That was a hawt chapter! For a min I was liking Domonic better then Dmitri! Domonic did break it down to him real good! Hopefully Dmitir listened to what he said concerning Sasha. Dmitiri better wise up to Nadia real fast before she ruins a good thing! This chapter was so worth the wait. Awesome job!
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed
[Report This]Date: July 24 2013 12:07 am
Just got back from vacation and into this heat wave of a chapter.hot hot hot.
Reviewer: Trulyme35 Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2013 11:39 pm
he needs to put on his big boy pants and proclaim their relationship!
Reviewer: Bryleigh Lisette Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2013 11:36 pm
i want to get a little more history about dmitri's family because if he can't openly have a relationship with sasha when they are around i just want to know why.
with the nadia situation i feel that if she doesn't want the help there really isn't much anyone can do if she doesn't want to admit that she has a problem and is refusing help then just let her learn and decide on her own.
i'm looking forward to seeing where dmitri and sasha's relationship goes and which family member is going to appear next.
Reviewer: sandradee Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2013 11:34 pm
Whew!! I for one applaud Sasha for being able to swallow the constant denial of their relationship. I understand his reasons but I agree with Dominc wholly . I hope it doesnt end bad for Sasha... I hope Demetri knows what he has
Reviewer: RedMoon Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2013 11:31 pm
Loving the down and dirty. That sister of his is going to be a problem, more so than the brother. Dominic seems to be a lot more geniune than when he first appeared. Sasha is no longer a wallflower, I'm hoping she stays strong enough to not let anyone push her back against it!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2013 10:48 pm
Now that was hot. It seems like Dominic little talk lit a fire under Dimitri.
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2013 10:35 pm
Good story. It's moving along at a good pace. I figured Nadia was gonna be a troublemaker and maybe one of the other girls may try to hit on Dmitri (I forgot their names - Jaeylynn ??? Whatever, I love this story!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! I'm going to try to update as soon as I can!
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed
[Report This]Date: July 15 2013 03:05 am
I LOVE your story! Girl, this is just an awesome read. I love the display of emotions. The sex scene was excellent! I wouldn't want you to change a thing!
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
P.S. Dmitri's sister is a b*tch lol
Author's Response:
Haha. it's great to hear such enthusiasm. Thank you!
Reviewer: hazelbazel92 Signed [Report This]Date: July 13 2013 09:47 pm
Are you kidding me? I loved the long love scene! It was tres steamy! Also, this chapter gave some neat insight into how Sasha is handling clearly combative relationships now that she's trying to do better at standing up for herself. She thought of the worst lie to tell Nadia and didn't share her concerns with with Dmitri. This can only lead to some drama. I'm glad Teagan is around to help Sasha navigate the crazy.
Maybe Slade will help Dmitri be a good boyfriend or the diner friend will tell Sasha what she does and doesn't have to put up with. Oh, man, I'm so excited for the next chapter. This one was so much more intimate than the others (and not just because of the love scene); it was more the morning after. Great job!
Author's Response:
Thank you, it was the first love scene I've ever written besides the morning quickie they had. ;-) Yes, Sasha is definitely growing as a person but she will go through some major setbacks as the story continues. Just keep rooting for her, though. Thank you so much for reading! Next update coming as soon as I can finsih writing it. Hopefully by this weekend. Sorry for the long wait!
Reviewer: tens Signed [Report This]Date: July 09 2013 11:21 pm
Nadia seems like a bitch...hopefully she doesn't do much damage to their relationship but it is truly going to happen regardless....glad they finely plunge sexually into their relationship...I'm happy they are happy right now...Nadia needs to stand up for herself..fight back...
Author's Response:
Yea, I'll be honest. things are gonna get worse with Nadia before they get better- she has her own issues. lol Thank you for your review! Hopefully, the happiness in their relationship continues.
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: July 08 2013 04:49 am
Well, let me start by saying....spectacular update!!! I have a feeling that crazy ass sister of Dmitri is going to make her brother mad. Messing with his new love named Sasha. Now that they have had sex and they are both sprung on it! Also, I think the sex scene was just long enough! I believe you are doing a great job! I have to give you a 10 for the content and story line.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! It was my first actual love scene so I was a bit nervous but I'm really excited to see so many enjoyed it. I'll give you another update as soon as i can so be on the lookout!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: July 08 2013 02:25 am
Just caught up with this story, and it's amazing! Love the characters and chemistry between Sasha and Dmitri is just hawt! Also love her friends Teagan and Dina. The love scene was perfect - and I like them long, so...
I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next with Nadia being a brat.
Author's Response:
Yay, i'm happy you ar enjoying it! Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 06 2013 09:43 pm
I love long love scenes. It was very good. Those who don't can just skip over the dialog cuz the rest of us don't want to be penalized! Yes I see trouble ahead but dont let Nadia break up our couple. Dimitri will just have to put his sister in her place!
Author's Response:
haha. Yes, let's hope Dmitri grows some balls and stands up to her. ;-)
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: July 06 2013 06:27 pm
I think you made the love scene just right, not everyone loves quickies. And great chapter by the way
Author's Response:
Thank you! I like 'em long too. lol
Reviewer: theroxet101 Signed [Report This]Date: July 06 2013 06:07 am
What?! Hate long love scenes?!?! Where they do that at?! (-_- )
Great chapter! Keep 'em coming! (Pun intended) ;-)
Author's Response:
Oh, yes! I definitely will. ;-) I'm really excited about writing them now that they have a more dynamic relationships having finally made that leap in the bedroom. lol Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: Kay Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 06 2013 05:19 am
I enjoyed the long sex scene, but I gotta say, Dmitri keeps letting Sasha down just about every chapter. At this point if he can't be man enough to admit to his sister that Sasha is his woman, there's no way he's going to stand up to his father. Exactly what can his father do to him? I'm confused about that because he says his father can make trouble for Sasha but if that's what he expect then it means he doesn't intend for things to last. She's just a convenient piece of tail for him. I really like this story but at this point, I'm rooting for Sasha to boot Dmitri and find someone else who is not ashamed to proclaim their relationship in public because as far as I see it he has all these convenient excuses for not introducing her in his girlfriend. I was so through with him when he wouldn't admit that they slept in the same bed. He's acting like he's a teenager still living in his parent's house. At this point in the story, Sasha is better off without him because I see he's going to play her yet again. I'm adding Nadia and Dmitri on my list of people who need to be karate chopped in the throat.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your honesty! I understand where you are coming from. I think many of the readers have been so worried about Sasha's growth in terms of confidence and self-esteem that they have completely forgotten that Dmitri is also a character that needs a lot of growth. I've purposely written him this way because I don't particularly like male leads that are always protrayed as being absolutely perfect. Dmitri may come off that way intially but as you see in their relationship he has a lot of family issues he has internalized to the point that it is hindering his ability to create new relationships. he almost has a childlike fear of his father taking away any new people in his life. His father is truly a manipulative person and you will get to see that more as the story progresses so Dmitri's fear is grounded in truth but it has been exaggerated to a certain extent in his own mind. While I don't want to give anything away, Dmitri's motive in terms of where he and Sasha's relationship is headed is still on the fence. Remember, he is not used to anything long-term so he may unconsciously look for excuses to prevent their strengthening relationship from continuing before it gets to the point where it would really hurt him if his father were to somehow take Sasha away. I hope this clarifies a few things and that you keep reading! Thanks, again! :-)
Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]Date: July 06 2013 03:19 am
Aw, they are too cute together. Sasha is so brazen. :-) But the jig is up...his sister already heard you two (one of the reasons I think they should have waited until she went back where she came from especially if they are going to go with the "just a friend" route due to his father for the time being). Dmitri should just go ahead and admit that she is more than a friend..and Sasha should address her concerns with his sister not liking her to Dmitri but I suppose that is too soon. Nevertheless, she shouldn't take Nadia's snarky comments when Dmitri is not in the room either.
Author's Response:
I agree. Sasha's hesitation stems from her fear that their relationship may end at any moment despite her growing love for him. But, hopefully, she becomes secure and starts to fight back just a little bit more. Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed [Report This]Date: July 06 2013 02:58 am
It's so sad when you have to put up with someone's nasty attitude to keep the peace. I know that Dimtri is trying to keep things under control beacuse he does not want his father involved in his life. With Nadia there it's only a matter of time before he finds out and tries to destroy Sasha to get next to him. I hope Sasha is strong enough to handle what's in store. She has so many insecurities. She seems to be an easy target.
Author's Response:
Hopefully, she is stronger than she seems at that moment. And, yes you are completely right about Dmitri not wanting his father to get involved in his life. We shall see... thank you for your review!
Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 06 2013 02:15 am
Well I like that she's not such a push over HOWEVER he is a grown man, why he didn't admit that they slept in the same room!!!?? WTH...
She needs to tell him his sister is a biotch and get it out in the open..
I hope he stands up for her when it goes down, I know it's going down just a matter of time.
Author's Response:
haha. Other readers have expressed similar feelings. All I can say is that as much as Sasha needs to grow as a person so does Dmitri. His fear of people being taken away (like the way Nadia was taken from him by his father) is actually somewhat similar to Sasha's fear of being alone but, instead of clinging to people, he distances himself so that he is not hurt if it does happen. we'll just have to wait and see if he is able to overcome this and finally admit how much Sasha means to him to other people. Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: July 06 2013 12:45 am
I love long love scenes! Makes the story feel more real. Anywho good job and I'm scared to see what Nady is up to.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! yes, fear the wrath of the crazy Nadia! lol
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 11:51 pm
Great update and I do not like Nadia at all !!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Understandable, she is a bitch! lol
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 11:15 pm
First, that was an awesome first time! Very nice. Dmitri was sweet, considerate, and gentle with Sasha.
Second, I'mma need Sasha to grow a pair with Nadia.
The fact that this nasty heifer could say that to her brother's friend like that tells me all I need to know. And Sasha does NOT have to take that just because she's with Dmitri and that is his sister. I need for her to realize that in a hurry. And to notinternalize everything other people do and filter it out to be that there is something wrong on her end. I understand her feeling about being thrown away by her family, but that doesn't mean that every single time something happens, she should automatically make herself the blame, no matter what it is. It annoys me that she does that. I think she's smarter than that.
I need for her to speak her mind about it to Dmitri, tell him her feelings on the matter; which is she wont be taking that kind of behavior, and go on about her business with full knowledge that she gave Dmitri a heads up. That way when she needs to handle miss Nadia, there will be any bullsh*t coming from Dmitri. If there is, then he needs to check that sister he and his family has coddled.
Besides, does she really want to be a woman that cant stand up for herself and handle these types of things on her own? That's just a life lesson in general.
Very nice!
P.S Dont ever make love scenes shorter. We are all grown here and want every juicy detail...lol!
Author's Response:
*snaps* You are so right! I feel your frustration (maybe a little less since I'm writing it but lets' just ignore that minor detail lol). that is definitely one of the lessons she needs to learn and i think it will be one of the hardest for her since she still has a somewhat low opinion of herself and her worth. But I can promise that it will come because I know you guys are waiting for it. Thank you for your review and I'll try not to make the love scenes any shorter! lol
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 11:00 pm
lovely update!! please dont let nadia come between them! i would be really good if he overheard nadia being a bitch to sasha. it would soooo serve her right!! more please........
Author's Response:
That's a great idea! Thank you! I will try to update by this weekend- sorry for the long wait!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 10:31 pm
I love Dmitri! Nadia had better lay low before she gets a halo! Haha
Author's Response:
haha. Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: LiLi Signed [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 10:03 pm