Re: Turk’s comments on Rory being “loose”. When did Turk last speak to Kyra? He can’t comment when he himself exploited someone’s feelings in the name of his “cause”. To top it off the woman that he took advantage of is a single mother, which adds another layer of f’d up there, was probably playing with her child’s feelings as well.
Reviewer: K Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 15 2018 05:02 pm
This story was everything like freaking amazing! Wow, I was so entertained from the start. I didn't want this to end omg! This is a number one in my book what a gem of an author you are and don't you dare deny it your writing skills are fabulous... you need to get this published asap but first I need more so yeah book two is a must . Wow I can't wait to read more from you and hope you continue and never stop writing you have an amazing gift of story telling I'm such a comic fan flash been one of my faves. Roy's was such a bad ass and that Vic, huba huba huba what a worthy male for Roy. I love how nothing in this story dragged on it was like watching an action movie and thel love scenes yaaaasss lawd so freaking hot were those two. Thank you for sharing this amazing story. An a infinity of stars goes to my dear!!!!
Reviewer: meme Signed [Report This]Date: November 12 2017 08:46 am
they are so hot together!
Reviewer: meme Signed [Report This]Date: November 10 2017 08:01 am
Omg that was beautiful! Im so happy for them!!!!!!
Closing my eyes, I held him tighter than I ever had.
“I love you, Rory Daniels.” I breathed in deeply, never so content in my life. “Aurora.” He was silent for only a moment. “I love you, Aurora.”
Date: November 10 2017 07:39 am
UUUUUHHHUUUUUGGG!!!!! TURK!!! you freaking jerk she had that lady rescue you and this is how you repay her! And to think I was like wheres Turk I want more of Turk!
Ugh! they were so close to getting it on! Damn they gotta be sexualy frustrated as hell!
Damn Turk go back to where you came from!
Reviewer: meme Signed [Report This]Date: November 10 2017 07:03 am
I didnt realize I was holding my breath till I was done reading this chapter!
Reviewer: meme Signed [Report This]Date: November 10 2017 05:31 am
Oh yeah, this was another awesome chapter! Girl you can write some entertaing stuff here!!! So Rory has another ability and Scar is up to no good smh... I hope they find out soon and I hope Rory and Vic get some action and yes I mean the naughty kind lol!
I wonder why Turk didnt tell them the guy was at the bar we found out why Scar didnt she was up to no no good and also Ali if they are watching on the screen back at the ship?
Reviewer: meme Signed [Report This]Date: November 09 2017 10:28 pm
I just loved this chapter. Rory got her act together Vic awe le sigh... And they got use their abilities yeah oh and Finally Turk was in this chapter lol fave line
My mind was completely warped in an erotic whistle daze a minute, ago.
Reviewer: meme Signed [Report This]Date: November 09 2017 08:32 pm
I want to get to the part where they practice there powers and I want Rory to chill out and get it together she's being a little immature for age and I want Scarlet to get what's coming to her and where the heck is Turk? Lol! Missy is the cutest thing... Gosh I'm loving this and need to take my butt to bed but can't stop reading
Reviewer: meme Signed [Report This]Date: November 09 2017 10:47 am
Oh goodie this fun it's like xmen but cooler
Reviewer: meme Signed [Report This]Date: November 09 2017 06:16 am
Oh this is amazing!!!!
Reviewer: meme Signed [Report This]Date: November 09 2017 05:57 am
This was such a kick-ass book! Rory is totally frustrating sometimes, especially cause even when she's wrong it turns out right, but I let it go because her and Vic r q.d. pies. You are really good at writing the action in, and I can't help but think this is the better version of x-men. I kinda wonder if another heroine will come in and steal her spotlight, because she can't be the only one capable of next level shit, right?
On to track the sequel!
Reviewer: monsgors Signed [Report This]Date: March 08 2014 06:24 pm
Rory is reall acting stupid she needs to be more realistic.
Reviewer: fanaserie Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 18 2013 04:11 pm
Can't say that left me with fewer questions than before. Rory is more powerful than she knows. I admit for a while there were moments that had me.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: October 11 2013 04:17 pm
Something did not feel right and I suppose that is what is transpiring at this very moment. Rory may not always follow orders but she is doing the actions that are necessary now. Things can go either way but she knows that she must do something.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: October 11 2013 03:40 pm
Things are heating up. This new info changes everything that much is apparent. Nothing is certain and Rory is cleatrly going against his orders some habits never go away.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: October 11 2013 03:13 pm
It seems that not everything is perfect. She still has a lot to learn and I can understand why she has difficulty seeing that.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: October 11 2013 09:36 am
Rory never ceases to amaze. She has unseen potential and a power she was not aware of. She also has to deal with alot of uncertainties ahead of her.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: October 08 2013 04:48 am
That is an upgrade. No pun intended.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: October 06 2013 05:36 am
Rory is becoming more responsible but she still remembers to be true to herself as well as listens to others. Coming from her that is some progress.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: September 18 2013 04:29 pm
What a turn of events.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: September 13 2013 04:43 am
What a turn of events.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: September 13 2013 04:43 am
As much as I love the lovey dovey moments, there is still more to this story.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: September 08 2013 11:03 pm