Reviews For Make It Nasty
Title: Chapter 5

Really awsome!!!!

Reviewer: Lilly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 25 2012 12:18 am

Title: Prologue

I don't know why it took so long for me to read this story but I am so glad that I did!! I love this story!! I also think that Logan is Jimmy but I can't tell if he knows that Em is Alisha. I guess he would be pretty slow not to know. But I love that twist. That is definitely going to cause some drama later on. Update soon please! This is my new addiction. 

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2012 11:51 pm

Title: Chapter 5

I really enjoyed this chapter!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Emerald Taurus Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 24 2012 11:48 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Thanks for the update.  I think that Logam is Jimmy.  I wonder why he is playing this game with Emery.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2012 11:22 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Thanks for a great update.  Emery is playing games.  I hope that this Jimmy person turns out to be nice and not a creeper.  As for her brother, I think that it is great that he is looking out for his sister even though she doesn't like it. 

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2012 11:13 pm

Title: Chapter 5

PLEASE KEEP JIMMY!!!!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 24 2012 10:34 pm

Title: Chapter 5

I loved it and I aint gonna lie Logan is sexy but Jimmy all the way!!!

Reviewer: guest Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 24 2012 06:58 pm

Title: Chapter 5

I know Jimmy is Logan, but I'll keep pretending he isn't for 'Alisha.' LOVED the teli conversation, but especially Logan and Emery in the bathroom, that was really cute and yummy! He is so feeling him some Emery.

I don't know about anyone else but I can do away with her trying out for cheerleading. She couldn't force herself to like it for her mother and she shouldn't do it for a guy either, no matter how hard she's crushing on him. I'm down with trying something new to get the guy but she shouldn't lose herself in doing so. Change herself completely for a dude? Um no! Total turn off for me. 

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 24 2012 06:38 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Of course I enjoy particularly since "Alisha" (LOL) is rooting for Lebron to get his ring! And Oh My, that scene between Logan and Em in the bathroom was HOTTTT! Love the chapter! Love how she just gushes about Logan which is so out of character but I love it because it fits so well!!!!

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2012 06:07 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Jimmy is soooo Logan...but I'm loving it (so please don't change it just 'cause I just wrote it, plus I'm pretty sure a lot of your readers have already figured that out). Anyway, I liked the Logan/Emery interaction in this chapter so keep it coming!

Changing the subject...yeah I was really sad for Durant but I'm so freaking glad LBJ finally has his ring! He really deserved it and I hope that will shut the haters up!

Reviewer: Sally Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 24 2012 06:03 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Miami did a great job!!!!!<3

Reviewer: idiotendenial Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2012 05:43 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Logan is catching somr feelings but I have such a bad feeling! Emery is going to end up being the loser because of thr game playing. She likes Jimmy as mire than a friend but is in denial. I jyst hope that she doesn't ruin Ligan's frienddhip with her brother. Another great update.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2012 03:45 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Why does Emery tell Jimmy her name was Alisha? ...I'm really dumb founded by this.
I truly love this story though can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response:

She is going for a sense of anonymity, she believes it'd be dangerous to tell a stranger her name. Thank you for reading! :)

Reviewer: grlgrl7 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2012 09:47 am

Title: Chapter 4

Im excited and cant wait to read more:)

Reviewer: Diamond Signed [Report This]
Date: June 24 2012 07:25 am

Title: Prologue

Awesome chapter. Can't wait to see how the phone conversation goes.

Reviewer: jmary_84 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22 2012 04:40 am

Title: Chapter 4

Oh no a cliffhanger lol! Well I wanna read more :-) 

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2012 11:55 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Aahaah!! i love this story!

Reviewer: Autumn Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2012 01:07 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Emery is going to fool around and create a rift in her brother and Logan's friendship.  I am really liking Logan but Jimmy seems so sweet.  Who will she choose in the end?  I can't wait to find out.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2012 11:42 pm

Title: Prologue

Love it. I think Logan has always liked her. I think he's afraid bc of her brother. He's always making remarks which makes me think he has stronger feelings for her that he lets on. I kind of think Logan might have her phone.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 20 2012 08:22 pm

Title: Prologue

Logan is a total douche if he didn't notice her before why would he notice her now just because she changed herself for him. Jimmy is a great addition to the story he and the lead female seem to hit it off.

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 20 2012 04:52 pm

Title: Chapter 4

More.

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2012 04:22 pm

Title: Chapter 4

aaaaaahhhhhhhhhh Don't do that to me!!! Great update! Love the relationship between Emery and Darrell...hell and Logan for that matter. Can't wait for the parents to get home.

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2012 02:40 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I like Jimmy in the story. I can't wait to find out where this is going to go. I can't decide whether I want her to end up with Logan or with Jimmy though but I think that's because it's too soon. Either way, I'm enjoying :)

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2012 02:36 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Are you kidding me? Jimmy is the Gossip girl of the story. He adds a whole new element to the teen romance plot going on. Mysterious characters are interesting especially when the reader learns about them the same time as the main protagonist.

I for one can't wait to find out more about this Jimmy and how he will impact on Emery's life.

Reviewer: AwesomeWonder Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2012 01:56 pm

Title: Chapter 4

i agree i like that emery has a 2nd option, but i feel the lead up is way too long. or i'm just being impatient lol.

Reviewer: dounome Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2012 07:50 am



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