Thanks for a good read.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: July 27 2012 04:14 am
That was HOT love it already can't wait for more soon please! :)
Reviewer: Christina Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 27 2012 04:02 am
that was so fucking hot.!
Reviewer: dope. Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 27 2012 01:51 am
I love this and Noah he just needs to be challenged and taken off guard and I hope Eliza does just that!!!
Reviewer: PrettyinBlue08 Signed [Report This]Date: July 27 2012 12:30 am
Woo it got hott in here! And it's not just the summer heat! 50 shades better watch out!
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: July 27 2012 12:30 am
Don't like Noah!! I keep on waiting for Eliza to tell Noah about himself but it's not going to happen because she's in love with the fool. As a black woman I just the way that he talks to her to demeaning. Nonetheless I like the story and am eagerly waiting the time for Eliza to show some cumption.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 26 2012 11:32 pm
Where I can find a man like Noah? This was an excellent start and now I am dying to know what happens next! Please, update soon!
Reviewer: Missus James Signed [Report This]Date: July 26 2012 11:28 pm
Wow. Don't make us feel like Eliza and have to wait. Great job.
Reviewer: annette Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 26 2012 10:48 pm
I can't stand you sometimes.....this time I really can't stand you because there is no continue button. LOL! This was hot, and tension filled. It flowed seemlessly and it was brilliant! I loved it.
Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]Date: July 26 2012 10:14 pm
Oh, this was so hot. That man is so wicked, doing her like that. I don't know any woman who would be THAT submissive! LOL I can't wait for the update! Talk about inappropriate behavior from a boss! LOL
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: July 26 2012 09:34 pm
Good start can't wait to read more
Reviewer: primesgirl4 Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 26 2012 09:06 pm
wow this story sounds soo hot.....love it..eliza is the perfect submissive and noah is soooo dominant and controlling..he is totally hot....update soon!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: shehara Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 26 2012 08:59 pm
Yes, yes. Keep going
Reviewer: DecemberUnrest Signed [Report This]Date: July 26 2012 07:45 pm
Love it. She is his sub.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: July 26 2012 07:30 pm
Great start . More please !!!
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 26 2012 07:24 pm
Wow!!!!! Sexy keep the update coming whoooo (fanning myself)
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 26 2012 06:58 pm
I love it already!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please continue!!!
Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed [Report This]Date: July 26 2012 06:57 pm
I like it!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 26 2012 06:56 pm