Great updates. They are getting closer and looking forward to getting their friends back. wonderful
Reviewer: Mocomath Signed [Report This]Date: August 29 2013 05:35 am
Awesome update. I was getting so scared for a moment. Why Rory can't see that Vic loves her. Cause I see it. She need to stop fighting her feelings and questioning his emotions towards her and embrace them. Can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: Treale Signed
[Report This]Date: August 29 2013 02:58 am
make him have a big dick please lol like eleven inches
Reviewer: PillsburyReadings Signed [Report This]Date: August 29 2013 01:54 am
Wow, why did they seek out research center? Did he really expect to go in there with no difficulties at all? How how they getting out of this trap? Who is Gaila Eden? Doesn't Vic realize that he can't anyone in that organization? More please!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 29 2013 01:51 am
Omgggggggg!!!! I'm about to have a panic attack!! I knew something was going to happened. LARWWWWWDDDDD HAVE MERCY!!!
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: August 28 2013 11:49 pm
This story is so good, you have such a way with words and I really feel strong emotions for all the characters!
Even Scarlett it flip flops from I feel sorry for her, to da hell is her problem? lol
Also Vic and Rory's chemistry is so wonderfully written I can almost feel it through the screen!
Really sad about Nate, Ali and Missy I really love Missy!!
I dunno why but I imagine Rory would look so cute without the tatos, piercing and blue hair but maybe she uses it as a shield? I dunno I think you hinted at something like that before?
Anways I can't wait for more chapters!! I re read the whole story twice today!!!!
Reviewer: Lila Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 28 2013 10:26 pm
Like I stated earlier, Rory really did have the last laugh. I see why Knight was not so.hard on her. This may be a step in the right direction. The military person was a red flag for me and that is not a good sign. Vic and Rory came to a somewhat undestanding. Seeing Rory progress in her abilities was a breatg of fresh air. As for Scarlett and Nate taking off after Vic put his arm on her opened a new can of worms.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: August 28 2013 09:34 pm
I am scared to say the word progress where Rory and Vic are concerned. I am happy that they finalky opened up to each other but Rory is so use to being by herself that she doesn't know lI've when she sees it or feels it. Vic is going to have wear down her defenses. Your instincts about Scar are right Rory stick to your guns. SO GOOD!
Author's Response:
Vic definitely has his work cut out for him, and he's got to rid himself of that clingy Scar, lol
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 28 2013 03:16 pm
*Tear* *Tear* I feel so sorry for them. Goddamn it YOU!! You done did it again! My emotions is all over the place. Lol. This chapter really touch me. Now I really understand them both even better now. Wonderful update!
p.s can't wait for the romantic stuff now! Oweeeeeeeee. Lol ツ
Author's Response:
I'm so sorry D: It had to be done, though ;) I'm so glad you liked it :-)
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: August 28 2013 08:46 am
LARRRRWWWDDDDD HAVE MERCY!!!!! Is all I can say!!! Lol
Author's Response:
LOL!
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: August 28 2013 07:54 am
You have serious talent man. You should try and get published, make this a full series.
Author's Response:
Oh my gosh! That's so sweet of you to say. I've thought about it with this one. Not sure yet. I really appreciate you saying so :D
Reviewer: Ashash Signed [Report This]Date: August 28 2013 07:11 am
Thanks for a good update.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: August 28 2013 05:02 am
I didn't know that Knight would turn out to be that evil. Knight and that General neex to be shot point blank right between the eyes. I can't believe that killed Ali and I hope that Missy is still alive. Please take care of Nate.
Author's Response:
You're so graphic, lol. I love it. We'll see what happens with the crew in the next few chapters :)
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 28 2013 04:42 am
No! Not Nate and Ali! Why?!
Author's Response:
:(
Reviewer: Msj Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 28 2013 04:38 am
Rory needs to be smarter about keeping herself safe. She seems like a hard headed person that doesn't listen to people. Maybe that is why she doesn't have any friends. Plus she is ignoring her body speaking to her. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: August 28 2013 04:37 am
Hmm. Interesting. Where is miss Plague (my nickname ror Scarlett)? I love this!
Author's Response:
Oh, she's coming soon, lol
Reviewer: Astrid Signed [Report This]Date: August 28 2013 03:20 am
Whoa lots of action. I hope Nates sister isn't dead and ill Missy who I just love. Oh Rory is crazy if she thought Vic was going to risk her life. Can't she see he's in love. Swoon. Gimme more.lol. Good update.
Author's Response:
I know! Sigh... She really is in denial, lol
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: August 28 2013 03:08 am
What.......the...........fudge???Oh heck no Knight be on dat stuff. He don done the wrong thang now, got VicTOR F*** the F***ed up for messin widd Rory Foreal!!!!!
Reviewer: Ayoo_Joi Signed [Report This]Date: August 28 2013 02:46 am
OMG!!!!! Why Ali had to die? Knight so full of shit!!!!! Here I go again!! You got my emotions all over the place. I can't deal at the moment. Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
I'm so sorry! So much sadness happening :(
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: August 28 2013 02:42 am
Can't wait! :0)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: August 28 2013 01:11 am
i am sooooooo addicted to this story, please let stay this way to the end
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Reviewer: dounome Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 28 2013 12:51 am
Omfg!! Why did you end it there??? No JESUS WHY NO!!!
Author's Response:
LOL! So sorry. It's updated now :D
Reviewer: Ayoo_Joi Signed [Report This]Date: August 28 2013 12:33 am
Two steps forward and twelve steps back. Why is Rory staying with the league? She is not letting anyone in so if she doesn't need anyone why participate in the league? Vic is really anal when it comes to Scar, why can't see that the girl ain't right? In fact none of them can see that Scar is tricky, why?? Rory you should have given Missy some slack she is an teenager after all and is allowed to her petty jealous affect her. More please!!!
Author's Response:
Agreed. Rory is pretty much in denial. She wants to be there, but just doesn't want people to know, lol
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 28 2013 12:23 am
I hope soon means tonight since I check for this story every hour on the hour. Rory needs to cut Missy some slack or she is going to find herself alone. Now Im starting to give Turk the crooked eye as well. I hope he is not with Scarlet doing something shifty. Love it great update. Ohh and what is Vic's problem his reaction seems harsh.
Author's Response:
I love hearing that! It's up. It's up! :D
Reviewer: Acdromance Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 27 2013 11:37 pm
Omgggggggg NOOOOOOOOOOOOI!!!! WHY VIC WHY!!!!!!!! I'm so heart broken. Vic broke my heart. And Missy omg. My emotions all over the place. How can you leave me like that? Lol. Update soon!!
Author's Response:
We will see more about this topic very soon! These two are both so stubborn, LOL
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: August 27 2013 11:35 pm