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Title: N is for Narcissism

What? This chapter is to short to make a judgement, please make chapters a little longer and more details.  Alot of us have been wait for updates on this story, I absolutely love thi8s story but it too short and when get exciting you cut it off.,  Please, update soon

Love this story

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 21 2012 10:39 am
Title: N is for Narcissism

AJ you have kicked opened a hornets nets and Esther is going to pay.  I hope that she forgives becasue will be responsible for her abusive husband finding her.  All of those people are crazy and I want them to pay for the hurt that they have caused Esther.  Love this story!!

If the chapters were longer, would the updates be as interspersed as these updates have been?  If the updates get any further apart then I will reread the story with each update.  LOL

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 21 2012 07:59 am
Title: N is for Narcissism

As long as you're writing I'm down for either. But since its Christmas, how about a long one soon? ;p 

Hope your holidays are great! Thanks for sharing your talent.

 Reviewer: kimloanies Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 21 2012 07:36 am
Title: N is for Narcissism

Yep. Def. more updates--even at the expense of shorter lengths. Thanks!

 Reviewer: MI97 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 21 2012 07:35 am
Title: The PTA Members(Characters)

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!! LIKE OMFG. This story is so fabulous and Esther and Andrew are so cute! I so tots think she's gonna end up pregnant. 

 Reviewer: Carlee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2012 10:31 pm
Title: M is for Medical History

Yay you finally uploaded ! 

 

 Reviewer: Gh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 24 2012 04:55 pm
Title: M is for Medical History

Hey you're back... Thanks for that special Thanksgiving read..I had hoped you hadn't forgotten about us and had given up on this juicy story:) Loved it, but will be all so glad when these bastards get whats coming to them. Each and everylast one of them. Please let AJ stomp William's ass in the ground and put dear old mommy dearest in a straight jacket. This is my christmas wish...lol

 Reviewer: VAL1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 23 2012 02:33 am
Title: M is for Medical History

Great update! Hope he finds more and who the bad people are.

 Reviewer: aprilfool Signed [Report This]
Date: November 18 2012 03:55 am
Title: M is for Medical History

I hope A.J is able to find out what happened to Esther soon! I love the relationship between Esther and A.J it's so sweet and fragile! Can't wait for more!

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 15 2012 04:15 am
Title: M is for Medical History

OMG what a long wait...loved the chapter though..dying to see AJ learn more about esthers sufferings in the past so that he can help her....plzz update soon!!!!!!

 Reviewer: lizzie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2012 03:50 am
Title: M is for Medical History

ohmigosh please. I am addicted to this

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 15 2012 02:27 am
Title: M is for Medical History

Interesting!! Wonder how deep this plot goes? Hope AJ blasts the lid off the deceptions!!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2012 02:00 am
Title: M is for Medical History

It's a good thing that A.J. is a Agent as he just made things worse for Esther. Her family and her husband are evil and need to die. not the sisters but definitely the mom and the hubby. Please don't make us wait to long on another update.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2012 01:12 am
Title: M is for Medical History

I knew the elite have their secrets but now that AJ has lit the fire it will only spread until it consumes everthing in sight. At this point there is only moving forward. Ester will have to face her past but as long as she has AJ by her side she will come through. I hope that AJ shows no mercy towards those who controlled her and told her to turn the left cheek. Excellent update.

 Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 14 2012 09:39 pm
Title: M is for Medical History

I'm glad to see this update on this story. I understand he wanted to make sure that she safe but going behind her back not good. He should trusted that she would told him the truth at some point.  It crazy what her family and husband treated her all those years that she broken but think with AJ help she fight them all. Thank for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2012 03:47 pm
Title: M is for Medical History

Nice update and please update soon .

 Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2012 02:19 pm
Title: M is for Medical History

oh dear, i think that phone call may have been a very bad idea

 Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2012 01:44 pm
Title: M is for Medical History

Very interesting...Thank you.

 Reviewer: Lindy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2012 09:49 am
Title: M is for Medical History

Well, well, well. This story has turned a bit more interestering. I can see this is going to get a big ugly, but somehow, I think AJ can crack this puzzle. I'm glad you were able to update this story. I was getting worried for a bit, and held me tong, but good to see that you're back. Please update often if you can. I really love these two characters and their relationship and that is really what makes this story great. You have a really good plot, I must say. I don't know how you authors' come up with this stuff, but all I can do is tell you how much I appreciate the work. Until next time. 

 

MI97

 Reviewer: MI97 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 14 2012 07:55 am
Title: L is for Leftovers

Kmaj!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What's up girl?? I've been looking for an update to this story for a while. I've tried to be patient but I can't help it any longer. Please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I really love this story and these two characters and I want to see how they end up.

 

Please, please, pretty please. Thank you in advance.

 Reviewer: MI97 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 13 2012 06:57 pm
Title: The PTA Members(Characters)

please update soon

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 11 2012 04:28 pm
Title: L is for Leftovers

As tense as things are i know that there is a silver lining and things will work out in the end.

 Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 09 2012 07:21 pm
Title: L is for Leftovers

OMG! This story is just f**king awesome, the writing is amazing, so rich! I love it so much, so update soon, pretty please!

 Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 19 2012 05:56 pm
Title: L is for Leftovers

AMAZING! I read all of this in one night and it's amazing! 

 Reviewer: Lola Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 18 2012 05:06 am
Title: L is for Leftovers

Good chapter. I know Esther has everyright to be afraid after what she has gone through with her family. The very people that are suppose to love and protect you. But out of that fear, came the instint and strenght to try and forge a whole new life. Now she has to call on that strenght for the courage to stand her ground and not let anyone stand in her way to be her own person. It's time Esther, now or never. AJ is there to help you.

 Reviewer: VAL1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 18 2012 02:54 am


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