I am truly loving the beginning of this story. It has become one of my new favorites. I will keep checking back for updates, can't wait for next chapter.
Reviewer: Drea Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 02 2012 01:46 pm
There are a lot of good writers and you are one of those writers..I really have enjoyed your first two chapters, please continue to update your story as often as you can.
Thank you for sharing your gift
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: June 02 2012 10:59 am
i'm really enjoying this story and i hope they fall in love
Reviewer: nala88 Signed [Report This]Date: June 02 2012 09:28 am
Beautiful story..looking forward to more creatively articulated chapters.
Reviewer: Nina Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 02 2012 07:21 am
Wow, really loving this story so far. Dina better check her attitude or she'll get more than she bargained for. More please.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: June 02 2012 07:14 am
Love it! Can't wait for more...
Reviewer: kwajeraspen Signed [Report This]Date: June 02 2012 05:25 am
This story line captivates from the very start. I have goosebumps. Now I need to read it all! Thank you for sharing your talent. Love from Spain
Reviewer: Bel Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 02 2012 02:36 am
in enjoyed the beginning...please update soon
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: June 02 2012 12:17 am
Thanks for your story.
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: May 31 2012 07:00 pm
Wow, very intruigued! please post more!!
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: May 31 2012 10:40 am
Interesting. I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: nikol Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 31 2012 09:12 am
Aww, the poor Redtips. Graham sounds like a right bastard.
Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: May 31 2012 07:51 am
Very good start. I loved this chapter please add more chapters
Reviewer: primesgirl4 Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 31 2012 07:47 am
Great start WalkingPapers! You are weaving a very interesting story. Love it!!!!
Reviewer: read a lot Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 31 2012 06:55 am
Wow. I felt cold just reading this. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: AwesomeWonder Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 31 2012 05:07 am
Poor Sarason . Good story . More soon ?
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 31 2012 05:00 am
I am intrigued, more please!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 31 2012 04:43 am
great start. looking forward to more. i really love your characters & the premise. awesome story!
Reviewer: idriveavitz Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 31 2012 04:36 am