Reviews For Make It Nasty
Title: Chapter 13

Oh, so now she realizes she didn't ever have a crush on Logan? Yeah, right! That's why she was losing it when she had to go over there ROTFLMFAO loves it!

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14 2013 05:56 pm

Title: Chapter 13

wish Logan would break up with stupid cassidy already...he adores emery right..

Reviewer: lizzie Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 17 2013 08:29 pm

Title: Chapter 13

I just read the story and it's amazing. Great work, please continue it, Logan and Emery's chemistry is spectacular. (He should have taken her in the tent...even though I see where he was coming from. Obviously his lost)

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2013 07:51 pm

Title: Chapter 13

"How could someone give life to another human being and not protect him- or repent for failing in doing so? How could a person overlook the fact that her daughter was being violated right underneath her very nose? How could a person not love a child?"

This. Makes me feel so bad for Em. And Darrell might start to suffer the same way since he's about to rebel and not be the "perfect" child anymore, well, as far as Dennis is concerned. I wonder about Dennis and Eden. Why would they have children? Or was it a case of making them look good to the public?

Yeah, Em, you're so over Logan. And what is up with Logan and Cassidy? And why was Cassidy staring so hard at Darrell? Is she concerned that he might remember where he'd seen her before? So many questions. Can't wait to get some of the answers.

Glad you know what you want to do with this story. Loving it. Well done, Chica

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2013 01:45 am

Title: Chapter 13

Great update

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2013 01:05 am

Title: Chapter 13

Yeah, Cassidy needs to disappear now.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2013 12:05 am

Title: Chapter 13

I don't like this Cassidy chick.  She seems more interested in Darrell than Logan.  I think she's a plant by Darrell and Emery's parents so that Logan is distracted by her and not by Emery.  If she wasn't a plant, why would she be so interested in what Darrell decides to do with his life?  She needs to go away.

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2013 07:52 pm

Title: Chapter 13

Great update! Although I feel like Emery and Darrell: what is going on with Logan and Cassidy? Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 12 2013 06:13 pm

Title: Chapter 13

The parents are evil, I so want Emery and Darrell to get away from them. This Cassidy chick needs to disappear as well as not sticking her nose in other people's business.  Shs' s a skank because she was chec king out Darrell.  Ho much?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2013 05:15 pm

Title: Chapter 13

I understand you do not want to drag it out because I hate to see a story end. But I really hope you have Logan and Emery together in the end. I really hope this Cassidy shows her true colors. All I say is please do not drag out the connection between Emery and Logan. The have danced around each other for to long. 

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12 2013 03:34 pm

Title: Chapter 13

Yay!!!! So happy for the update. I agree wiyh C. You did a great job with combining A and B. I am so curious as to the relationship Darrell has with his father.

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2013 03:07 pm

Title: Chapter 13

Thank you!! I was so excited to see an update to this story. Like you, I've fallen in love with the characters as well and hate to say goodbye to Em and Logan. This chapter was exciting bc she's back and we get a deeper look into her brother's thoughts and feelings. Their parents are still overbearing loonies. Logan is even hotter than 7mos ago but where is her text-mate? Cassidy is a mystery and I have my suspicions about her so I can't wait to read what you have planned. Always looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2013 01:51 pm



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