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Title: Five~

Great update.. Raven and Arabella are meant for each other.

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 24 2013 05:40 pm
Title: Four~

Awesome 

 Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2013 09:46 am
Title: Prologue~

:)

 Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02 2013 09:35 pm
Title: Four~

I hope that you plan to update soon. Enjoying the story.

 Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25 2013 07:41 am
Title: Four~

Mmmm! Mmmm! Good!

I'm so hooked! ~ You said something in one of your Chapter notes about meager attempts in writing...Uhhhh. No. You can count yourself a writer! Full on!

Add you to my favorites and tracking this story. I can hardly wait for an update.

 

BTW...Really! Who does Miss Cora think she is? She and her village are humans. These are vampires. Thousands of them and she thinks she got them over a barrel? Not to mention Jye is a BOSS! He wouldn't be in a position of weakness let alone with humans. Some poeple's children!

 

ANYWHO...very nicely done! and Thank you for sharing!

 Reviewer: HarperSinclaire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2012 10:28 pm
Title: Four~

I love this story its so original 

 Reviewer: chinaeye Signed [Report This]
Date: November 19 2012 04:01 am
Title: Four~

Thanks for a great update.  Thanks goodness Sarason is so kind hearted and is willing to help Dina.  As for Lady Ho, the confrontation between Sarason and her was quite interesting.  I hope that The Redtips will be able to stay elusive and isn't captured and killed by their roval clan.  

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2012 02:04 am
Title: Four~

This story is perfection! I am so happy that I found. You are a amazing writer. Tis story is flawless

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Date: September 16 2012 01:22 am
Title: Three~

Thanks for a great update.  I hope that Sarason can forgive Dina so that she can live and maybe Arabella will start talking again.  

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2012 01:18 am
Title: Four~

I see Cora turning to the council and helping them kill Jye because of Sarason. She seems to be that vindictive. I love Sarason and Jye. They are so sensual together! They smoke!!!!! I love that Dina will live now. She seems to have a sense of humor and I can see her and Arabella being friends. This story rocks. I LOVE IT!!! MORE

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Date: September 15 2012 01:24 pm
Title: Four~

I love this story and I want more ...soon please.

 Reviewer: Forks and Knives Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2012 06:23 pm
Title: Three~

You are AMAZING!! This story is AMAZING! LOVE  LOVE LOVE IT

 Reviewer: Forks and Knives Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2012 05:46 pm
Title: Three~

DUDE THE PICTURES ARE PERFECTION!!! NOW TO THE STORY!

 Reviewer: Forks and Knives Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2012 05:22 pm
Title: Two~

OUTSTANDING

I AM HOOKED ON THIS MARVELOUS TALE. YOU ARE A MASTER STORYTELLER!!!

 Reviewer: Forks and Knives Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2012 05:21 pm
Title: One~

The flashbacks are AWESOME. You place them expertly. I absolutely love their history together. These characters are totally original and exceptionally written. I love this story. Go on

 Reviewer: Forks and Knives Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2012 04:53 pm
Title: Prologue~

JEEPERS BATMAN!!!

I'm giving you an O for

OUTSTANDING!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: September 14 2012 03:52 pm
Title: Four~

I LOVE THIS!!! What a wonderful piece of work! You are fleshing out your characters solidly, have a realistic storyline and bulid-up, and make excellent use of flashbacks. The dialogue and reactions are spot on, and there is a good pace, feel and continuity to the story as a whole.

This is good work!! I'm a new fan!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2012 09:15 am
Title: Four~

Great update!! Want more!!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2012 07:35 am
Title: Four~

Still liking this read.  I know the action is going to be off the chain.  I'm glad thea Jye put Cora in her place, but I know her evil self is thinking of a way to get back at Sarason because Jye doesn't want her.  Can't wait to read more.

 Reviewer: kimyso Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2012 09:56 pm
Title: Four~

Love your story can't wait for the next update!!

 Reviewer: cdy1216 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2012 07:06 pm
Title: Four~

Another great update! Glad to see other character pics and I see trouble on the horizon, but for who is yet to be seen. Keep up the great work, loving it so far.

 Reviewer: Hikari Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2012 04:59 am
Title: Four~

Good update

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Date: September 13 2012 04:55 am
Title: Four~

Words can not express how MUCh I missed this story and these characters. You are a very talented writer so please don't leave us that long again. Please keep writing as you are I love it!  THANK YOU

 Reviewer: LongLast Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2012 03:20 am
Title: Four~

I lvoe this story! This chapter was so Awesome. Jye and Sarason are perfect for each other. I just know he's going to wear her out when the time arrives.LOL I am sSO HAPPY THAT SHE TOLD dina without words that she does not hate her or blame her for her mother's death and I am so happy that Arabella wants her as a friend again. Thsi story is just EXCEPTIONAL MORE.......

 Reviewer: Xaria Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2012 12:40 am
Title: Three~

Your pictures are EXACTLY as you described your characters! magnificent!!!

Jye and Sarason are just SEXY together. I hope they stay that way becuase they are just SEXY!!

I want Dina to have peace. I feel that she has a sense of humor. Her jabs at Arabella even make her smile alittle. I hope that Sarason looks past the guilt that Dina feels about Lure and cures her of her nightmare.

AWESOME CHAPTER!!

 Reviewer: Xaria Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2012 12:19 am


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