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Title: Chapter 1

It's a good start, but watch your tenses. 

 Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16 2013 03:07 am
Title: Chapter 1

I'm Hooked, line, sinker!

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12 2013 10:37 pm
Title: Chapter 1

What a way to find out who your father is and to be stared out lasciviously by her uncle?  But hey I guess that incest means nothing when you are god!!  Looking forward to reading about Jamie's reaction to meeting her father and to the real reason why Zeus and Hades have shown themselves.  Good stuff!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2013 01:14 am
Title: Chapter 1

It's definitely an interesting start. I'd like to see how you develop these characters.

 Reviewer: mags Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2013 11:23 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Love it! Give us more!

 Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2013 07:52 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Please update soon. I really like the story and the characterization of hades and Zeus . I wonder if there is a backstory of Zues and Jezebel and how you will incorporate that into the story?

 Reviewer: Tea rose amber Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 07 2013 07:21 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I love it ! update ASAP!

 

 Reviewer: RedMoon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2013 07:07 pm


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