Oh my goodness! I think that's Forrest Griffin from mma in your cast pic. I ADORE mma. I just stumbled across this and look forward to actually reading it when I get home from work.
Author's Response:
YES IT IS!!! Im glad someone recognized him. He isnt conventionally handsome, but his ruggedness works for me!
Reviewer: Pinklemonade Signed [Report This]Date: May 16 2013 06:24 pm
She had a miscarriage and now he is leaving? Wow. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed
[Report This]Date: May 16 2013 03:16 pm
Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: May 16 2013 03:14 pm
If Laila thinks that Mark is trouble I am surprised that she didn't bolt. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: May 16 2013 03:12 pm
Interesting meeting. I can't wait to find out more about them as individuals. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: May 16 2013 03:11 pm
So they used to be a couple so why did he show up now? Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: May 16 2013 03:07 pm
Good cast. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading! I appreciate your response(s)!
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: May 16 2013 03:02 pm
This is so sad and they're hurting so badly.
Author's Response:
I'm sorry. Dont meant to be a bummer but we all know..life isnt all roses :(
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 16 2013 10:49 am
More please. These two seem to have a passionate yet painful past together. I can't wait to see how they proceed.
Author's Response:
I will post an update soon. And you are right about their past
Reviewer: oHH Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 16 2013 05:30 am
Interesting start ! Can't wait for the next update !
Author's Response:
Updated! I hope you like it
Reviewer: Peanut Signed [Report This]Date: May 11 2013 05:09 am
Interesting start ! Can't wait for the next update !
Reviewer: Peanut Signed [Report This]Date: May 11 2013 05:09 am
This story is great. More please.....
Author's Response:
thank you! I hope you like the latest installment
Reviewer: Cynthia Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 07 2013 02:26 am
Good story .More please .
Author's Response:
done!
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 06 2013 10:47 pm
very intense.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]Date: May 06 2013 10:37 pm
This is interesting can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed
[Report This]Date: May 06 2013 04:25 pm
I like this alot so far and surprisingly, I'm not bothered by the short chapters. Although I want more, it works for this story. I would like to know what happened at their final fallout and more of their backstory but I know this is just the beginning so I'll wait patiently. Oh and how long has it been since their breakup?
Author's Response: Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 06 2013 03:47 pm