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Title: Chapter 20

Woooooooow!! Is all i can say.... That was just... Woooooow!! .... Nuff said... Update soonest please

 Reviewer: Hawtgurl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2013 10:11 pm
Title: Chapter 20

Jason asked her to marry him so I don't think your being pregnant will be a problem.  He obliously loves you and you love him Keyshia so don't be stupid!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2013 09:38 pm
Title: Chapter 20

Great update. I love these two together.

 Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2013 07:12 pm
Title: Chapter 20

I hope he's happy about the pregnancy. I hate this story is coming to an end. I've really enjoyed it.

 Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11 2013 04:58 pm
Title: Chapter 20

love it

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2013 04:57 pm
Title: Chapter 20

Hi just want to say enjoy the update second I don't know if you  look but you some your words  in this chapter are getting cut off so thought you should know. Now I'm so glad that Jason finaly saw his mother  he seems very happy and i think dad is still in love with Jason mom too. Now their going to have a baby wow. I wonder what Jason reaction going to be? thank for the update.



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for the review!! I tried changing the margins so many times and I just changed them after you wrote this. I hope it looks right now :(

 

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2013 03:32 pm
Title: Chapter 19

She pregnant!!!!!!

 Reviewer: Reader Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 04 2013 09:30 pm
Title: Chapter 12

Thanks for fixing the margins :).

I was hoping to read how Mary's hubby responded to the makeover LOL.

 Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2013 03:50 pm
Title: Chapter 1

This story is so unique and unpredictable. I couldn't stop reading please update soon.

I hope he finds his mom anf that his dad find happiness.

 Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2013 03:45 pm
Title: Chapter 12

Please adjust the margins on chapter 12. The left part is cut off and cant be read on the phone.



Author's Response:

gotcha! i'll do that right away :)

 Reviewer: 100%Fan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 03 2013 02:03 pm
Title: Chapter 19

Jason's father is an asswipe and a racist to boot!! What the hell was a Cynthia's visit about?  What did Cynthia and Jasmine show up?   How cruel, I hope that something really bad happens to those two women because they don't deserve anything good to happen to them.  Great update, I thought that I had left a review.  Lol

Thanks for this amazing udate!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2013 07:12 am
Title: Chapter 19

Her Grandmother and cousin sure have a lot of nerve! Pregnant Keyshia. I hope she tells Jason and I believe he will be happy.

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 02 2013 05:28 pm
Title: Chapter 19

Damn, I knew people were a trip, but damn. First his father and that "she is not good enough" BS, then her grandmother with her sneaky, money hungry, prejudice, wanna be ass, trying to play the guilt/synpothy trip on Keyshia. You have to do something really ugly to them two, and quickly!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2013 04:46 pm
Title: Chapter 19

Thanks for the update. Awww...looks like they have a bundle of joy coming there way. By the way, his Dad is a douchebag.

 Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2013 09:07 am
Title: Chapter 19

Nice update...please do not let them breakup....

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 01 2013 06:10 am
Title: Chapter 19

I just want to know what that old hag got?

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2013 05:26 am
Title: Chapter 19

Oh snap  throwing up breast our sore mmmmmmmm something is in the oven big time.  Now glad she told off that fake grand ma and cousin. Left her in the cold now all the sudden you want to be her best friend please. Thank for the update and happy new year.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2013 04:26 am
Title: Chapter 19

Love the chapter. Please post soon. 

 Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2013 03:50 am
Title: Chapter 19

Yaaaay she's preggerzzzzz! ahhh love this story! :)

 Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2013 03:00 am
Title: Chapter 19

It seems like fate is working it's magic. Thanks for the review.

 Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2013 02:39 am
Title: Chapter 19

Good update-you could feel the emotions through the writing.  I cannot believe she is pregnant; I did not see the story going in that direction but nonetheless, I suppose it should be interesting to see the rest of the story unfold.

 Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2013 02:21 am
Title: Chapter 1

I am enjoying the story.

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Date: December 11 2012 02:19 am
Title: Chapter 17

good but short. I am not liking his grandmother of keyshia. I have a feeling she is going to be a lot of trouble for keke and jason

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 07:12 am
Title: Chapter 18

Oh no they finaly get rid of eric and his nut case sister now grand ma coming in pic. So he Jasnon want to marry Keyshia. I can't wait to see when he ask her that  big question. Thank for the update. I'm glad I read this story.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 07:00 am
Title: Chapter 17

Jason go easy sure and pigs can fly lol. Girl those two set that apartment of fire ok. Jason knows how to treated his lady well. Now eric has to go do something stupid smh but no worry I think jason will shut him down quickly. Thank for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 06:50 am


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