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Title: Chapter 2

Good start. But, am I the only one who noticed the sudden change of Kay's parents' names?Is it Sandra and Sean or Trish and Derek? I root for Sandra and Sean...

A cottage by the lake, what a beautiful setting! But, Kay goes from indiferent to attracted way too quickly for my liking. Please, don't rush the story.



Author's Response:

OMG i am so terrible lol. I'd left the story for so long completely forgot her parents names lol. Thanks for the feed back though

 Reviewer: Peanut Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2012 11:11 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Yes please do!!! I feel like the story is moving fast though? This spa day could had been much longer? Loved it though.

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2012 10:03 pm
Title: Chapter 2

I say go for the summer fling also. Why not? they're are young and it's the last summer before senior year.

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 17 2012 09:19 pm
Title: Chapter 2

I love Seb already!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2012 04:47 am
Title: Chapter 2

I'm glad you updated.  Looking forward to reading more!

 Reviewer: ShelbyD Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2012 04:09 am


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