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Title: K is for Kisses

Go AJ! Esther let the man extremely like you, please!

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2012 11:58 pm
Title: K is for Kisses

I like,   Cant wait to see what happens next

 Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2012 10:31 pm
Title: K is for Kisses

I love that Esther's dream turned into a wonderful reality.  A.J. is so good for her but I just that she would tell A.J. that she  is legally still married to her abusive ex-husband.  I want to her grow and become comfortable in her own skin.  I would love for Esther to finally tell her mother and father to go to hell and that she neither needs or wants them in her life.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2012 10:06 pm
Title: J is for Jinxed

love ur story..the text i fine dnt worry about it...could u break the paragraphs a bit more often with shorter paras tat would be great and easier to read..keep up the good work...this story is amazing and touching...update soon!!!!!!!!

 Reviewer: lila Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2012 07:50 am
Title: J is for Jinxed

Lol,  don't you dare end this with no meteor or that will be my little black car following you.  Love the update I can't wait to see what happens next I love the way A.J is seeking help to help her.

 Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02 2012 09:55 pm
Title: J is for Jinxed

wow love this chapter...wish AJ got to know more about the causes for esthers pain and troubles..wish he would get esthers phone and contact esthers mom or try to hunt down william or the people who seem to be following her...he's as FBI aent that wouldnt be too hard..i wish so much that esther would open up and reveal to AJ the pain and torment her mother and william had causd her...dying to see esther reactions and feelings afer sleeping with AJ...update soon!!!!!!!!!!

 Reviewer: shani Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2012 06:57 pm
Title: J is for Jinxed

Thanks for not giving into that evil little voice! So glad that finally got it on... Now she knows that sex can be really good.

 Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2012 06:34 pm
Title: J is for Jinxed

Great update.. and now Esther knows what  is like to MAKE LOVE to a man thats not SELFISH in bed and thinking of only HIS pleasure...AJ is  a REAL MAN.

 Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 02 2012 02:45 pm
Title: J is for Jinxed

A.J is so sweet to Ester.! and got damn what a sex seen

 

loved it!

 Reviewer: dope. Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 02 2012 02:01 pm
Title: J is for Jinxed

E's mother is up to something that isn't good, I like that Esther is slowly opening up to AJ and hopefully he will give WILLIAM  the beat down that he deserves for what he did to E... For some strange reason I have a feeling that Esther is going to get pregnant by AJ (LOVE IT), but seriously she needs to tell him about punk ass william... Love this story and can't wait for you to post more chapters.

 Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2012 12:37 pm
Title: J is for Jinxed

I really enjoyed this chapter! Esther needed to know what making love was about and I hope and pray she gets pregnant!

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2012 05:31 am
Title: J is for Jinxed

Thanks for a great update.  To bad her psycho mother found her. I bet that she has someone following her. At least she has a friend in AJ. 

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2012 05:13 am
Title: J is for Jinxed

they did it lol but serioulsy her mother is so rude!!! hopefully aj can help esther better herself n now that i think bout it we have the same name COOL

 Reviewer: esther Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 02 2012 04:07 am
Title: J is for Jinxed

Her mother found her, why does she torment Esther like that?  I feel so bad for Esther, how did her sisters escape their parents emotionally abuse?  I want the parents to pay cosmically and for William to pay by going to jail.  I know that A.J. can make that last happen but Esther has to open up to him.  I love this story!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2012 03:39 am
Title: J is for Jinxed

So glad AJ, didn't leave. She may not have survived, if she had sliced her wrist this time. What they did was more than proper, having someone make love to you and make sure you feel all there is to feel, and not just taking care of his own pleasure. No way in hell would I go back home. Is there anyway for AJ to trace that call, she got from mom? Loved it, it was HOT!

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2012 03:18 am
Title: I is for Intimacy Issues

Wow, Esther sure took a lot from that scumbag of a husband. Hope he gets what's coming to him. Also hope both him and his family are exposed for the cruel person he is.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2012 07:57 am
Title: I is for Intimacy Issues

Please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 Reviewer: MI97 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 29 2012 07:00 am
Title: I is for Intimacy Issues

Excellent chapter. But it"s becoming more and more difficult to read about the brutal beatings physicaliy and mentally Esther took. I know justice will prevail, but I really don't know how much more I can bear to read about Esther's past. I hope that if you do decide to write in a coma, it's Williams ass thats in it...... ps hopefully Esther can learn some moves from AJ. Her beating Williams ass and her Moms would be good therapy.....

 Reviewer: VAL1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 29 2012 02:12 am
Title: I is for Intimacy Issues

It was hard reading that 1st paragraph. Poor Esther! William is a disgusting piece of garbage! She really needs to let AJ in. The man cares for her.

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2012 04:54 pm
Title: I is for Intimacy Issues

ohmygosh ohmygosh ohmygosh, they kissed! Wonderful.
I love how AJ is so tender yet firm with her, making him all the more sexy...can't wait for next chap :)

 Reviewer: anomy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2012 04:43 pm
Title: I is for Intimacy Issues

nice update to your story,,,,,please update soon

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 23 2012 08:19 am
Title: I is for Intimacy Issues

A.J is soooo hot! Love the interaction between him and Esther!

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 23 2012 06:28 am
Title: I is for Intimacy Issues

Thanks for the great update.... AJ is starting to take down Esther's wall brick by brick, IMO he is just what she has needed all along.

I also fell that Esther is not barren at all, she can have a child.. when the time is right, she will have a baby.. AJ's baby... and for what I read, William seems to need to have a child to get an inheritence or something, the man is EVIL and SELFISH, and need to BURN with GASOLING UNDERWEAR on.

Can't wait for more.

 Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2012 03:49 am
Title: I is for Intimacy Issues

The beating that she endured from her husband was so sad. As for AJ I don't understand why he continues to push her unto something with him. Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2012 01:51 am
Title: I is for Intimacy Issues

Poor Esther she has been abused all of life, it was mental and emotionally abuse from her parents.  Her sisters were her only source of happiness as a child.  Then that ahole William is a psychopath who needs to buried under the jail.  He caused to her loose their baby and her mother wants her back with that psycho, what a piece of work she his.  A.J. you are pushing Esther and it may cause to loose what's left of her mind.  Tread carefully A.J.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2012 12:28 am


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