redtips for willingly sacrificing their lives for a fellow member. It's boble and sad all at the same time.

 Reviewer: AwesomeWonder Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2012 10:30 am
Title: One~

love it he failing for her hard like the old wolf said, can't wait for the next update

 Reviewer: JoVanAdDek Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2012 10:11 pm
Title: Prologue~

love it

 Reviewer: JoVanAdDek Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2012 10:10 pm
Title: One~

I can tell this is going to be a favorite story of mine!

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2012 09:24 pm
Title: One~

Good update. 

Dina is going to be trouble, but I hope not. It's such a cliche to have the person the hero saved turn around and betray him because of jealousy. It would be intere sting if Dina learned compassion and forgiveness. Sara did kill Dina's parents, but her parents killed Sara's. It would be nice if the two became friends, or if Dina does betray Jye it's not intentional. Idk, it will interesting to see what she does.

I hope the next chapter contains more interraction betweeen Sara and Jye...more dialogue. Their kids will be pretty powerful. 

 

Hmm, when do we get a peak at Graham and Lore?  

 

Okay, why is everyone standing around? Jye has a private room, and yet people are in it. Why are people in his room? Don't these vampire have better things to do. It's like there's no privacy in the castle. And why was everyone just standing around outside? Did they go out to watch the Sara change? If so, that needs to be explained because it doesn't make any sense that thousands of vampires are standing around in the snow. They need to take up a hobby: wenching, jogging, crochet, reading, etc

 

Thanks for updating!  I can that this is going to be a long ride. I hope you don't abandon it. 

 Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2012 08:52 pm
Title: One~

Wow! alk about talent beyond measure. Please continue, and soon. I have no constructive criticism to offer.

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Date: June 02 2012 07:08 pm


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