Title: Chapter 13: Summer, Sun and Parties

FINALLY...HE HAS CLOSURE! He finally admitted that they weren't meant to be. 

I kind of don't want him to give Allegra another chance....he deserves better.



Author's Response:

I don't know if that's going to happen. He does have closure, and he will embark on a great journey to discover himself and build himself up, however, I kind of have the feeling that he will always have feelings for Allegra.

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2012 11:17 pm

Title: Chapter 13: Summer, Sun and Parties

Please tell me that even though if Allegra apologize to Chris, he won't give in to her too easily and give her a hard time. She is acting like a total bitch. I can understand the she is scared and all that to admit her feelings for Chris. But her behavior was unacceptable and disrespectful. She could have at least open her mouth and tell him "I'm sorry Chris, I can't do this, its too soon" or something. Instead she treated him as crap. And right after sleeping him with and making him confess his love for her. I'm sure he must have felt like a I felt like a cheap hooker who didn’t get paid because she didn’t do a good job. Or even worst. I really don't like Allegra. And as the story progress I dislike her more and more. Chris deserves a lot better. I'm glad that at least he is having fun and living his life instead of sulking in a pity party.



Author's Response:

Wow. Thank you for the review. Of course she needs to work for his love. She seriously treated him as if he was nothing. But Chris still loves her even after whatt she did. However, he is aware of the pain she caused him so he is not going to give into her easily, of that I am sure.

Reviewer: Anony Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 27 2012 04:58 am

Title: Chapter 13: Summer, Sun and Parties

I am glad that Catarina apologized, but friendship would be a no go.  I can't wait for his friends to come an visit him.   Giselle whose side are you on?  Who cares that Allegra said that she misses him she deserves to miss him.  Giselle it seems that you've picked her side so you just need to keep your trap shut.  No one wants to hear about Allegra missing jack as it's her fault that they are apart.  Don't like Allegra and I am starting not to care for Giselle.



Author's Response:

Giselle is neutral, like Switzerland. She stays friends with both of them and tries to make them reason. Unfortunately we don't know what she is telling Allegra because we're reading Chris' side of the story. She wants them to be happy together. She disapproves of Allegra's behaviour but she can't really do much to change her mind. It's Allegra that is messing everything up.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2012 11:26 pm

Title: Chapter 13: Summer, Sun and Parties

Laurence, should stay out of the relationship part of it. That is for Allegra and Chris to figure. I don't see why he felt the need to break up his friendship with her, I thought they were the best of friends? Cate had plenty of time in the 10 years they were together to let him know her feelings, without sleeping with his best friend.

 



Author's Response:

Laurence wanted to stay out of it until he saw Chris heartbroken just because Allegra refuses to admit that she loves him. Yes, both Chris and Allegra are Laurence's best friends but he just couldn't take the fact that they would be unhappy due to Allegra's behaviour. He didn't want to see a heart-broken Chris ever again, and still....

Cate is annoying, but I appreciate the fact that Chris now has closure and can stop feeling any sort of resentment towards her. This was a great step. He is growing up, and he's leaving the past behind.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2012 08:56 pm



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