I love this story but zoe and munro can suck it and die. Zoe because she's a guppie witch and munro  because he took zoes side without finding out what was going on. 

I've FINALLY gotten the chance to sit down and read your story, and let me just say, it's super AWESOME! But it's a creation forged from your amazing mind, so awesomeness was totally to be expected.

I can't wait until Mickey's layers are peeled back to reveal who she truly is. I believe there's an inner mean girl in ALL woman, and the meaner you are is sometimes just a direct result of trying to cover up and mask your pain, insecurities, demons, or whatever it may be that you can't risk revealing to the world. Hurt them before they can hurt you. I sooooo get it. I hope Munro will be the one to help Mickey realize and BELIEVE that she most definitely does deserve happiness! I believe this is going to be an amazing 'coming of age' story for both of them, and I have nothing but faith in your ability to tell it. Can't wait until your next update!