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Title: The PTA Members(Characters)

I'm having a hard time rooting for AJ. I don't feel any empathy coming from him. He is just pushing and pushing Ester with very little consideration for her feelings. It would be okay if Ester was just a woman scared of love but this is a woman who has dealt with a lifetime of abuse from not only her husband but her parents. He sees that she cuts herself and he now knows she is suffering nightmares, but he wants to be a open book after how many years of knowing her? oh right, he just met her. This is a great story but Aj's pushiness without at least making her feel comfortable or being a friends with her is making me uncomfortable. 

 Reviewer: choklit Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 22 2012 11:21 pm
Title: The PTA Members(Characters)

Great update, I can't wait for AJ to break down more of her defenses and make her really live life. I hope there will be a scene where Ester gets to beat the crap out of her Husband.   I foresee a divorce from William and marriage to A.j. ( well I'm hoping for that)

 Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2012 08:10 pm
Title: I is for Intimacy Issues

I'd loved to know how his no good behind got away with it. I kept wondering how would a mom contiue to push her dughter towards a man that bet her. Slowly but surely AJ is breaking it down. William must die. She might as well stop pretending, she felt a whole lot and will feel a whole lot more if she lets, or when she lets him in.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2012 08:10 pm
Title: I is for Intimacy Issues

I'll be glad when she tells him her story!

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2012 07:53 pm
Title: I is for Intimacy Issues

I love these two characters and how they interact and engage with each other. Update!!!!!!!!!

 Reviewer: MI97 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 22 2012 07:46 pm
Title: I is for Intimacy Issues

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE, LOL! 
Ugh, simply too good :')
Hopefully their relationship blossoms and gets even more spicy as the story develops ;D

 Reviewer: EMY Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2012 07:25 pm
Title: F is for Family

Wow she has so much pain...I hope she really starts to trust Andrew 

 Reviewer: MeganRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2012 11:04 am
Title: H is for Hurricane

Lordy, I hope she loosens up enough to get some "good lovin'" from a real man and not a monster.  No one should go through life thinking that's what sex is like.

 Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2012 06:07 pm
Title: H is for Hurricane

Ohmygosh thiswas absolutely cute, i love their interaction and Esther's awkwardness, it make her all innocent...cant wait for next upload

 Reviewer: flowerpot Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 16 2012 12:55 pm
Title: H is for Hurricane

I love this chapter. Yes Eshter is loosening up I hope things get better for her. I'm glad Aj is there to help her.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2012 09:51 pm
Title: H is for Hurricane

Great, a chapter that finally gave us a breath from some of Esthers kaos. I believe once Esther gets that first orgasum from AJ, homegirl will go through a change that will light a fire under her mothers and Williams asses. Can't wait....

 Reviewer: VAL1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 15 2012 09:04 pm
Title: G is for Gnashed

Why do I have this doomed feeling that something went down between William and Rosario???

 Reviewer: Darqchild Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 15 2012 07:31 pm
Title: H is for Hurricane

Esther needs so much work. To be so happy to be able to eat pizza without feeling guilty, that is so sad. AJ stay very close to her, trouble is on the way. I would report that teacher, she is not doing her job.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2012 04:11 pm
Title: H is for Hurricane

Let me make a guess, will I stands for INTIMATE?? Love AJ and Esther.

 Reviewer: Romantic Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2012 09:59 am
Title: H is for Hurricane

I believe AJ, as an FBI agent, has come across all sorts of people, but a proper lady will most likely be his first. Will be interesting and fun to see how he is going to handle Esther's fragility without frightening her away.

Thanks for your regular updates. This is sure becoming one of my top five favorites !!!

 Reviewer: JustMe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2012 09:49 am
Title: H is for Hurricane

Thank you for updating. This is an amazing story and I can't wait for the next chapter to be posted. =)

 Reviewer: SeekingVirtue17 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2012 08:32 am
Title: H is for Hurricane

Loving the story so far!! Glad AJ has an interest in her and seems up to the challenge.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2012 08:12 am
Title: H is for Hurricane

Thanks for the update... it seems that Esther is staring to let herself gp a little around AJ.. who would have thoght that something as simple as a PIZZA could make Esther act like a kid... thanks to her incubator she never got to be a kid.

I hope that AJ COMPLETELY breaks down her WALLS.

 Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 15 2012 05:57 am
Title: G is for Gnashed

omg that bastard, maybe it was his fault she can't get pregnant she needs a second opinion

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2012 05:31 am
Title: F is for Family

Very interesting

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2012 05:13 am
Title: E is for Eager

I love how bossy and demanding AJ is lol

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2012 04:36 am
Title: H is for Hurricane

I liked this chapter... Wow never had pizza.  Why didn't she divorce that abuser? I hope she tells AJ what has happened to her.  She needs to be delivered from her family...(that mother of hers)

 Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2012 01:15 am
Title: The PTA Members(Characters)

first,welcome to the nursing sisterhood. second i love this story. esther is loosening and i like it. hopefully she can tell aj about her past. is esther still married to avery? lastly, as long as u update, i dont care how long the chapter is. thanks for a dynamic story.

 Reviewer: zetacrave Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2012 10:10 pm
Title: H is for Hurricane

its so nice to see esther loosening up....her fear and insecurities reveal the torment she went through in her life...im dying to see AJ and esther fall madly in love with each other...its impossible not to love someone so innocent and kind hearted like esther....I'd like to see AJ helping to make esther feel more open and free...love ur story...update soon!!!!!

 Reviewer: shani Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2012 09:09 pm
Title: H is for Hurricane

more, more, more !!!!!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2012 08:48 pm


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