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Title: Chapter 6

I love this story. So cute and realistic! Ups :)

 Reviewer: Jess Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 03 2012 10:43 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Where is the new chapter?



Author's Response:

It's posted now, I had to take it down because I had skipped over some large errors and it needed to be fixed up a little. Sorry about the confusion.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02 2012 02:28 am
Title: Chapter 6

Liking this story even more. Great update.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2012 02:22 am
Title: Chapter 6

It says you updated, was it just an edit on something?



Author's Response:

I did update and it's posted now, I had to take it down because I had skipped over some large errors and it needed to be fixed up a little. Sorry about the confusion.

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2012 01:57 am
Title: Chapter 6

These are the updates i live for. Long and AMAZING! The whole bra situation was great! Now that moms back home i want to see whats going happen. MORE PLEASE! 

 Reviewer: readlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2012 11:54 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Thanks for a great update. Wow Emery has gone from being a shy girl to shopping for lingerie with Logan. I was surprised that mom was home making Emery feel bad. Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2012 01:32 pm
Title: Chapter 6

good chapter but I missed Jimmy

 Reviewer: guest Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 13 2012 02:09 am
Title: Chapter 6

 I'm a big fan of the story and I don't think you need to change anything. The one thing I questioned was addressed in this last chapter and that was why she just didn't arrange to give the phone back after school one day. I liked the insight into why and I loved this chapter b/c there was so much more interaction with Logan. I think he really likes Em but he's scared of losing his friendship with Darrell b/c he doesn't really have any other stable relationships in his life. I've kind of vacillated back and forth but I really think that Jimmy is Justin and I think there's going to be a point where she has to choose. I'm liking them both and I hope that I'm wrong but the personalities are different.

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2012 01:59 am
Title: Chapter 6

absolutely brilliant!! And kudos to Logan for having such excellent taste...in video games ! lol! I love Max Payne... and Victoria Secret!

 Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 12 2012 02:19 pm
Title: Chapter 6

hahaha! this story keeps me laughing

 Reviewer: ChristinaElizabeth Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 12 2012 05:54 am
Title: Chapter 6

I love your story. I like how you put Logan's pov in this chapter. If anything I would say add more Emery and Logan interaction to your story other than that your story is great.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 12 2012 01:27 am
Title: Chapter 6

That was too funny, but Emery continues to piss me off.  There was no need for you have had an attitude with Logan or for that matter Sarah.  I love that Logan agreed to taking Emery shopping she is making progress.  I want to know what she wants from Logan, does want a relationship?  Is she just seeing if she can catch him and dump Logan?  I hope that isn't not the later, I like Logan he's cool people.!! Emery not so cool, it ain't cool playing games with people.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 11 2012 09:24 pm
Title: Chapter 6

I really like this story and hope you find more time to update it more. Also, adding a little more smut to the story wouldn't hurt either. I like reading into the mind of Logan, as well :)

 Reviewer: Joelle Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 11 2012 08:23 pm
Title: Chapter 6

I like the story. I suggest you move it along so they can get some action going. I like this update but I want more sizzle between Logan and emery! I think you are doing good so far just get them going more or being the person who has phone around to make Logan jealous. 

 Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11 2012 07:50 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Don't take that remark to heart. this story is a teenvfic. its something I would consider for my teen dsughter.  Keep up the good work.

 

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 11 2012 06:51 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Nothing about this story is cringe-worthy! It has a good flow and I personally enjoy it!

 Reviewer: DecemberUnrest Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 11 2012 06:43 pm
Title: Chapter 6

hahah died. Loved it lots, just a little sad jimmy wasnt in it but still awesome. Upload soon. like now. :)

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 11 2012 05:59 pm


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