Jye and Sarason are sizzling together. I love his attitude towards the establishment. There is always someone trying to take what you have. How tragic for Dina and Arabella! I feel their pain. Excellent chapter
Reviewer: Jane doe Signed [Report This]Date: August 11 2013 01:16 pm
Absolutely want more of this story; I love the flashbacks and where you have placed them. The pace is excellent as well as the flow! Awesome job. I love the pictures and these characters stories,
Reviewer: Jane doe Signed [Report This]Date: August 11 2013 12:46 pm
What a start! I am just sucked into this! I hated twilight but this is awesome and it is just the prologue!
Reviewer: Jane doe Signed [Report This]Date: August 11 2013 12:30 pm
Excellent chapter, thanks for the update love it
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: August 11 2013 02:42 am
Despite the minor errors, this was still.a good read with so.many emotions. War is clearly on the horizon with everyone having something to lose. True intentions have surfaced and compromises have been made. The infamous fathers have made their appearence well known. Eberything is coming to full circle.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: August 11 2013 02:10 am
Thanks for updating, this story is great. Raven is so intriguing and I can't wait till Jye and Sarason finally become intimate!
Reviewer: Hikari Signed [Report This]Date: August 10 2013 04:22 am
I must say that I am quite interested with Raven and Arabella. It is fun reading about them. They are actually my favorite couple right now. I love the plot and the mixing of vampires and Lyman's. can wait to see how this turns out.
Reviewer: Ana Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 08 2013 08:59 pm
Things are really starting to heat up, the past is coming back with its burden on the next generation.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: August 08 2013 07:11 pm
There is trouble on the horizon but there is also hope and thst is what truly matters. As cliche as this might sound destiny is always what we least expect and this is the perfect example.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: August 08 2013 05:43 pm
The intensity will not fail to cease any time soon.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: August 08 2013 05:54 am
Well things are only going to get worse before any chance of getting better. Jye and Sarason feelings atr chsnging for the better despite the bad blood. They are both strong and are no strangers to danger. Dina is clearly dying inside because of the past abd how she feels that she failed to save Sarasons parents. Sarason now knows the truth. This is better than any tv show.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: August 08 2013 05:19 am
There seems to be so much pain in the past that it is hard to move forward for some. Jye has made his thoughts quite clear. Sarason is the spitting image of her mother.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: August 08 2013 04:58 am
The story is deep and the character development is clar as the moon. Things will only continue to become more enchanting as these creatures of the night and the Lycans of the moon.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: August 07 2013 11:58 pm
This story has had me curious for months and now i see my curiosity was spot on. This is off to a good start.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: August 07 2013 11:20 pm
This story is so good, makes me forget I am reading. Love it. Thank you
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: August 07 2013 01:38 pm
I have missed this story! I love this story! It draws me in and keeps me there in fantasy. You have much talent please keep sharing with us! Excellent
Reviewer: KnightPhall Signed [Report This]Date: August 07 2013 03:43 am
I've missed this story!!!
Its on now!! Love it!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: August 07 2013 12:36 am
This story is truly amazing! I am having a sensory overload with the amount of fine men in this story, you are making me fan myself! I love paranormal stories with vampires, wolves and other supernatural beings. You are the shi nit!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 07 2013 12:00 am
Was Phen Sara son's father? Hey only bit her to mark her not kill her so maybe she'll be safe at least safer than she would be with Graham. Will Sara in ask Hey to save her family? Jye is fine!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 06 2013 09:36 pm
I love all the dynamic and parameters of this story! The vulnerability, the strength, the beauty and this underlying lust in this story captivates me. The sexiness and sleekness you put down on every page to me makes this story.....PERFECTION.
i await your next words
Reviewer: Xaria Signed [Report This]Date: August 06 2013 09:06 pm
Great update can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: cdy1216 Signed [Report This]Date: August 06 2013 07:35 pm
Feinin!!! Scratchin & sniffin like a crack-head!
Reviewer: HarperSinclaire Signed [Report This]Date: May 09 2013 12:52 am
WalkingPapers: If I haven't told you this before: You. Are. An. Amazing. Seriously. Amazing. Writer! Please keep up the good work! I would buy a novel from you ANY DAY! Now... that said. I am DYING without an update. Please, please update soon! Loving every word you write. It is so original and I LOVE it! You are awesome - don't let anyone tell you otherwise!
Nim
Reviewer: Nim Manu Signed [Report This]Date: April 30 2013 06:06 am
I like this story lets not take forever to finish it please
Reviewer: Charming2i Signed [Report This]Date: March 12 2013 01:59 pm
Great chapter as usual. so the plot thickens!
Reviewer: Hikari Signed [Report This]Date: March 09 2013 09:15 pm