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Title: Car Rides and Motivations

Didn't you release this chapter two weeks ago.

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2013 01:47 pm
Title: Meetings

if theres gonna be no sex scenes maybe you should change the ratings , i love this story by the way update soon :)

 Reviewer: angel94 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2013 04:47 am
Title: Car Rides and Motivations

Alright Marianna is making slight progress, although she dragging her feet and screaming her off along the way!  Good luck in school!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 01:57 pm
Title: Car Rides and Motivations

For clarification: by give it up, I meant the pretense that she doesn't like D.

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 01:11 pm
Title: Car Rides and Motivations

I love this story, they're so cute together. Derek never fails to keep me laughing and Maya just needs to give it up  

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 12:06 pm
Title: Car Rides and Motivations

Nice update, can't wait for more Ari and Colin

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 04:57 am
Title: The Dinner

Don't let anyone pressure you into doing anything you are not comfortable with,whether personal or professional. Always be true to yourself and God. The rest will work itself out!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2013 12:20 pm
Title: The Dinner

Loved the update!Hope she watches out for creepy Kyle!!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2013 06:30 pm
Title: The Dinner

Hello- First off I want to say that you're a really good writer.

But I wanted to comment on the note you had about not having any sex scenes in the story. I understand you might not feel comfortable or maybe its because of your beliefs?? Which is all good. Seriously, that's great. However as a reader, when I click on a romance story that is intended for only for ones that are "17 years or older", I expect to have some intimate scenes.

Also I noticed one of the warnings you've designated for this storty is "sexual content". Sooo maybe you should consider editing that warnings off and maybe making this story a "Mature" rating which is less severe than a "17 or older". Just a thought.

I know I know by the end of the day it doesn't matter what we think, it's your story. But as a dedicated reader it was a let down to know that you enphatically not having any sex scenes. 

Other than that, I really like your story.. it's fun, upbeat and very descriptive. Keep up the good work.

 

 Reviewer: Humbly opinionated Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 10 2013 11:52 pm
Title: The Dinner

Derrick is fool!  I am trying so hard to like Ariana but she makes it hard!  She needs to give more but she afraid that she will fall in love with Colin. Yep I am not s fan of Ariana..

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2013 02:47 pm
Title: The Dinner

Great update!

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Date: April 10 2013 12:30 pm
Title: The Dinner

nice update...More please

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2013 08:46 am
Title: Meetings

8 out of 10 booboo good way to start off!! you got my attention!

 Reviewer: Anubian Rockstarr Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2013 07:46 am
Title: Mother? (Continued)

Great update, can't wait to read about the dinner. I do hope his family is nicer, I don't think Aria's girls will allow anyone to disrespect her. 

 Reviewer: channessa Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07 2013 01:12 am
Title: Mother? (Continued)

Loving this story and your are a superb writer.I love Arianna's personality...she's tough,honest and loyal.the banter between derrick and maya is sooo funny....just enjoying.Waiting to read more:)

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06 2013 01:28 pm
Title: Mother? (Continued)

Interesting update!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2013 05:01 am
Title: Mother? (Continued)

Keep going .im loving it . I want to find out why Ariana is so jaded already.

 Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2013 03:13 am
Title: Mother? (Continued)

URGH!! NO CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lol, love the story and I can't wait for more :)

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 06 2013 12:13 am
Title: Mother? (Continued)

Wow...great update

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2013 10:45 pm
Title: Mother? (Continued)

I an getting that feeling that Lindsay has feelings for Colin and thanks God he doesn't reciprocate. I am already annoyed by her and she was just introduced in the story.  Why does Ariana have such a big children on her shoulder?  You agreed to this farce so drop the tude!  So loving this story!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2013 10:19 pm
Title: Mother?

I love update...please update soon

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 04 2013 09:57 pm
Title: Mother?

My thoughts? I like this couple and I need more please.

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Date: April 04 2013 04:08 pm
Title: Discussions

Great chapter, cute and very funny.

 Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 04 2013 01:51 pm
Title: Discussions

loving this story thus far.. great.. two thumbs up... plesae make sure u finish it please...

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Date: March 31 2013 01:25 am
Title: Meetings

Please update soon...

 Reviewer: alex Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2013 12:03 am


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