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Title: F is for Family

Their mom is evil. Ester let AJ help you. Avery should be next because she don't as ok as everyone think she is.

 Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08 2012 10:47 am
Title: F is for Family

Great update. I would like to read Avery's story.

 Reviewer: Kaci Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 08 2012 10:43 am
Title: E is for Eager

Great update~

 Reviewer: Kaci` Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 08 2012 10:33 am
Title: F is for Family

i want more!!!

 Reviewer: rachel Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2012 09:52 am
Title: F is for Family

Hope somebody will bust Momma Botox in the face! Yes, I am advocating violence against evil asses!  I hope the family gets taken down by Esther and Rosario!

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2012 07:36 am
Title: F is for Family

Those people are evil and should be wearing gasoline draws to help them burn when they go to hell.  Esther let A.J. in before your crazy family finds you.  Great update!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2012 05:20 am
Title: F is for Family

Well mommie dearest is in for a rude awakening, when she finds Esther. AJ will be a force to be reckoned with. Thanks for the update.

Avery then Rosario. She seems like she needs some help getting out of a loveless marriage and the crazy mom.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2012 03:58 am
Title: F is for Family

Do a story on Rosario...Avery follows behind her mother.

The mother is a mess, I hope she doesn't get to Esther. So, Esther is yet married to that abusive cheating no good man, who needs a good beat down.

Thanks for the update.  Please give Esther some strength...she needs to rise out of her pit of despare she was raised in.

 Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2012 03:54 am
Title: E is for Eager

You're right a little cheesy....But I'll take it for now.) As long as we get that spanking for Esther from AJ...and a can of whip ass for William. Hey Rhianna is spunky enough to play Rosario, Im not sure about Avery yet,,,,

 Reviewer: VAL1 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2012 06:51 am
Title: E is for Eager

This was not cheesy but pretty awesome!!!!  I'm loving this Alpha male... I think Jasmine Guy would make a great stuck up sister or mother, not sure about who should be the baby of the family.  Either way, so glad I took the time to read this....  Please update soon.

 Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2012 05:45 am
Title: E is for Eager

I have been rereading this story since I first read it a couple of days ago, and I have to just say, wow. I really like the dynamic between these two main characters. You did an excellent job of putting together an interesting plot with two characters that seem really made for each other.

 

Please update soon!

 Reviewer: MI97 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 07 2012 01:34 am
Title: E is for Eager

Interesting turn of events. Hope he really can help Esther. Loved the update.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2012 06:13 am
Title: E is for Eager

AJ may be just what she needs! I'm enjoying the story!

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2012 02:54 am
Title: E is for Eager

I love that A.J. is stepping up to the plate.  A lot of other men would have witnessed that scene in the store & ran screaming for the hills.  The love of a good man can help tremendously!  

 Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2012 02:10 am
Title: E is for Eager

 Omg I totally love the story, wooooh I love a man that takes charge! I see rosario as like a fe fe dobson type of chick and avery as like a tyra banks type

Reviewer: UnKnownBeauty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2012 02:02 am
Title: D is for Determination

I hope she keeps that promise!

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2012 01:00 am
Title: C is for Compromise

I like it so far!

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2012 12:06 am
Title: B is for Background Checks

I want to know more about Esther and how she got to be this way!

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2012 11:56 pm
Title: A is for Aprehensive

Good start!

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2012 11:49 pm
Title: E is for Eager

Damn A.J. slow your roll!! You are freaking Esther out with sexy, mind, numbing panty wetting kisses.  I had to fan myself when I read that.  A.J. is going to help Esther whether she wants him to or not.   Love a man who won't take no for answer especially when he's as well put together as A.J.  Love me some A.J.!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2012 10:22 pm
Title: E is for Eager

You should have zoe kravitiz be rosario. She has an edge to her.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 05 2012 08:30 pm
Title: E is for Eager

This story is great.  Could you please, please make your chapters longer?

 Reviewer: Stories Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2012 07:49 pm
Title: The PTA Members(Characters)

I don't understand the attraction for AJ since the only things he knows about Esther are that she has dissociative fugues, is self-destructive and on heavy medication. 

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 05 2012 07:46 pm
Title: E is for Eager

OMG - this story absolutely amazing - I love it. Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeease update soon!

 Reviewer: katie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2012 07:42 pm
Title: E is for Eager

Wow. I love this story already. Please update!!!!!!

 Reviewer: MI97 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 05 2012 07:06 pm


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