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Title: Chapter 2

I would ask him did he ever take care of that problem....then laugh in his face.

I love the story and I can't wait for the next up date.

 Reviewer: bebe2pink Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2013 10:01 pm
Title: Chapter 1

So far so good love sport stories....

 Reviewer: alex Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2013 08:26 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Is it too soon to call in sick tomottow...and the rest of the week?

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 07 2013 06:22 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Good job. But he doesn't seem like he has changed. 

 Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07 2013 04:36 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Oh my, I knew was that douche of a man....that's just her life.

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 07 2013 02:56 pm
Title: Chapter 2

I agree with Skylark by the time she ends this job she may end up the looney bin or on death row. What a bunch of wacky characters. My favorite is dude talking about she had awaken the black mamba. Thanks for a great LOL.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2013 02:35 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Somehow I am not surprise that he'd first client is Chandler. What an asshole!  I was hoping that she'd punch that bitch but that damn Judith is fast.  Brianna the hobag really that Sky would really forgive her and they'd remain besties, that ho is delusional!   Why in the hell is Chandler smirking, you're chronic who got busted?  Mr. Krieger is disgusting and that ho Mandy is beyond nasty she bust needs to be santitized! 

This was good!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2013 01:57 pm
Title: Chapter 1

WOW WOW WOW I HAD TO CATCH MY BREATH. SO DANG GOOD!

 Reviewer: Cora Jay Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07 2013 09:53 am
Title: Chapter 1

Initially, I read this fiction because I lovelove, love baseball and hoped it would relate to the story. After reading the first chapter. I'm not so sure she will even attend another ball game. Haha.

Skylar should celebrate, she just got rid of some dead weight in the form of a boyfriend/best friend. I hope the cheating doesn't turn into insecurities for her or stops her from looking for love. I will still read, but I would love some variety.

 Reviewer: peachmartini Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06 2013 05:07 am
Title: Chapter 1

Not bad...I would love to know how she gets even.

 Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2013 10:03 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I really like this story! Update soon?

 Reviewer: Storyteller247 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2013 06:17 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Off to a great start. Update soon please. 

 Reviewer: Karmal Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2013 05:23 pm
Title: Chapter 1

This is off to a great start. 

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 04 2013 05:09 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Some best friend! Well at least she knows her friend is a looser and she needs to drop her. As for the boyfriend from the discription he sounds imature and she shouldnt be surprised her insticts were correct. As much as it hurts move on find someon else. Wonder why Brian told her were Chandler was!? Wonder if he has a secret crush on her!? Great start look forward to more

 Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2013 03:40 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I really like this beginning, I just hope that Skylar is not a weakling whose going to forgive her so called best friend. I can't wait to read more!

 Reviewer: Peanut Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2013 03:23 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Good start...why do best friends steal their best friends boyfriend. I hope she drops both of those losers. Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2013 03:09 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I like it and off top, that would have been an ass whipping. Not only her supposed "boyfriend" but the best friend too? And they didn't use condoms?! ! I can't and I won't. I'm glad that she finally listened to her intuition but looks like it was 6 months too late.

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 04 2013 01:12 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Y.ou know this happens to a lot of girl..even me, when I was younger...fools want to play the field and still have a main girl...even try to mistreat you in front of them..but of course I wasn't having any of that.. Do not disrespect me because u were caught....but of course you have to go through the bad to get to the good in order to win...

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2013 01:09 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Chandler is an asshole!  Why get revenge over a relationship that never really was?  That was not the time that Chandler cheated on you Shylar. Brianna is not your friend,  so I do hope that she doesn't let her back in. Good start! !

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2013 01:06 pm
Title: Chapter 1

good start. I can't wait for more. I hope she joins the baseball team and out play him, and take his spot, now that would be getting even.

 Reviewer: dimples Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2013 10:45 am
Title: Chapter 1

I have not read your story, but I am a fan of the movie a League of Their Own and no matter what Im doing or where I hear that line I automatically laugh.  I can just hear Tom Hanks saying it.  

 Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 04 2013 07:30 am


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