Thanks to you ...I am at work crying.....you have such a beautiful gift and you wield it so masterfully!!! Thank you thank you thank you!!
Author's Response:
You are very welcome. Thank YOU for taking this journey with me and for the wonderful compliment, Artamiss Caine! And sorry for the worktime tears : )
Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]Date: May 02 2015 11:56 pm
That was absol-fuckin-lutely amazing!! Richard and Mercedes are completely evil without an once of redeeming qualities within them! David is alive, thank you for Joelle. An deserves to feel completely loved and so does Nat. Those babies are precious!!The beast that was Barbara has been slain, yassssssssssss! I really hated that heifer! Just wonderful. I have just two more words for you Joelle, Awesome sauce!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks Pmgayles!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks Pmgayles!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 02 2015 11:54 pm
Absolutely beautiful! This was amazing, and I just loved it! 😃😂💖💖💖😭😭😍😍😄
Author's Response:
Thanks Musicluva! So glad to hear you enjoyed the story, and thanks for reviewing and taking this journey with me.
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: May 02 2015 11:27 pm
This may very well be one of the finest books I've ever read! I literally created an account just so I could reread it and leave notes in every chapter about my original reactions. It's that good!!! You should put this up on Wattpad, which is way more interactive with a younger audience. They would flip over this! I am truly a #FanForLife with anything you decide to write about. This was simply perfection on a stick!
Author's Response:
Wow, thanks GreenRoots!!! What a fantastic compliment. I've never posted to Wattpad, but I'll definitely look into it. Thanks again for the wonderful review!
Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed [Report This]Date: April 29 2015 08:09 am
Awwww, I'm over here trying not to cry. She's really preggers this time and not only that, but she's having twins, a girl and a boy!! I'm so ridiculously happy for Ant and Natalia. After everything they've been through individually and as a couple they certainly need and deserve this piece of happiness. I'm also thrilled that Anthony knows a bit more about his father and that he has uncles out there somewhere and has agreed to hire Natalia's PI to find him. I have truly loved this story, its heart wrenching moments, and those other moments that made me blush and fan myself. Eshan and Joss will always be my favorite couple that you created, but Anthony and Natalia are second, and I'm ready for the ending but also sad because this story is ending. This chapter was awesomesauce.
Author's Response:
Thanks Lapis Love! I'm so happy to know you've enjoyed the story, and I truly appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts. Thanks again!
Reviewer: Lapis Love Signed [Report This]Date: April 21 2015 02:55 pm
when will have a chance to read the epilogue. I want to find out if Ant finds his father, how their pregnancy is going and if Rich will ever settle down.
Thank you for your story, i is well writen and got me attached to them, I hope you get publish because more readers should get the chance to fall in love with them.
Author's Response:
I've been working on the epilogue, but hit a roadblock. I'm hoping inspiration will strike again soon and I can get it done and posted. I'll do my best not to keep you waiting too long.
I don't have any plans to publish. But I do appreciate the vote of confidence and your review. Thanks Kia!
Reviewer: kia Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 20 2015 11:29 pm
she placates too much
Author's Response:
Once again, not sure what you're referring to (something general or specific). In this chapter, she let Richard in but was abrasive and allowed him to believe they might get to together later because she knew it was the only way he would leave. Not my definition of placation (or Webster's), but you're certainly entitled to your interpretation.
Reviewer: lonieg Signed [Report This]Date: April 18 2015 07:37 am
I thought this story was so supposed to seem realistic. I'm sorry but what just happened was not realistic. Nevertheless, still love the story. Natalia is a confusing character though. She was constantly calling Anthony out for the stuff he did, but Jamsion gets away with everything kuz he's so "perfect???"...more like creepy. It's evident that she's still hasn't fully healed from what happened with richard or anthony because she's continuing on a horrible spiral. She needs to try focusing on her a little more and figuring out what she wants and take a step back from relationships. She's strong though, I'm sure she'll figure herself out, hopefully it won't be too little too late!!
Author's Response:
Natalia was accommodating when it came to Jamison because, as you pointed out, she was still traumatized over the loss of the pregnancy and her relationships with both Anthony and Richard, and because Jamison was patient with her and willing to give the very thing they had refused her: The dignity of being acknowledged before his family (a family that embraced her as one of their own).
I'm not sure what exactly about the chapter you found unrealisitc, or if it was the chapter as a whole. But in light of Natalia's history with both Anthony and Richard, Jamison's ability and willingness to give her the future she wanted, and the fact that I wrote it, it's safe to assume I would beg to differ. If you'd like a more specific response, you're welcome to email me at joellejax@ymail.com or leave another review if you prefer.
Reviewer: lonieg Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18 2015 05:09 am
That was a really good update. I was happy when they were told they were having twins. Now its time to announce wedding plans. They shoud invite Richard. Afterall he's reason they are together, although he scarred both of them. The least they can do is get him a good seat right up front.
Author's Response:
Lol. Yeah, but he'd probably come with forty pounds of explosive strapped to his chest and a detonator in his hand.
Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 17 2015 02:26 am
I've never been happier for a pair of characters as I am for Anthony and Natalia.
I was relieved and sad with this chapter.
Relieved because Natalia and Anthony have their little blessings confirmed and sad because this is the end of their story....
They made me mad at them, they made me cry for them, they made me want to fight for them and comfort them... I was able to sympathize and empathize with these two and believe they deserve their HEA.
Ms. JAX marvelous as usual. You've raised the bar and now you have me impatiently anticipating your next creation....
Thank you for gracing us with your skills!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the wonderful review, Sharlene! It is very much appreciated. I'm so glad you were able to empathize wiith Anthony and Natalia and enjoyed their story. And while I too am sad to see this tale end, I'm excited for the next and having you along for the ride. : )
Reviewer: sharlene Signed [Report This]Date: April 16 2015 08:38 pm
Aaaaaaaaaaaaw, I thought this story was far from over, I am surely going to miss Natalia and Anthony and Rich. :D :D
Author's Response:
Aw. Me too. Thanks Dounome!
Reviewer: dounome Signed [Report This]Date: April 15 2015 09:36 am
perfect.
Author's Response:
Thanks Astrid!
Reviewer: Astrid Signed [Report This]Date: April 15 2015 05:00 am
Yes!! *moonwalking across the floor*
Author's Response:
Lol. Thanks Crayola!
Reviewer: crayola10 Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 14 2015 08:51 pm
I need a moment.....sniff
Author's Response:
Take all the time you need.
Lol. Thanks VeMo!
Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 14 2015 03:52 am
I hate to see this end, but it has too. This is a well rounded story. Are you going to tell a story about Rich? He is the ass that you have to love. I want him to get his happiness too.
Author's Response:
Thanks Dallas5Star! I'm kind of fond of Rich myself. I hope to write his story. Just waiting for inspiration to hit.
Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed [Report This]Date: April 14 2015 12:13 am
This was a very well written story. I loved it from beginning to end! Will there possibly be a sequel to this?
Also, you once wrote a short story about a man of middle eastern descent working in the CIA but disguised as a mechanic. His wife comes to visit him at the repair shop and seduces him. That was hands down the best short story i have ever read on the site! Are you going to revamp that story and make it longer? I really enjoyed it and i have been waiting for years for you to start it up again =)
Author's Response:
Thanks! So glad you enjoyed it. There is the possibility of a sequel/spin-off that'll focus on Rich and include Natalia, Anthony, and the twins. I'm just waiting for the ideas to coalesce.
I really loved the characters from the short story you're talking about, Unscheduled Maintenance, and do plan on writing a prequel to it that shows how they met and fell in love, and possibly a follow-up. I just have to find the time. Thanks for the wonderful compliment and your interest!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 13 2015 11:30 pm
Awwwwwwww! Brilliant, just simply brilliant story, finally a light after a long, lonely, arduous tunnel. Yep, finally a real vindication.
Awesome writing, JJ, for all the times I want to give up on this story, this chapter made it truly worth sticking till the end.
Author's Response:
Thanks Agape Realms!
Reviewer: Agape Realms Signed [Report This]Date: April 13 2015 09:56 pm
JJ, what a wonderful story...your writing never fails to evoke such a variety of emotions within the reader, that one cannot help getting swept up with the tale and carried along.
You had me laughing, crying, cussing, fussing, indignant; a whole range of emotions when reading this wonderful tale.
Thank-you for the amazing read, and for bringing Nat and Ant through the storm with so much to look forward to; two new lives to make their lives even more complete.
So glad Ant and Rich made up; Rich is a true brother; one Ant will always be able to count on, regardless of whether or not they share a blood-bond. He has shown time and time again that he is the real deal, and I'm glad Ant recognized that and forgave him.
Can't wait for the epilogue; you have outdone yourself once again!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the fantastic review, Amiefuzzy! : ) Rich's character was an unexpected something that I truly enjoyed writing, especially his relationship with Anthony. So glad you enjoyed their reconciliation and Ant and Nat's story. The epilogue is in the works. Thanks again!
Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed [Report This]Date: April 13 2015 01:39 pm
This was a great chapter. I am glad that Anthony wants to know more about his father and that Natalia gave him the space to make that decision. I had a feeling they were going to have twins and a boy and a girl at that. I loved that Natalia was still apprehensive about being pregnant until she fully understood the words coming out of the doctors mouth. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks JovanBleu! So glad you enjoyed the chapter. Epilogue in the works.
Author's Response:
Thanks JovanBleu! So glad you enjoyed the chapter. Epilogue in the works.
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed [Report This]Date: April 13 2015 12:13 pm
Oh happy Happy Joy Joy so glad they found out they are happy twins fraternal a boy & a girl like double for their trouble. Glad he knows a little about his dad & other family even if it's through a book. Now they are gonna have a results getting PI who is gonna get them the answers long held from him. Can't wait. Both of them have went through so much it's great they have each other plus they deserve happiness,peace & truth.
Author's Response:
I agree. Thanks Kvgurl!
Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 13 2015 11:07 am
Thank God! Keeping her and the babies in my prayers. Now, Anthony needs to find his father. I also think it's time for a little sexual healing ('carefule' sexual healing) for Ant and Talia. With all the pressures of life they've experienced, they're way long over due. 😉
Lovely update!
Author's Response:
Lol @ the 'careful' sexual healing. The setting for the epilogue won't really allow for any of that, but rest assured, as soon as the doctor gave the go ahead, these two were back at it. Thanks Musicluva!
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: April 13 2015 10:15 am
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! See, see I'm good for ideas man! I was like whoop whoop!!!!!!!!!! Twins!!! I'm glad they're being blessed . But can we talk about extending for like two..no three more chapters? Can we meet the dad and family and the babies ??? Please I beg of you! Do you like cake ? I make great like great cakes ..and pies ..and cheesecakes ... Just tell me what you want girl! a86;a039; Im also for disowning parental units that are unhealthy for you. Just poof be gone is how I feel. I can love and respect you as my parent from a distance...some people aren't healthy to be around
Author's Response:
Lol! You sure picked the right currency. I'm a sucker for anything sweet. No worries. You will get to meet the twins and see how the familial relationships have faired in the epilogue. Delivering David and several more chapters is, unfortunately, a promise I can't make. But the epilogue will be fairly long and there's a looming possibility of a story for Rich where you're likely see quite a bit of Anthony, Natalia, and the twins. I hope that makes up for it. Thanks for reviewing, RedMoon!
Reviewer: RedMoon Signed [Report This]Date: April 13 2015 08:02 am
f.me. i'm crying. this was perfect just perfect. so so happy right now...!! TWINS! hell yeah...!!
thank you for making my monday. JJ! THANK YOU!
Author's Response:
YW. Thank you, Yuukiyanagi!
Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed [Report This]Date: April 13 2015 07:37 am
YASSSSSSSSSSSS! alls you have to do is claim it.
Author's Response:
Lol. Amen. Thanks BellaChica!
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: April 13 2015 07:08 am
Fantastic update
Author's Response:
Thanks Bredreaway!
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: April 13 2015 06:18 am