Oh I like this new Pierre guy he's going to shake things up a bit. I think you could had made the human girl ask more questions when the granpa came in and was talking about imprinting and what not. Humans don't know about that. Shouldn't she had been asking questions? Maybe you can make her and the little sister talk about it and then have lil sister disclose the truth about them to her?
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed
[Report This]Date: December 26 2012 08:19 am
I have a bad feeling about Antoine and Solona is so stubborn and stupid that she wiuld fall for the oakey doke! There wilk be some bliid shed and I hope that its Antoine's.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 26 2012 06:30 am
Love it! trying firgure if Solana and Cruz are truly ment to be with each as Mates.
Very good story
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: December 26 2012 05:20 am
Thanks for the update....
Reviewer: nightseer Signed
[Report This]Date: December 26 2012 04:26 am
Thank you for sharing...
Author's Response:
You are welcome.
Thanks for reading
Reviewer: Lindy Signed [Report This]Date: December 23 2012 04:16 pm
I am glad that Eris has made a friend in Emily. NIce short update more please!!
Author's Response:
Yeah, Eris needed a friend around her age. She can't hang out grown folks for to long.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 23 2012 06:41 am
awww that was so sweet cruz is freaking awesome lol
Author's Response:
Isn't Cruz the best dude ever? lol
Thanks for reading!
Nsablo
Reviewer: SeriouslyMe Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 03 2012 04:12 am
OK, I waited unti you wrote a few chapters and I had my coffee and sat back and read this. Enjoying it thus far. It's a good story and I'm anxious to see where you take it.
Brenda
Author's Response:
I was wondering when you were going to pop up Ms.Brenda. But thank you for taking the time and reading this, I really appriciate it. I am happy that you are reading and enjoying this story.
Thank you, Nsablo.
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: December 02 2012 02:33 pm
awww this is so much fun to read!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!
Stay tuned!
Nsablo
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: December 02 2012 07:56 am
nice update to your story....why do I have the feeling the Mat is not Solana mate...Please update soon
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. Hmm? you think Mat may not be Solana's mate..? i wonder what gave you that idea lol
Stay tuned for more!
Nsablo
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: December 02 2012 06:39 am
I am glad that Solana saved Emily, but why does have the tude with Cruz. The man was worried about you, he does love you you stupid little girl. So loving this story.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 02 2012 03:50 am
Great chapter. Glad to see the pack interacting with one another. Looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!
Stay tuned for more, Nsablo
Reviewer: Hikari Signed [Report This]Date: November 24 2012 05:27 am
This was a nice Thanksgiving suprise. I liked seeing Solana apart of a new pack as Cruz's eventual mate. I disliked kara finding her rude and a bit of a attention grabber. I could see Solana's inner wolf as she and Cruz danced.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: November 22 2012 11:19 pm
Loved it, Thank you...
Reviewer: Lindy Signed [Report This]Date: November 22 2012 08:55 am
I really love this story please update soon
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Stay tuned for more, Nsablo
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: November 22 2012 08:32 am
Hi! I love your writing and I'm enjoying your story although I feel bad for Eris being left out so much. However, I saw the picture you posted (I love Tweet!), but in the first chapter you describe Solana as mocha skinned, then in the latest chapter she's caramel. I'm a very visual reader and I just wanted to know which one she is so I can do her character justice. Thank you!!
"Her hair complimented her mocha brown skin color" (Chapter 1)
"The fire light flashed her caramel brown skin as her blue eyes began to glisten in the light" (Chapter 3)
Author's Response:
I am so sorry for the confusion, her skin is mocha brown. Don't worry I have the correction for everyone to avoid anymore confusion. Thank you for pointing it out to me, I would have never realized it. See I need more lovely reviewers like to point out things I don't see. ya know?
My apoligizes.
Thank you for reading and reviewing, Nsablo
Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed [Report This]Date: November 22 2012 07:19 am
That Kara ho needs to be a lesson by the Alph Bitch quick, fast and in an hurry!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 22 2012 04:53 am
Solana and Matthew seem to get along quite well. It feels nice to see them comfertable with each other more or less. The thrill of the hunt was obvious to them and it was second nature. They are slowly building what will be an eventual bond. until next time.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: November 19 2012 07:20 am
Me likey, and i hope it's soon hat u can update.
Reviewer: kimyso Signed [Report This]Date: November 19 2012 02:52 am
Really good chapter I'm glad you posted a picture of Solane its easier to picture her.
Author's Response:
Thank you for readiing! Did you really had a hard time pictureing her? Next time, I will try to be as vivid as possible.
Thank you, Nsablo
Reviewer: SeriouslyMe Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 18 2012 04:49 pm
Thank your updating this wonderful story Nsablo. I love the characters and the budding that Cruz and Solana are developing for each other. Awesome!!
Author's Response:
You are very welcome pmgayles. I am really glad you are enjoying this story so far. I love my characters Solana and Cruz. They are so adorable as a couple. The cutest thing ever!
Thanks for reading, Nsablo
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 18 2012 01:25 am
nice update..please update soon
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you, Nsablo
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: November 18 2012 01:00 am
I like where this is going...Thank you.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading! I'm so glad you like this story.
Stay tuned, Nsablo
Reviewer: Lindy Signed [Report This]Date: November 17 2012 11:41 pm
Nice start, can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, I will be updating next week. I am in the middle of editing as we speak. :)
Thanks, Nsablo
Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]Date: November 15 2012 10:08 pm
Do you plan on posting any pics of him?
Author's Response:
Don't worry when I get the chance, I will be posting pics of these characters as the story goes on.
Reviewer: SeriouslyMe Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 15 2012 07:04 pm