Reviews For Disturbed
Title: Chapter 1

I wonder was Mia messing with a married man who wanted her dead because she got pregnant?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2014 12:35 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Thanks for the update and look forward to your stories. Hope all is well with your health.

Author's Response:

Thank you. I shall be posting new chapters by next week.it will be several to make up for my absence. 

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2014 04:28 am

Title: Chapter 1

Intrigued. 

Reviewer: A_Muse_In_Grrl Signed [Report This]
Date: November 06 2013 06:31 am

Title: Chapter 1. I don't need this....

$125K, and no memory? Who the Heck was she blackmailing? Must be someone with ties to the dept of the Treasury. Because $10K bills are not produced everyday.  That was a sanctioned hit. They will be coming after her again. This story is going to be like riding a rollercoaster.....full of twists and turns....I can't wait!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 05 2013 12:17 pm

Title: Chapter 1. I don't need this....

$125K, and no memory? Who the Heck was she blackmailing? Must be someone with ties to the dept of the Treasury. Because $10K bills are not produced everyday.  That was a sanctioned hit. They will be coming after her again. This story is going to be like riding a rollercoaster.....full of twists and turns....I can't wait!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 05 2013 12:16 pm

Title: Chapter 1. I don't need this....

$125K, and no memory? Who the Heck was she blackmailing? Must be someone with ties to the dept of the Treasury. Because $10K bills are not produced everyday.  That was a sanctioned hit. They will be coming after her again. This story is going to be like riding a rollercoaster.....full of twists and turns....I can't wait!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 05 2013 12:16 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Wow, this is different, but very intriguing! I like the mystery of it, keep it going. I am curious to know who, what, when, where and why?

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 05 2013 12:03 pm

Title: Chapter 1. I don't need this....

Good to see this story back. I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 04 2013 01:01 pm

Title: Chapter 1. I don't need this....

Interesting story so far!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2013 04:09 am

Title: Chapter 1. I don't need this....

Detectve Thayer is a asshole and wouldn't the doctors have told him that she had amnesia?   What is up what all that money?  So is Mia a light skinned sister?  What does the detective look like?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 03 2013 10:50 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Intriguing please continue

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 03 2013 10:40 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Interesting premise...I'm in...I don't know how often I can review...work like a dog all day and have to work all night just to keep up...but I need these stories as a stress releaser...so thanks for peaking my interest...can't wait for more...

 



Author's Response:

My pleasure! This is why I write.

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2012 05:13 am

Title: Chapter 1

this is interesting and i can't to find out what happened to mia and how she became to be pregnant along with who left the note and if she'll every recall more from that dreadful night 



Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: sandycheecks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2012 05:04 am

Title: Chapter 1

Me likey!! More please.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2012 04:32 am

Title: Chapter 1

Wow: a really trully genuinely different story.

I really hope you update regularly. I would love to see where you take this.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: betty Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 03 2012 10:26 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Damn that was good! More please!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2012 05:54 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Good start.

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2012 04:44 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Intereating story. I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2012 04:19 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Wow! This sounds so good already. She's gotta be terrified out of her mind. And to top it off, she's pregnant and has no clue who the father is. Do they know if she was raped? So many questions, I'm excited for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2012 12:22 pm

Title: Chapter 1

reeeal goood start - i look very much forward to more, thank you!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2012 10:11 am



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