A thrilling chapter. Startimg a new life usually has some ups and downs. I know that Solana and Eris are in good company. Matthew defintely has that alpha male instinct. I know they felt their place in the woods as a pack. It felt so natural as if was second nature. Lets see where it will lead.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed
[Report This]Date: November 15 2012 01:42 pm
Really interestes in seeing how cruz looks. Anyways really god chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. Cruz looks interesting doesn't he?
Stay tuned, Nsablo
Reviewer: SeriouslyMe Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 15 2012 04:06 am
Interesting update! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: November 15 2012 01:29 am
That was a good chapter. Great detail. Poor deer!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I try my best to make this story as vivid as I can, so my readers can picture what is happening.
Stay tuned, Nsablo
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed
[Report This]Date: November 14 2012 10:57 pm
Excellent. Interesting characters and story!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: November 14 2012 10:13 pm
I felt as though i were apart of the story due to the strong emotion and detail. Solana has to be strong despite her age. The ways of the wolf can never be completely understood. Her Parents did what was needed in order to protect their children and bloodline. A strangle worthy chapter.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: November 14 2012 10:08 pm
More please...Thank you.
Reviewer: Lindy Signed [Report This]Date: November 14 2012 05:45 pm
Very cool story. I love wolf lore
Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]Date: November 14 2012 04:57 pm
This is the first story I'm reading from you and I like it alot so far.
Author's Response:
Well, I am glad you enjoy my stoy so far. I hope that you will continue reading.
Stay tuned, Nsablo
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 14 2012 04:47 pm
good and steady start - thanks for the update!!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I am trying to make this story as easy for for everyone.
Will be updating soon. Thanks for reading, Nsablo
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: November 14 2012 03:15 pm
great update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: November 14 2012 02:44 pm
i'm real glad to see you back with a wolf story. i remembered you had started on another way that was taken away so i look forward to this! thank you!
Author's Response:
Thank you! It feels good to be back into writing. I have been really busy with school and life. I hardly have time to write. I have taken the story Sasha down for reconstruction and major work. I don't think it will come back to The Chamber anytime soon. I am so sorry for that.
But please enjoy this story as it goes along.
Stay tuned, Nsablo
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: November 14 2012 09:38 am
I loved it...Thank you.
Reviewer: Lindy Signed [Report This]Date: November 14 2012 07:06 am
Me likey!! More please.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: November 14 2012 05:01 am
Nice chapter so far
Reviewer: SeriouslyMe Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 14 2012 04:42 am
Good so far.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: November 14 2012 03:24 am
Great start I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: foxyprime Signed [Report This]Date: November 14 2012 03:16 am
That little girl Solana is tuff and I love it. She protected both herself and her little sister Eric she handled her business. Good stuff!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! Solana didn't go through the training for nothing! lol She had to do what she had to do. I am glad you are enjoying the character already :)
Stay tuned, Nsablo
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 14 2012 02:56 am