Oh Lord, I don't know If I can read the next chapter. Why do people think there is only one type fora person. Lori needs to get a grip
Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 13 2014 12:39 am
Yeah an update! I loved the update. Valerie is becoming more confident with herself and Henry. I hope this Rhea lady doesn't think she stands a chance. Love these two together.
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: January 12 2014 11:57 pm
It was very good. Enjoyed it. Her mother reminds me of my mother. You know I can relate so much to this story. Because I have issues with my weight. And I feel like sometimes I'm not worthy of a handsome guy or any guy. Its very hard for me to take a compliment from someone because I feel like I don't deserve it. They always say your so pretty gel! And it's hard because I don't see it. But I've gotten better with excepting myself. I put on facebook that I may not be a perfect 10. I can only be me. I've come to love myself. I would hate to even look at myself in the mirror. But now I can look in the mirror and smile because I've learned to love myself regardless if I'm not a perfect 10 or size 8. I'm 28 years old and I have been dealing with this problem my whole life. I thank you for writing this story. Because we really do deal with these issues. And I can't wait for the next chapter!!! I look on here everyday for you next chapter :)).
Reviewer: thank you :) Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 12 2014 10:47 pm
I'm surprised at her moms reaction to her having alternate plans. I get her being a concerned mom, but I would imagine she should be happy about Valerie coming out of her shell.
It had to be awkward being in a group where someone tried to hook Henry up (not to mention with a model). I think Valerie handled it like a champ though, so I'm proud of her for that. I just hope it's not a case of where she would be willing to just disappear in the background, and thinking Rhea is the 'type' of girl Henry should be with.
Loved this installment, please update again soon.😍
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: January 12 2014 09:03 pm
First, yay for an update! Second, Val is absolutely right. Her attitude with genesis in her insecurities has been and is her biggest problem. I will say, this story is a study in nature v. nurture. Her parents had a lot to do with her attitude toward herself and others. It's like their view of the world permeated to create a sense of mistrust and negativity that bled into their children. It's sad. I feel as though Valerie was the easiest of their children to mold, to manipulate into perfection. Honestly not uncommon for well upper middle class and beyond blacks. There's a tendency to inoculate oneself in a never ending cycle of approvement. Valerie is trying to escape that cycle, hopefully she will.
I relate to Valerie because I was overweight. I did not have surgery but it is very easy to slip into a spiral. Once the weight is gone, what's left to hide you from the world? This is a journey for her.
Now this pains me to say, I dont want to admit this
but Val's mother has a point. Henry is a good guy. He is attractive, warm, funny, a hard worker. He is also aloof, nomadic, and a commitment phone. The source sucks but there is a valid point in there. Henry needs to settle down. If he wants Val he is going to have to show her. Not via sex. Not via flirtatious actions or in over the top ways. Hes going
have to show her by being there. Being settled. I dont know, committing to her? Women like Valerie crave stability and commitment. I know, I'm one. We like the wild bad boys, most will never date them but
when we do it is because they are different. They bring us out of ourselves. Yet we want them to commit and most are not there yet. Val's mom is neurotic, image obsessed, and cold but she has a point.
I really love the authenticity you bring. I'm not supposed to admit this but Harry Styles is hot and I can imagine Henry as Harry at 28. I really enjoy you
updates and I hope you feel encouraged to just leap. Into this.
One aside, I would love to see more with Val's family. I would like to see the uneven element of Henry with her family. The racial dynamic which I'm certain is at play. You are so good at being in depth, tthat's something I would love to see you explore. Also is there a chance for a Henry one off?
Thank you! Be blessed
Date: January 12 2014 03:18 pm
Why do I think that she see's Henry and model chick Rhea either doing something and detoured to the bathroom. I am hoping you don't write her doing some self harm behavior or at least talking herself out of doing some sort of self harm. I didn't like how all of a sudden he see's this model and he kind of forgets val for a moment.. Also where he has at some point separated from her and friends and was talking to old girl. Why do I have a feeling Rhea is going to cause issues. Don't like Pat, why would you tell a stranger who Henry is with about another woman being perfect for him. I just have a feeling Val is going to have a coming of age moment with Henry, Pat and Rhea. Don't let him screw up too bad, he had me floored when he named the kittens apples and peaches.
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: January 12 2014 03:05 pm
Oh she needs to really go to intensive the two and possiblly limit her contact with her parents if she is ever going to get better. I am worried about Henry's model loving butt though, hie seemed awe struck with Rhea which makes me nervous some habits are hard to break.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: January 12 2014 02:49 pm
This story is amazing! I know it is a process for Valerie to feel better about herself but it is so sad! Is the picture of that girl on your tumblr her?
Reviewer: Daddyprincess Signed [Report This]Date: January 12 2014 02:26 pm
Her mother is a pain and it seems that developed some backbone. Don't like her parents!! Pat is a bitch I wonder what she will overyear them saying about her the bathroom? With Ben and Lori going about Val-Heroine Rhea and Pat should have gotten the hint. But Pat is evil and should be runnetbh over by a truck!! Just saying..,
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 12 2014 01:32 pm
I hope she didn't make herself vomit.
I don't like Henry's friends because in their eyes he can only be seen with a white model. Val was invisible until his sister made a fool of herself. Thank God for Ben who gave her a confidence boost.
I have a feeling that this day will go downhill fast.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: January 12 2014 12:51 pm
I can't get into the story. It's telling registered readers only
Author's Response:
That's the setting it's always been in but I just changed it.
Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 04 2014 12:25 pm
Oh BTW, I just saw a picture of Valerie on your Tumblr...she is absolutely STUNNING!
Reviewer: Leogina Signed [Report This]Date: January 03 2014 06:44 am
Where do I begin.....
First...I want to say that I am in looooovvvveeee with this story...Henry and Valerie are real people...I feel like I met them somewhere and connected with them on some level. I love that he doesnt bullshit her.
Second...My husband thinks something is wrong with me because I cant tell you how many times I talk about Valerie...I cry for her, I understand her, I love her but most importantly, I know her. Her insecurities remind me of myself. My weight issues were the opposite. I was always thin my whole life and felt ugly because of it. Never looking in the mirror of taking my clothes off. My husband was the Henry that saved me.
Third...Girl, I need another fix...Please update soon
xoxoxoxoxoxo
Reviewer: Leogina Signed [Report This]Date: January 03 2014 06:39 am
Yes, she is becoming irritating with the things she does all she will do is push him away them probably complain no one wants her. btw can I have a Henry delivered, I don't know if I like him yet but that scene was excellent. Thanks
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2014 04:37 am
Really nice. Great update.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: January 02 2014 12:31 am
ugh, her negativity is starting to make her look mentally unstable.
Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed [Report This]Date: January 01 2014 07:37 pm
She is solely allowing him to tear down the walls she has built up over her heart.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: January 01 2014 12:51 pm
This is a really good chapter and Val is entitled to her insecurities because this is all new for her.
Author's Response:
thnx for seeing what I was trying to do :)
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: January 01 2014 04:10 am
2 in one week!! Whoooo hooooo! This just made my week!!
I LOVE Henry! Can he be cloned into a real, living, breathing man? Pretty please??
With that said...why do I get the feeling a bomb is about to drop that is going to obliterate my love of Henry? Like something that is absolutely going to crush Valerie's heart (and mine!).
Keep em coming though! I absolutely LOVE this story; excellent writing!!
Reviewer: babygirl2cute4u Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2013 05:50 am
Henry sometimes seems too perfect. I feel like he has a huge secret, even more than sleeping with the married woman. I feel like he has dated gorgeous, shallow girls that he knows won't care to a degree and Val is obviously someone who care a great deal. She is really the antithesis of his recent relationships. Every time they are out, I notice he always asks her if she is okay with his lifestyle and taking pics etc with fans. Is ther a specific reason for this? Things that make me go hmmm. But overall if they don't get a HEA because I have never seen two people who complement each so well as them. And can I just say, LAWD can I have a Henry? Do you have a website that we can place an order. C'mon now, I'm serious. ;)
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2013 05:23 am
I love Henry but I worried about his nomadic ways.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2013 04:30 am
Very good! Henry is hiding a secret and I bet that is why he wanders--it is not just the job. I think Henry is starting to care, but something happen to him or someone he loved and that is why he can be friendly, loving, and warm, but can not comitt. He is bringing her out, but he is hdiing something.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2013 04:29 am
From taking a good look at Henry I can see why her insecurties surface so much. Ths goy is perfect. He is warm, caring, nice, sensitive, sensible, playful, gorgeous, and I could go on and on. When Vsl are use to less than perfect people pointing out what they feel are your imperfections, and Henry is not paying attenion to any of the things she's stressing over. I guess that could make her fall back into her negative thoughts. She beat herself up so bad. he had to ask who made her that way. Henry is happy with her in private and in public. Henry is just what she needs. He always makes her feel amazing, like she's in wonderland. I can't wait to see what her heart wants from him
Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 31 2013 03:05 am
First, I don't find Valerie annoying. She is real. Something lacking from most of the main female characters in IR fiction. She is an insecure woman with a host of issues going back to her childhood. A man is not going to magically erase all of that, nor would having weight loss surgery. Henry can be with her, he can love her, take care of her, but VALERIE will have to do this on her own. I appreciate your staying true to the character. Character driven storylines are tricky, most authors fail because they lose the narative, the voice of their creation.
Second, I really admire that you take time between updates, which means you are taking the time to tell your story. You can see every thought in the words. As a reader, I would love to see frequent updates, but I prefer quality over quantity.
I really enjoy the direction of this story. Thank you for sharing.
Author's Response:
thank you so much! your comment made my day! and thank you for understanding the space between updates. yes, a man will not flush away insecurities at the drop of a hat. that was kind of my approach, i was afraid no one would notice. thank you so much.
Reviewer: PaperRoses Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2013 02:28 am