Awesome sex scene. I'm happy Sasha got to feel a bit of pain when losing her virginity. Sometimes I get really upset when I read first time stories and the woman feels absolutely no pain or discomfort and has a screaming orgasm. No, you don't always feel like you're being split in half, but it is very foreign feeling and uncomfortable. I'm a little dubious about her cumming, but I understand it's a romance novel.
And Nady needs to get her shit together. Sasha needs to let her know the bidness. Dmitri needs to ask Sasha out. This is all cute, but he needs to make it official.
Author's Response:
Yes, I was debating whether or not to let her have an orgasm but then I was like- it's Dmitri (just looking at that man...mmm lol) And you are so right- I'm surprised no one else has noticed that they don't really venture out in public. Makes you wonder...is he serious about her??? o_0 we'll see... Thank you or your review!
Reviewer: Dances_With_Pen Signed
[Report This]Date: July 05 2013 10:00 pm
Whew girly I'm blushin' ( not that it can be seen lol) I think the love scene was perfect in length and description. I definitely smell trouble where Nadia is concerned, I can't wait to read more :))
Author's Response:
I'm glad to hear you liked the love scene! I will try to update as soon as i can!
Reviewer: Diamond Signed [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 09:48 pm
love the love sences more soon
Author's Response:
I'm sorry for the long wait!! I will update as soon as I can. Thank you!
Reviewer: faye Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 08:37 pm
His sister is definey trying to put a wedge in between them. Slowly am i starting to it see the manipulative side of Nadia, she is not trying to hid it. As for the love scene, i will just say that was different for the both of them. It will be difficult to pull them apart though i see that Nadia will try. The time for obstacles is on the horizon.
Author's Response:
Yes, it definitely is on the horizon. Let's hope they can withstand it. Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 08:12 pm
love this story!!
Author's Response:
yay! Thank you!!
Reviewer: kaci Signed [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 07:50 pm
There was nothing wrong with that love scene. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you! It was my first complete love scene so i was a little worried.
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 07:46 pm
good update
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 07:30 pm
I'm really glad Dmitri used a condom since it was Sasha's first time. He really seems to care about her and it made the chapter super hot, sexy and sweet at the same time!
I hope his sister doesn't ruin it for him and Sasha...
Author's Response:
Aw, thank you!
Reviewer: elektralyte Signed [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 07:29 pm
love this chapter..nadia is trouble..but it makes the story intersting..love to see more of dmithris bro...he is gorgeous..love to see dmithri make amends with his family... at least with his bro and sis they dnt seem to be bad just influenced and misunderstood..update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
I'm sorry, I will try to update as soon as I can! And I'm happy to hear you are actually rooting for Dmitri and his family- there are some deep issues there. smh. Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: jenny Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 07:29 pm
That was HOT!
Author's Response:
haha. Why, thank you!
Reviewer: silentwriter Signed [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 07:28 pm
Sorry to those who hate long love scenes.
Are you kidding? I'm the third bear, it's just right. hee
Author's Response:
Thank you! I like 'em long too- I actually had to shorten it a bit. It was reaching 5 pages. lol
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 07:20 pm
I am IN-LOVE with this story!! You are really talented. Keep up the wonderful work
Author's Response:
Aw, thank you so much! I'm really happy to hear you are enjoying it! More coming soon! :-)
Reviewer: Anna Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 06:55 pm
Get it Sasha! Good chapter, but Nadia is living up to my expectations.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! Maybe she'll surprise you (emphasis on maybe) lol
Reviewer: Tootall Signed [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 06:49 pm
Send that heffa packing!!!
Author's Response:
haha. nooo, she isn't ready (kevin hart voice) Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 06:41 pm
I thought Dimitri and Sasha together was hot! Nadia needs to be bitched slapped and I hope Dmitri doesnt fall for her games , she is not a nice person.
Author's Response:
They're just so cute together- I can't stand it, even while I'm writing. smh. Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 06:41 pm
Yes, things have definitely heated up with Dmitri and Sasha and I too feel trouble in the horizon with that anny heffa. I have said that from day one. She is all smiles and giggles in Dmitri's presence but when whe is alone with Sash her true colors appear. Dmitri is so blind to that heffa too cause that is his baby sister.
I wonder who that was in the elevator with Sash on the way to Dmitri's office. I feel their little make out session is about to be interrupted. I wonder if daddy dearest knows where she is at now it would seem that it has been a minute since Dmi and Sash made love and she has been back to the apartment or seen the little anorexic wench.
Loving the story can't wait for more.
Thank you for sharing.
Author's Response:
Love makes people blind and in Dmitri's case it's even worse cuz he feels guilty about not seeing her for years. smh Let's hope he doesn't risk his relationship with Sasha for her though. too early to tell. :-( Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 06:12 pm
i think with nadia still there, and knowing sasha she's not going to tell dmitri about the negative comments that nadia is saying to her, that things are going to end up bad for their relationship...looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response:
I will be updating soon! Thank you!!
Reviewer: sandradee Signed [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 05:15 pm
I love when wishes come true. Send Nady to Cancun, please. The love scene was perfect.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I will be updating soon!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 04:55 pm
Who knew Sasha could be a little freak.
Author's Response:
I know, right? Dmitri brings out the bad girl in her. lol Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed
[Report This]Date: July 05 2013 04:28 pm
Great story, great characters, love Sasha, love Dmitri and love them together !! The love scene was great, may be a little bit too short...never too long, hope for more maybe next chapter with "deskgate" ;)! I also like that Sasha is owning her sexual drive and voicing what she want. It should be interesting to see her explore that part of her. Can't wait for the next chapters! Thanks again !
Author's Response:
haha. I'm so happy to hear you are loving the story and characters! Thank you for your review. I will be updating soon!
Reviewer: RedHobo Signed [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 03:45 pm
WOW! Finally they take the nxt step in their relationship and that was so hot.Nadia is going to be a BIG trouble for Sasha and I hope that she's prepared for her and stands her ground for whatever Nadia throws at her.Looking forward to the nxt update.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! I should be updating soon.
Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 03:13 pm
Loved it!!!! That was hot
Author's Response:
haha Thank you!
Reviewer: maident Signed [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 03:03 pm
I really can't stand Nadia! That hiefer has got to go back to daddy dearest!! Dim and Sa finally did the do and it was good! Is Sa strong enough to make it through Nadia's evil attempts to break her and Dim apart? I that she is but I don't think so and it's about to get ugly!
Author's Response:
Things are going to get really ugly! But their relationship may be able to survive the storm. Let's see... Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 02:51 pm
I wasn't expecting Sasha to be so short. Dmitri is a bit of an ass. Finally, they start their relationship sort of. I see Slade has an eye for Dina. Hope to see more of them in future chapters or story. :D I seem to have a slight dislike for Sasha's other two friends, aside from Teagan.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 01:26 am
Hate that it was stopped there lol, but this was good. I was thinking the brother would be an issue, which he still could be, but Nadia is going to be terrible.
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading! More coming soon!
Reviewer: Tootall Signed [Report This]Date: July 04 2013 12:52 pm