Option A please

A PLEASE OPTION A AND GET RID OF THIS CHELSEA GIRL

OH ITS CASSIDY

You really had me going from the previous chapter then I read this and I'm like...hold up, hold up, HOLD UP! I thought we were getting into the Emery/Logan hookup stage. She was talking losing her V card to him and now I get this...hot mess! I don't like it one bit (except the cat part which was super adorable that he wants to take care of her pet while she's gone). I'm definitely for whatever option that won't drag this story out. Authors create timelines for a reason. I think it is pointless at this point for Emery to be in London and Logan to even have a girlfriend. I had a WTF moment...like, he seriously has a girlfriend??? Emery should be back NOW seeing as she shouldn't have ever gone there for any amount of time. Her going there and him having some random ass girl I don't give a damn about is stupid, period. That just made me want to stop reading altogether because I know it'll be futile chapters of nothing just to get to what I want in the end: them realizing they've been connecting this whole time since the phone switch, that they're obviously feeling one another and actually DO something about it(which all could've been reached in 3-4 more chapters).

I think the sooner you uncomplicate things between them the better it will be for the story. Bringing a third party between them-when they've figured out their feelings for each other- will drag out the story. They need to continue messaging until they figure out they are communicating with each other. Maybe Comet will play matchmaker ;).

b

I think you should go with 'A' just to keep moving.

Hi! Welcome back!!  I really like this story.  I wold go with Option B just to know more of Logan's POV.  We know more about how Emery liked Logan, not as much about how Logan likes Emery.  Not only that, but to learn more about Emery's life during the summer at her grandma's and also in boarding school too and how much she likes or hates it.  I hope that helped.  Can't wait for the next update.

B, especially if you update more. :)

Seriously though, I loved this chapter because it was Logan's POV and it was good to see that he does have feelings for Emery. It wasn't clear, but now it is.

I do want her to come back for Christmas. Now, whether they're able to resolve anything is another story. I just want them in the same room and maybe talk, because so far, it's been a hit and a miss between them. And plus Emery's home situation needs to be dealt with. That is more pressing to me than Emery and Logan are. I feel so bad for Emery. She seems so alone. And to be so far away from home. It feels as if she's been banished and the only folks who care that she is away is Logan and her brother. How can her parents be so cold?

B!! :)

Definitely option B. You are too good of a writer to rush through this story. Character and plot development are the core to an interesting story, and so far you have both. Part 1 mostly focused on Emery, so its only natural that part 2 will give us readers some insight on exactly who Logan Isley is (proving or disproving his worth). Personally, I like Logan. I also think some readers forgot that these are high school students with family problems we're dealing with here. Of course there's going to be some naivety, confusion and angst involved (not saying all teens are like that lol)

I would prefer A rather than B because I would like for them to get on the with their feelings for one another. They can finally exchange phones. Darrell needs to let Logan know that he doesn't mind him being with his sister as long as he treats her right. I hope you get what you need so that you can update this story comfortably.

I choose A shorten and bring back emery. doing a great job.