Sooo her best friend who is in love with Coln walks in on them about to screw. LO. And she faints! Haha. This is hilarious. I can't stand nosey neighbors, no matter their age. Stay out of my business!!!!!! No shame on being a virgin by the way. Not many people can say that. It's rare. I'm one too. (Does a lil dance).
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: April 12 2015 01:00 pm
cute
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: March 26 2013 05:56 am
Funny chapter! I like kaydence fainting. Classic!
Reviewer: luv_romance Signed [Report This]Date: March 22 2013 07:50 pm
- To be honest I feel like your perception of Derrick Rose seems a bit off. When I see DRose I mostly see a man with his head in the right place and extremely humble for his situation. The way you're writing him makes him seem like Kobe Bryant or someone of the like; overconfident and just kind of sleazy and loud, he seems more tame than that, but that's just my perception and maybe yours is different. I am enjoying this story, I just feel like the characters don't match their real life counterparts which I believe is an integral part of a story based on real life characters.
- Did you hail from fictionpress and write a story about four girls and four boys. Who played hockey or something? I don't remember, but they were tutoring the boys...? I loved that story btw and I'm crushed you never finished it... If you even wrote it. Your name just seems very familiar. Lol.
- I can't wait for the next update, you are speedy for sure! :)
Author's Response:
1. I completely, whole-heatedly, 110% agree with you. I think Derek Rose is exactly how you described him: humble, kind, focused, etc. My version of Derek is a complete 360 in comparison to the actual person. I honestly didn't intend for his personality to come out the way it is. However, that's just the way it's been coming out. That being said, sometimes in life, unforeseen circumstances and tragic events can often cause people to mature. I think, as the story progresses, Derek will, eventually, have to grow up.
2. Good Lord. You are correct. I am from Fiction Press....and Fan Fiction (which I beg of you not to try to look me up). I've been on the wring scene since I was twelve. Haha. Yes, "Fall For You" is also another one of my stories. I think about returning and trying to finish that story, all the time. I'd probably want to start over completely though, revise and edit, ya know? Maybe.
3. Umm. You should know that I completely started fangirling when I saw your name. You're the same AwardedEmmy who wrote Make It Nasty, right? I started reading that when it only had....like 5 chapters. I suppose you've finished it by now? I must finish reading it when I get time.....Anyway, can I just say how extremely shocked I am that YOU, being the amazing author you are, like my story. Especially "Fall For You," which really isn't written all that well. I swear, when I saw your review this morning, it was all I could think about during school. Yes, it made me that happy.
Okay, I'll stop rambling. Thanks for reviewing. I really appreciate it!
Reviewer: AwardedEmmy Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 22 2013 09:27 am
Lovin this story
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: March 21 2013 10:37 pm
Loved the update!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: March 21 2013 06:11 pm
That suggady was funny as hell! Derek is a fool!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 21 2013 01:53 pm
I thought it kinda sexy. r u serious about no sex scenes? coz they r now married.#justsaying
Reviewer: cuppacoffee Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 21 2013 01:01 pm
great story keep it coming so sad about the love scenes just make it fun and interesting
Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 21 2013 07:42 am
LMAO!!!! I love it please posst soon :-)
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: March 21 2013 06:26 am