Yes what is Scarlet up to!
Reviewer: Avapriceless1 Signed
[Report This]Date: August 27 2013 11:34 pm
I love it!!!
Okay, Why is Vic trippin' over Rory's new power?
I wanna know what that crazy nut Scarlett is into!
More please :)
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: August 27 2013 09:39 pm
I love this story, keep up the good updates .
Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed [Report This]Date: August 27 2013 08:47 pm
GIRRLLLLLLLLLLLLL I KNEW IT I KNEW IT!!! I knew that was hoe was no good!!!! Lol and Why was Vic being a asshole to Rory? Maybe she should've told him before But that doesn't mean he has to be a meanie about it!! I still love him though. Can't wait for the next update!!!
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: August 27 2013 08:23 pm
I knew that ho Scar couldn't be trusted. I hope that she tells Vic what she saw but his dumb trusting ass won't beleive Rory. What was in that vial? Who was talking too and she being traiter to people who consider her friend? Is Nate involved in her Scar's nefarious activities? So good!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 27 2013 02:52 pm
I like the baby he does sound like he can get into a lot of mischief. Why is Rory so suspicious of Turk, maybe because of his name. He sounds like a bad ass. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: August 27 2013 02:45 pm
Good prologue. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: August 27 2013 01:48 pm
This is a great story I'm really loving it.
Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]Date: August 27 2013 05:37 am
I am glad that Rory and Vic have now called a truce and started over but I want that bitch Scar to die a horrible death. Before she dies I want Rory to hit her with a ridge hand to her throat followed by a roundhouse kick to the head. If she has the power to phaze to phaze her hand through her chest pulling her heart out. Just saying... What is Nate's malfunction? Why is he following behind Scar now? Nate is going to put himself on my list of characters who should be beaten with nun-chucks.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 27 2013 05:24 am
Hmmmm....so what's on the horizon with nate????
Reviewer: Astrid Signed [Report This]Date: August 27 2013 03:30 am
I love Rory yes she is a little self centered but she's in her early twenties so that sounds about right. I enjoy the balance that Missy brings I hope she finds a love interest. Rory needs to apologize to Nate she pulled a scumbag move and needs to own up to it. Don't kill me but I feel bad for Scarlet she is obviously afraid of losing Vic and acting out. The change in dynamic is hard. Please update.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2013 11:31 pm
This chapter was entertaining. Lol Missy so cute and funny. I knew that Scarlet bitch closed Rory in that pantry. Ugh!!
On a happy note....YAYYYYYYYY They bonding again!! Team Ric!!!
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2013 10:21 pm
Great story. Can't wait to find out what she does with that lipstick!
Author's Response:
Oh, just wait! Rory did Scarlet bogus, lol!
Reviewer: Astrid Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2013 12:17 pm
Ahmazing
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Reviewer: aranciata Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2013 06:25 am
The past is sometimes painfull.
Author's Response:
Very true.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2013 06:10 am
Okay well that was intense. The back story for Scarlett was sad but her words to Rory made me think otherwise. Despite her persona, Rory is a threat to her. Rory will have the last laugh in a literal sense.
Author's Response:
I agree on all fronts :D
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2013 05:54 am
It seems that Rory is the the only one with a tale. As for the situation in the laundry room, it was only a matter of time. The fact they are attracted to one another is clear. The problem is that they are too stubborn to admit it. The scars on his back is a shock and might explain some things. Rory is taken back by this and for once she has nothing she wants to say out loud.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2013 05:27 am
Wow, that was powerful Rory's mother saved her by locking her in a closet. I know that ho Scar locked her in that pantry. I am loving all of these updates, you are the bestest and most awesomest!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, dear!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2013 03:51 am
I really hate Scarlett!!! I just want to know when Vic is going to wake up about Scar that ho ain't right. I really want Rory to hit Scar with a ridge hand to her throat really hard.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2013 03:40 am
Rory really annoys me, she really cares about no one else. She is fighting her feelings for Vic. I love that new picture of Vic, that man is fine!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2013 03:28 am
This is only the beginning. I understand the need to be free and I suppose that Rory has not grasped that she is longer in the world she is used to. She is constantly fighting back.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2013 12:49 am
well no one said it was going to be easy.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2013 12:35 am
So good! I bet scarlet is behind the drama.
Author's Response:
We shall see! thanks for the comment!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 26 2013 12:22 am
I seriously love this story. If you need a beta or an editor let me know!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I defintiely might take you up on that :D
Reviewer: Storyteller247 Signed [Report This]Date: August 25 2013 11:00 pm
I am a feind for this story. You gotta give me another few chapters.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: August 25 2013 08:47 pm