Thank you Ms. B! I'm already hooked just from your first chapter. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11 2013 07:42 am
Alfred grinned at her. “I also chose the name Alfred because of Alfred Pennyworth from the Batman movies. It is my desire to service you.”
Holy sh*t. Ovaries have officially exploded. Well, done. Continue please :-)
Reviewer: writinglass Signed [Report This]Date: September 11 2013 06:38 am
Love it already please update soon
Reviewer: jcjoie Signed [Report This]Date: September 11 2013 05:45 am
Well damn Alfred! I like that you had Alfred already awake in the box. And that he had picked his own name. But Alfred? Alfred is not sexy and all oc tbose Alfred's that he mentioned were not sexy. This Alfred is sexy!! Selena won't know what hit her. Brenda you always hit an homerun!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 11 2013 05:02 am
Loveit.
Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed [Report This]Date: September 11 2013 05:02 am
This is very cute!!!! I like it. Very humorous.
Reviewer: LolaWrites Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 11 2013 04:21 am
I liked the history of the name Alfred. Selena may not be able to handle her new man, LOL. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: September 11 2013 04:17 am
I really enjoyed this first chapter. Well written and I love Alfred already, I can't wait for more. It was really great. :) I really do look forward for an update.
Reviewer: cottoncandy_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: September 11 2013 04:10 am
Love, Love the beginning of this story. You are so clever and an amazing writer! Totally digging Alfred's cheek!! LOL
More soon please!!
Reviewer: Night57byrd Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 11 2013 04:05 am
I love the way your mind works! I hope this isnt all!?
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed [Report This]Date: September 11 2013 03:32 am
LMAO!!!! LOOOOOVE IT!
Reviewer: Cora Jay Signed [Report This]Date: September 11 2013 03:30 am
Great start. This actually reminds me of a live action japanese show. I forgot the name of it though.... Please continue!
Reviewer: LuKohana Signed [Report This]Date: September 11 2013 03:22 am
Damn good start ! Outstanding and very creative story idea. Dang I really need to make me an Alfred in real life. Loving this story already ! More more more PLEASE ! :)
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 11 2013 03:15 am
I like this. Alfred. is to cute. He a lil freaky. Lol
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: September 11 2013 03:00 am
I enjoy how your mind works. Can't wait for the update!
Reviewer: Fantasque Signed [Report This]Date: September 11 2013 02:57 am
Alfred grinned at her. “I also chose the name Alfred because of Alfred Pennyworth from the Batman movies. It is my desire to service you.”
YES MS. BRENDA!!!
I love it. I'm loving it!
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: September 11 2013 02:54 am
lol. the banter between to character is breath taking and logical
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: September 11 2013 02:44 am