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Title: Chapter 1

I was confused at the formatting. Were there some copy and paste confusion? I do that all the time-__-

 

I hope she opts for something more serious than a fling I totally want the happy ending and the marriage and the kids!

 

I love your writing!

 

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2012 04:02 am
Title: Chapter 1

Love the first chapter. The parents are funny. This is going to be a good story.

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 05:20 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Oh I'm excited to see where this goes!

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 08:57 am
Title: Chapter 1

I like it and can't wait for more.

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 03:54 am
Title: Chapter 1

Great start! Flashbacks of when they were younger would  be nice! Luv the parents ahahah

 Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 03:24 am
Title: Chapter 1

 luv it so far!!!!!!!:)

 Reviewer: queen89 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 09:47 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Oh she knows she wants to get into trouble with this boy! Great start! :) p.s her Parents are totally embarrassing ! Lol

 Reviewer: MeganRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 08:09 pm
Title: Chapter 1

LOVE!!!! 

 Reviewer: LolaWrites Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 08:08 pm
Title: Chapter 1

when is are they going to apologize to each other? I love the parents they are too funny. I think that their relationship will change with this vacation. This will be juicy!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 07:58 pm


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