I love your story. So much so that I'm about to read your other one. I really like your writing style and creative ideas.
As to who she should be with? I don't know. But, I'll have a hell of a time reading whomever gets a chance to spend and ounce of time with Emery, she's lovely inside and out.
BTW, I also think Logan likes her, it's pretty obvious if you ask me. The ice cream was a dead giveaway and the 'heart' gift backed it up. I would not be surprised if he had it bad for her all these years. I love unrequited love from the hero's persective **hint hint**
Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed
[Report This]Date: June 15 2012 02:49 am
This is the first "Teen or Above" story that I've ever been interested in reading. So far so good. I guess I don't always have to have hot butt naked sex to stay interested in a story.... Who Knew....LOL!!!
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: June 12 2012 05:40 am
I'm loving your story. Logan has a thing for Emery I think he has for a long time. You call by the way he acts when her brother isn't around or how he always stealing quick glances at her. I can't wait to read more of the story.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 11 2012 03:33 pm
hahaha, i knew i was going to love this story and this update pretty much confirmed it! loved the interaction between Logan and Emery, i'm glad she dared to step out and flirted with him!
hell yeah, I LOOK FORWARD TO MUCH MORE!!!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: June 11 2012 10:51 am
It's so funny cos I think Logan is a turd. I wish Emery had a little more attitude cos girl she swaggin' down low low
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 11 2012 10:09 am
I like logan the best maybe flirt with justin.
Reviewer: Kaye_kaye77 Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 10 2012 09:39 pm
Emery is playing with fire, but I'm really interested in this story. The more the merrier.
Emery has a crush on Logan and it goes back to way before he got fine. The flashback about the paper heart might provide a clue as to how Logan feels about her. I think the only reason he doesn't pursue her is because of his relationship with Darrell. She might not be in love with him, but he is her first crush and she sees him every day and that has not died down. Maybe, she does need a distraction as he seems to be the only guy she's ever thought about.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed
[Report This]Date: June 10 2012 08:14 pm
I don't understand Emery, if she isn't in love with Logan then why risk his relationship with her brother? Emery think about Logan as Darrell already said something about Logan not winking at his sister. I am glad that Justin hasn't shown up yet because doesn't seem to above using people to get what she wants. I can see Emery learning more about herself during this transformation and her attempt at seducing Logan. The question is, will she like what she sees? Great chapter!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 10 2012 06:49 pm
She will start liking the new guy to both her twin and Logan's dismay. She just need an distraction other than Logan right now. I'm not sure who I want her to be with yet need more info on this mysterious guy.
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: June 10 2012 06:13 pm
Love it! Keep it coming! I want to read it from Logan's point if view. I know he likes her. Jelaously is a good thing!
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: June 10 2012 05:32 pm
Logan all the way, Jason as a good new friend. He can help her get her man.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: June 10 2012 03:59 pm
I'm liking Jimmy, their text convo is effortless. With Logan comes a whole lot of arrogance.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 10 2012 02:37 pm
Thanks for a great update. I can't wait to see who the mystery person is. AS for Logan I guess he finally saw Emery as a girl.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: June 10 2012 01:45 pm
Good update. I think that Logan does like Emery and for that Julia chick to state that they think that she is a lesbian was mean. At least she stated that they were eye sexing each other. To bad it is her twins friend that she is interested in because her brother is very protective of her. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: June 10 2012 01:20 pm
I think that Logan likes Emery. The way that he watch her eat the ice cream. She needs a make over to look like a girl instead of one of the boys. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: June 10 2012 12:50 pm
Great start to the story. Logan doesn't seem like he is worth all the effort that Emery is willing to go through to get his attention. I can't wait to read what the instructions are from the book. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: June 10 2012 12:31 pm
I'm loving this so far & I cannot wait to see how everything turns out. Emery you better prove to all the Julia's and Logan wrong. I know you can & you will end up with Mr. Logan. Update again soon. Loving the plot.
Author's Response:
Thank you!!! :) And Emery will definitely take that advice! ;)
Reviewer: Vava Signed [Report This]Date: June 10 2012 06:02 am
I know what you mean but I wanted to know how he feels. He is keeping his distance bc he's BFs with her brother.
I guess I hadn't to be patient : -D
Author's Response:
:) I'll see what I can do!
Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed [Report This]Date: June 10 2012 03:39 am
Your story is going to have me feening for more for a good minute.....I really like the way that you write.....I am in love your your writing!
Author's Response:
I'm glad to hear that! :) Thank you for reading! And thanks, it means a lot to me that you like my writing style! :)
Reviewer: ChristinaElizabeth Signed [Report This]Date: June 10 2012 03:39 am
Ok bring it on! I like it and can't wait to see the jealousy from Logan!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! :)
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: June 09 2012 01:47 pm
Logan is definitely digging her. I can't wait for her to make out nasty.
Are you writing Logan's POV?
Author's Response:
!!! Thanls for the review! He def is! And I don't think I will be at this point. Maybe in the future. This is third person, so you'll probably see a little bit of Logan's thoughts, but I don't want everything he's feeling to be like "BAM!" Element of surprise kind of thing, ya know?
Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed [Report This]Date: June 09 2012 01:03 pm
Yes ma'am! I can tell this story is about to get intense and I cannot wait. I love your writing style.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! It means a lot to me that you like my style of writing! :)
Reviewer: teaukeri Signed [Report This]Date: June 09 2012 07:41 am
Loving it!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!! :)
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: June 09 2012 04:37 am
Holy shit this is good :) I picture Logan as Harry Styles for some reason, especially with the whole accent thing :P Keep up the good work luv!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Logan's a little darker than Harry eye wise. I'm glad you like it so far! :)
Reviewer: leahbaby Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 09 2012 12:21 am
You had me when I saw that you had casted Christian Kane as Logan!! I love that man with his short self!!! I am liking Emery, but get the program chica. A girl can be comfortable without dressing a like a boy. That little moan and what you has gotten Logan's attention. Please get rid of Julia she is an annoying little ho!!! Love Darrell but he will have stroke when they get together.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! Although, I'm not sure when I casted Christian Kane... But I'm glad you've enjoyed the story so far! :)
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 08 2012 10:18 pm