Aww he changed his name in her phone to hubby. Isn't that too cute!! He is being more than perfect. They will definitely end up staying together. She is starting to act more aggressively. Kissing him first.
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: April 12 2015 03:22 pm
It is hard for me to visualize Arianna's character with Nikki Minja's face but the story is very good and I love how you make Collin and Derrick's characters so fun and friendly. Ok the one or two things that has been bugging me is.....we're all three girls in foster care together? And was Ari or Kay the ass abuse victim? Maybe both were! I as m liking this story more and more! I will give you a 9 out of 10.
Author's Response:
Well she seems to like nicki so plz stop saying she should be someone else.....SHE IZ STILL GONNA BE NICKI SO GET OVER IT....but didn't u read the part were she said kaydence nd maya were in da foster home with her so to answer ur question. Yes all three of them were in the same foster care... But ya don't mean to be rude but just saying ~mya (co-author) :)
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: June 29 2013 04:46 pm
this is a really good story but we need you to finish.
Reviewer: cullensjonas Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 12:46 am
Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: ogechiokafor78 Signed [Report This]Date: May 19 2013 10:09 am
Didn't you release this chapter two weeks ago.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: April 26 2013 01:47 pm
Alright Marianna is making slight progress, although she dragging her feet and screaming her off along the way! Good luck in school!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 23 2013 01:57 pm
For clarification: by give it up, I meant the pretense that she doesn't like D.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 23 2013 01:11 pm
I love this story, they're so cute together. Derek never fails to keep me laughing and Maya just needs to give it up
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 23 2013 12:06 pm
Nice update, can't wait for more Ari and Colin
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: April 23 2013 04:57 am