Title: Chapter 10

Nadia is trouble. She sees Sasha as competition for her brother's affection. Furthermore, despite her being consider "fragile" she is manipulative and has a somewhat elitest attitude. I am afraid because of her action Dmitri's father is going to cause problems for him and Sasha.

Author's Response:

A well-grounded fear. But Dmitri and Sasha's relationship may be stronger than we think. Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2013 09:03 am

Title: Chapter 10

Wow, why did Nadia have to be so stank? Do not like her. Seems like she's just as manipulative as the rest of his family and I'm going to need Sasha to put this trick in her place. How are you just going to come up into someone's house and disrespect their significant other like that. I don't are if its jealousy, its a childish behavior and she need a strong backhand across the face. Boo. And how about his father turning on him because he didn't want to keep up appearances. Dmitri needs to man up and proudly proclaim Sasha as his woman, and Sasha stop taking his bull crap. Stand up for yourself and don't accept anymore of his excuses.

Loving this story. Please update soon. 



Author's Response:

haha. Great tirade. right on all accounts. Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 04 2013 04:51 am

Title: Cast

I can't believe that Nadia is planning on spending her time trying to get rid of Sasha because she doesn't fit into her idea of the standard of beauty.  Nadia should  mind her own business. I hope Sasha takes her to the nearest mirror  and tell her she needs to less time worry about her relationship with Dimtri and more time on the phone ordering that large meat lover's pizza with extra cheese  and some juice to fatten her sick  butt up.



Author's Response:

lol. This review was hilarious! Thank you!!

Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2013 04:13 am

Title: Chapter 10

Nadia is a bitch, don't' like her at all. She was very disrespectful to Sasha who is welcome in his home. Dimitri you know how sensitive Sasha is and you made seem like you were ashamed of her. You will need to send your sister packing as that narcissistic heifer is up to no good! Fabulous!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2013 02:37 am

Title: Chapter 10

I loved that Dimitri opened up to Sasha.  He can't see that his sister is a carbon copy of his father.  She wants to control him too!  I hope his eyes opens to her plan to break up him and Sasha before it's too late!



Author's Response:

yup, he is so blinded by his love and affection for his sister he can't see that she has become exactly like her father. Let's hope he sees the light soon before he risks his relationship with Sasha. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 04 2013 02:12 am

Title: Chapter 10

ooooh u are sooo wrong for stopping there!!!! im not liking nadia at all! more please!!! tomorrow works for me. :-)



Author's Response:

haha. No worries, more coming soon. Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2013 01:37 am

Title: Chapter 10

I mean hell keep it going hahaha I don't care if its long lol... I'm teasing but seriously Nadia mind yourself. I don't like her little princess attitude right now. Nope not a fan of the bs princess look...she better check herself. 

Also his father is just one major load of douche 

Great update though you'll have to come fast with another because now i really need to know what happens next.



Author's Response:

lol. Its funny how I havent even introduced the father yet but he already has such a bad name, I fear what the repsonse will be when he finally comes into the picture. :-) Thank you!

Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]
Date: July 04 2013 12:57 am

Title: Chapter 10

update as soon as possible!!



Author's Response:

I will! Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: silentwriter Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03 2013 11:54 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Bravo! You have given your fans another great chapter. 



Author's Response:

Yay! Thank you!

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2013 11:23 pm

Title: Chapter 10

i don't like the fact that nadia just showed up and automatically decided that sasha wasn't good enough for her brother and she barley said two words to her, i can understand her wanting the best for her brother but don't judge just on appearance.....it does suck that dmitri can't really claim what makes him happy and be public about because of what his father might do to ruin it but it seems like his father isn't the only one he should be worried about ruining his relationship with sasha. i'm looking forward to the next update



Author's Response:

nadia has a lot of issues she needs to work out and coming from such a rich family she has inherited her father's elitism, unfortunately. And, yup, you are so right that Dmitri should be looking beyond simply his father for his troubles. Sometimes its right in front of your face but your too blind to see it. smh. Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: sandradee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2013 11:12 pm

Title: Chapter 10

About time..I love this story. Glad with each chapter she is getting stronger.  I hope he defends her when the time comes.



Author's Response:

I hope so too! I think she would be crushed if he proved not willing to fight as much as she would for their relationship. We'll see... thank you! 

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2013 10:31 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Awwww man! :D 

Dmitri is so worried about his father being manipulative and messing up his relationship with Sasha he has failed to see the manipulative Nadia who thinks that Sasha is no good for him and who has thoughts of getting rid of Sasha so to speak.

It's not going to be pretty especially with Sasha seemingly finally going to give her whole self to Dmitri.  I hope that Dmitri wises up to his little sister and does not hurt Sasha but with his track record and how he missed the comments from the princess I don't thinks so and he also missed how she manipulated him with their father by telling him about the therapy because like Dimitri said she is/was in denial about her sickness.

Great update.

Thank you for sharing.

Hope to see another soon.



Author's Response:

You are so right! Dmitri is really blinded by his affection and love for his sister which is actually very sad and may prove to be the undoing of his relationship with Sasha. updating soon... thank you for reading!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2013 10:20 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Woooooweeeeeee!!!!! This is getting hot!!!! I hope everything works out between Sasha and Dimitri with Nadia being there and all. Everybody has their own kind of strength what Sasha lacks in confidence she makes up in compassion and sympathy not everyone has that. Keep up the good job looking forward to more very soon!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! More coming soon. 

Reviewer: maident Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03 2013 10:08 pm

Title: Chapter 10

I think miss Nadia has more to worry about in her own life than whether or not Dmitry's girlfriend is "good enough" for him literally within seconds of meeting her. 

Dmitry's home life is kinda effed up.



Author's Response:

It is though. his family is very messed up and i can't wait to go into greater detail about how much. Thank you for your review! Will be updating soon!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2013 10:06 pm

Title: Chapter 10

More!! Soon please 



Author's Response:

More coming soon! :-)

Reviewer: Apple Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2013 08:50 pm

Title: Chapter 10

okay this whole family is crazy no wonder Dimitri left.  The need to keep secrets in his situation is justified.  Nadia should not be talking about Sasha being good enough for her brother.  I just hope he is ready for when life makes an unexpected twist, him ams Sasha.  



Author's Response:

haha. They are crazy! Thank you for reviewing! More coming soon! :-)

Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2013 08:12 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Oooh, the plot thickens. I really hope that Nadia and Sasha can be friends. I think they could learn a lot from each other.



Author's Response:

Aw, I didn't even see it that way. Thanks for the insight!

Reviewer: Dances_With_Pen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2013 07:50 pm

Title: Chapter 10

I love your story...



Author's Response:

Why, thank you! I am very happy to hear that. :-)

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2013 07:47 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Wow so they are really going to do this? Honestly, I was hoping for their first time to be a bit more romantic at least not with his sister there. Speaking of Nadia...well I was surprised it was her given his language and harsh tone but I don't like her at all.  They come from New England money so I'm not shocked that she acts that way but her comments to Sasha were incredibly rude.  She's already judged Sasha based on her appearance alone.  So she doesn't think Sasha is good enough for her brother?  Hmm...let's see what Dmitri has to say about that...I'm still waiting for Sasha to stand up for herself.



Author's Response:

one thing about Dmitri is that he wants what he wants when he wants it. Since he has never had to wait for someone as long as he has for Sasha, no matter when they finally go through with it,he will make sure she 'enjoys' herself. lol Nadia as you will soon find, has a very similar attitude in regards to class that her father has. They are extremely elitist and Dmitri, being aware of that, wishes to protect Sasha as much as possible. Thank you for your review! More coming soon!

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2013 07:43 pm

Title: Chapter 10

no it's okay I like long chapters. keep going. great upupdate. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! the next chapter will be pretty long so prepare yourself! lol

Reviewer: tanyam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 03 2013 07:16 pm

Title: Chapter 10

I like these two together, I hope Nadia doesn't create problems for them & Dmitri doesn't stay blind to what his sister is doing to Sasha. More please...



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: Lindy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2013 07:09 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Can't wait for the next update.......



Author's Response:

It's coming soon! ;-)

Reviewer: alex Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2013 06:42 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Fantastic update!!!



Author's Response:

Why, thank you! ;-)

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 03 2013 05:59 pm

Title: Chapter 10

hate nadia already. just as manipulative as the rest of his family. 



Author's Response:

Yup, you got that right! smh Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2013 05:37 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Wooooo *starts singing Miguel* arch your backkk and point your toes!

 

Love this story, you have me hooked. keep it up and don't keep me waiting too long! :)



Author's Response:

I'll try not to. Thank you for reading! :-)

Reviewer: Bryleigh Lisette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2013 05:32 pm



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