Title: Epilogue: If This Isn't Love

Love the epilogue. So happy that they're having another baby!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 06:22 am

Title: Epilogue: If This Isn't Love

Another baby, that is so awesome.  Joe is a good man that forgave that dumb woman.  I know, I know she was dumb for a reason being molested by her uncle and all.  But kept Joe away from his little but Naila knows that she loved by her daddy.  That is good thing.  SInce Joe has forgiven your punk tail it's time to forgive yourself Catherine.  Excellent story!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2012 05:35 am

Title: Epilogue: If This Isn't Love

Nice ending to their story!

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Date: August 19 2012 12:47 am

Title: Part 3: I Will Always Love You

Catherine fought her attraction to Joe on the show too!  But you could feel the tension between them.  More please!



Author's Response:

That's what i was trying to go with. glad at least you understand!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2012 09:01 am

Title: Prologue

I always wanted Catherine and Joe to get together! Good start!

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Date: August 18 2012 07:43 am

Title: Part 3: I Will Always Love You

Whew...I'm glad that there was a happy ending. I'm not a fan of Catherine's but Joe deserves the chance to be a father to his child. I think that things would have turned out differently if he hadn't pressed the issue and "fought" for their relationship. My major problem was that because Catherine thought she didn't deserve Joe, she was going to allow their child to grow up without knowing him. But, love prevailed. Good first story and I'm looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

She was  a traumatized child and adult. It happens sometimes with victims of sexual abuse. this wasnt supposed to be an easy get together story. i wanted as much drama as possible.

Without going crazy haha

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2012 05:52 am

Title: Part 3: I Will Always Love You

Loved it!! Glad the truth is out and Joe still loves her.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2012 02:43 am

Title: Part 3: I Will Always Love You

Finally they got together. Seriously I was ready to shake some sense in to Catherine.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 15 2012 12:31 am

Title: Part 3: I Will Always Love You

I still don't like her, but I am glad that she finally got some therapy.  Joe loves Catherine and he wants to get to know his daughter.  Naila is so cute!!  That scene when Naila put her head on Joe's shoulder and fell asleep brought a tear to my eyes.  Catherine makes me sick but I love everyone else specially Joe.  So glad that her uncle was shanked in prison, that news brought a smile to my face.  It couldn't have happened to more evil  and so deserving individual.  Yippe skippy!!  Bring on the the epilogue!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2012 12:27 am

Title: Part 2: Hate That I Love You

oh my gosh a baby oh my cathy why oh why would you keep it from joe when yall both love each other i know this stay and london wont be for the long haul and whe cathy returns with a extra passenger all hell will break loose whoo i cant wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2012 03:43 pm

Title: Part 1: The Love that Hurts

ugh why cant demons like jay be castrated and hands and legs cut off so they can never destroy another child innocence ugh just why!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! another great chapter i am loving this story!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2012 03:40 pm

Title: Prologue

wow i am blown away by this first chapter!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: August 14 2012 03:37 pm

Title: Part 2: Hate That I Love You

I don't slime how she is doing joe.

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2012 02:03 pm

Title: Part 2: Hate That I Love You

I don't get Catherine. Joe has been with her through the ordeal with her uncle, had to deal with her lying about her aborting his (possible) child, and he still wants to be with her. He's been through the worst and I understand that she's scared but what else can he do to prove he loves her and wants to be with her unconditionally?

Reviewer: AP Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2012 05:12 am

Title: Part 2: Hate That I Love You

I really hate stupid people, and Cathy is stupid!!  Joe loves you and threw his feelings back in his face and let him believe that you aborted a child that could have his.  I am not liking you right now!!!  I am hoping that she redeems herself sson.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2012 02:26 am

Title: Part 2: Hate That I Love You

Loved the update but hated that Catherine continues to lie to poor Joe. She needs to woman up and tell the truth!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2012 01:38 am

Title: Part 1: The Love that Hurts

Great start!  Loving the friendship between Cathy & Joe.  Both are in denial about their feelings...Love iT~

Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2012 05:08 am

Title: Part 1: The Love that Hurts

Me likey!! More please. Hope they catch and fry that sicko Jay!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2012 04:36 am

Title: Part 1: The Love that Hurts

Her uncle killed her parents so he could raped her and in his mind he's in love.  Please kill him!!  I that Catherine's and Joe relationship can survive her uncle's attack on them.    I am loving your talent you pulled me in from the very first sentence and haven't let me go.  So awesome!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2012 02:59 am

Title: Prologue

Wow, I am hooked after one chapter.

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Date: August 13 2012 02:50 am

Title: Prologue

I remember the show and it was very funny. Love your story so far!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2012 12:58 am

Title: Part 1: The Love that Hurts

I vaguely remember the show that this was based upon...this story is quite different but I like it. I truly hope that her uncle gets what's coming to him...he's one sick mutha.....update soon.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 12 2012 09:57 pm

Title: Prologue

I can't remember what story these characters are from..

Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

It's a show called NewsRadio

Reviewer: Reneek Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 12 2012 06:57 pm

Title: Prologue

I have never watched the show but I look forward to reading more of your story.  I especially love stories like this, when they have a baby.  

 

 

Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 12 2012 06:41 pm



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