I always look forward to your updates.  Thank you for taking the time to write and share your story.

The initial concept of this story seemed to be girl falls for brother's best friend who doesn't notice her so she purchases a self help book to get his attention.  You did a great job taking us through that process and showing the development of and chemistry between Logan and Alicia.  So now they both like each other, they want to be together but instead of letting that happen there are more obstacles to keep them apart.  It seems unnecessary at this point unless you just want to draw out the story.  Put Logan and Emery together and show the growth of their relationship as she has to deal with a father who never wanted her and a mother who's too self observed to care.  Cassidy and Logan's guise of a relationship is insignificant compared to her family life.  Don't get caught up in tryng to surprise or mislead your readers so there can be a great reveal.  Your writing and story are too good for that.

I think the sooner you uncomplicate things between them the better it will be for the story. Bringing a third party between them-when they've figured out their feelings for each other- will drag out the story. They need to continue messaging until they figure out they are communicating with each other. Maybe Comet will play matchmaker ;).

I am going to say option A. Not because I don't want to hear Logan's POV but I think that nothing will get resolved until she comes back. Maybe one chapter from his POV will suffice but you don't need a bunch of them.

I am glad to see you back and I hope that everything is going okay IRL. Wherever you decide to take the story, I will be here to read it so do you. 

-Divine

I am so disgusted with her mother that I don't even know what to say. And had the nerve to talk about disrespect. Emery should have punched her in the face. I was NOT expecting that. Her mother is worse than I thought and her father is worthless. All Emery has is her brother. Because until Logan gets his shit together and tells her what is going on (and her willing to listen), they might as well just let it go. I have a feeling that Logan is going through something that is just as bad and that saddens me. They both deserve a little peace and a little happiness. I hope that they get it in the next chapter. I hope she goes to England finds herself and comes back FABULOUS! 

I LOVE this story. I commend you on makeing a romance between a bunch of high schoolers so hot but still innocent in a way. I hate those stories/shows where the characters are screwing around like 25yr olds when they're only like 16 -__- they are so annoying and unrealistic (in my opinion), but this story is awesomeee.

I LOVE Logan and his sexy coy playboy self. Hes so cute.

The background thing (if im correct, in the beginning of the story Emery says how her phone has a flower background) and Darrell saying Logan broke his phone a month ago, the fact that they have the same numbers in each phone and 'Jimmy' saying they go to the same school, all makes me think 'Jimmy" is Logan. The intereactions between Logan/Emery and Jimmy/Emery are similar as well. My only thing is if it is, how in the world has she not recognized his voice when they talk on the phone lol? 

I'm excited for the next chapter. I really hope Emery's mom doesn't send her away.

I sent you a message!!!

Great update:) I never thought of Logan as Jimmy, if he is, I can't wait to see that explosion. 

Love the story! can't wait for the next update :)

Awesome chapter. Can't wait to see how the phone conversation goes.

Logan is a total douche if he didn't notice her before why would he notice her now just because she changed herself for him. Jimmy is a great addition to the story he and the lead female seem to hit it off.

I like logan the best maybe flirt with justin.