Reviews For Shattered
Title: Chapter 11

Damn! I knew this would happen! I hate when people lie, some kinda shitty drama is always the result. But I'm really happy that Gavin finally knows and he kicked that no-good ass Trent out of his life, it's been a long time coming -- Bravo Gavin, Bravo! Anyway, great update :) Can't wait for the next.

Reviewer: Terri Day Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2012 03:31 pm

Title: Chapter 11

I'm loving this.  I hope Gavin forgives her.  I don't think that this is the last time we hear from Trent.

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2012 12:16 pm

Title: Chapter 11

LOL...ok, I guess I see it a little differently cuz um, no ma'am, no breaking down in a pool of tears. She explained, and if he remembers, she told him they would discuss it later before he took off. No pleading and begging here. He knows the particulars now and she shouldn't allow him to use it as stick to beat her with. Its awkward enough. The rest of the stuff he has issues with her about is something else, but this one situation is weird and awkward. Anyone, including him, would have trouble with something like this. Its not exactly the norm, you know. It was during a devastating part of her life and things can happen in extreme grief. Gavin knows this so what else does he want from her on this matter.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 26 2012 06:49 am

Title: Chapter 11

I'm happy with the direction of it. Happy Trent got his butt beat, the needed a little turmoil in the realtionship, but no more. Lets get them back on track now! lol

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 26 2012 06:11 am

Title: Chapter 11

I'm glad that Gavin found out and I can't be mad at him for being angry. I also can understand Nyla's fear of getting hurt but she has to get over it sometime. The reality is that she did screw his best friend and that's a hard pill to swallow for anyone. He has a right to be upset but he was wrong for not speaking to her for days. The bottom line is they need to stop screaming at each other and talk.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 26 2012 05:28 am

Title: Chapter 11

I loved the direction you are going in.  Not so happy about the Gavin & Nyla disagreement, but, things happen.

he needs to get over it or leave her alone.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 26 2012 04:30 am

Title: Chapter 11

Love it! Please bring on the drama then the healing. I know Gavin loves her. 

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2012 03:21 am

Title: Chapter 11

at least it's now out there...Thank for the update.

Reviewer: Lindy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 26 2012 03:19 am

Title: Chapter 11

She's going to therapy yet she's still stupid.  Gavin, she's scared to love you which is making her doublely stupid.  Gavin will need the patience of a saint to deal with Nyla, I just hope that this omission doesn't cost her your love.  Great update.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 26 2012 02:44 am



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