I really find it wholly unfair how Darell took it upon himself to dictate their relationship. They might've had a real chance if not for his interference.
And now 4 years later Darell's happy but what about them
Date: March 17 2015 02:27 pm
It took me a couple days to read this story and all I can think is its been 18 chapters and Emrey and Logan are still not together. Why? I can't tell you how disappointed I felt when i read chapter 18 and it said 4 years later. Seriously it's like torture with these characters, their wasting so much friggen time and letting outside influence ruin something that can be a genuine true love. I'm so pissed that Darrell her flipping twin would be so selfish and ruin his sister's happiness. He's a bad brother and even worse friend, who puts conditions on a friendship like that? So just because he was miserable everyone else had to be too, what a jackass. I'm really into this story but I feel like it's a disservice that we the readers are not getting or going to see these perfect people for each other in a relationship. It makes me sad &'pouty and all I can hope is that you update soon with some better progress of Emery and Logan being together. Please I'm DYING here!!!
Reviewer: RAPTUSMIND Signed
[Report This]Date: November 24 2014 11:52 am
Missing this, hope to see u soon :)
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 09 2013 03:59 am
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: AnnieNathanson Signed [Report This]Date: September 12 2013 09:18 pm
I love this story..have been following it since it was first put up. I have a little criticism though. When Emery was using 'make it nasty' and she had all this confidence, even though it was fake, I liked it. The way she acted, I mean. I get that that was high school and I wish she was confident in herself.It's not high school anymore. She has grown up, gone to college and travelled the world. I'd like to see her handle her own against logan. The way he spoke to her was so rude even after what she was going through. It seems that he always has the upper hand and she's always on the receiving end. I wish she was stronger, more confident and like a young woman. Yes, she still has a crush on him and so does he but she should have more control over their interactions. I wish it was a more even playing field. 4 years later, clean slate right?. Those are my thoughts. As I said, I love,love this story.
Reviewer: greencrescent Signed [Report This]Date: September 12 2013 08:05 pm
I spent my whole sick day reading this story and I love it!!! Can't wait to see what going to happened next!!
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: September 11 2013 02:08 am
So glad that Logan and Em's story is still continuing
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: September 09 2013 09:45 pm
There is no growth between Emery or Logan individually or together. Without that, it would be like you repeating the first half of the story with an older, not wiser or a more mature Emery.
Reviewer: Jacey Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 09 2013 03:15 pm
I'm glad you are back!!! I love Logan and Emery and I can't wait for them to finally get together :-)
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: September 09 2013 05:52 am
Emery, you had a crush on Logan but now it's love and he loves you too. I really want Darnell to be honest and tell you that he warned Logan against pursing his attraction. Darnell is the reason that you gave that ho Dixon a shot even though you still had feelings for Logan. So good!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 08 2013 11:41 pm
So glad your back. Great update can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!
Reviewer: cdy1216 Signed [Report This]Date: September 08 2013 11:15 pm