Wow.

Why does he not realize that what he is doing, hiding behind this Candace-story with his family is basically the same thing that Richard did to her. If the family still doesn't know about her, he could have told the truth, and Richard wouldve had to shut his face or come clean.

Not surprised Richard is sniffing around her again, she's become high value to him again, as the one who got away, rather than the one he threw away. Please don't let her keep talking to him.

What a pleasant surprise awaited me when I visited the Chamber tonight. Thank you! But JJax you should really stop trying to kill a woman okay… LOL… I must admit I held my breath while reading this chapter and finally I couldn’t take it anymore when I read Anthony may have messed up big time and so I quickly went to the end of the chapter. I was RELIEVED to discover that Ant didn’t mess up. I am hoping Natalia will have a similar epiphany. I am hoping against hope  that Natalia didn’t allow Richard, the massive liar, to mess up her head. Just dealing with her pending infertility is enough drama without having to deal with Richard and his crap. I hope she hears Anthony out before she makes any harsh decisions. Gees Anthony and Natalia!

I lol when when Anthony agreed to hook up his brother with Barbara. 

Good job. Love the excitement and the heart tugs. Hope you hear from you soon! 

You scared me for a minute because I was about to scream at Anthony for sleeping with that chick. I think both NatAlie and Anthiny need to truly open up to each other because I think they both got spooked by what the doctor said and have to figure out what they both want. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I need Anthony and Natalia to get their shit together!! Let the pereverbial cats outta the freaking bags and piss or get off the pot!!!  Geez!! Do they get on their own nerves?!!

Oh I'm sorry when i clicked on it at first for some reason it stated hat the book was done. 

Can;t wait for the next chapter

Just got caught up on the last three chapters. Barbara is a beotch of the highest degree, and I was hoping that Natalia or Anthony, but mostly Natalia would accidentally on purpose trip her down the stairs. She's just too self-righteous and vicious for my blood and if I were Natalia I would have demanded my house key back and changed the locks for good measure. Get a restraining order, something. Why Barbara thinks brow beating and insulting her "future" niece or nephew and the baby's father would improve anything, she's just the worst, and she needed to be brought down several pegs.

I don't have anything nice to say about Natalia's parents either. Her mom is timid and her dad, delivering a sermon to his daughter after she just believed she was pregnant but turned out not to be pregnant and had to have emergency surgery to remove a mass was the last thing she needed in that moment. Just ugh! Maybe he needs to read and gleam some new understanding from the Word, but God is love but how he treats Natalia is the total opposite of that. 

My heart broke for Natalia and how you write her coping with the loss and the realization she hadn't been pregnant is poignant and realistic. Anthony is the best. You can feel his helplessness and concern for Natalia, and I love that they haven't just decided "yet" I should say to end things now that they won't be parents, but they're sticking together trying to make the best of it one day at a time. I like that Natalia wants Anthony around and that he's very loving and affectionate with her.

With him gone now I wonder where Natalia and Anthony will be mentally. Will he think about moving back home for good now that a large responsibility is no longer looming over his head? Will Natalia feel there's no point to being in a relationship since theirs started off with revenge on her end? Will they take more time apart to figure out what the next step should be and if its a step they should take together? Especially now that they've both been made aware the window of opportunity for Natalia to become a mother has shrunk considerably. I'm so curious to find out what's in store next ;)

This story stirs so much emotion, I love it and dreed reading at the same time because it pulls at my heart. Thank you for the update.

Crap...he didn't call. Maybe it's too much for him or maybe he lost track of time with his family??  I think they would be so good together.  I hate they lost the baby, but maybe they can grow from this...if he comes back?!  :(  Update soon.

Glad to see a new chapter from this story. I hope there are more to come.

So wait!? 12hrs later and he hasn't called.  What is going on with pop-pop?  I would like to know what Anthony was thinking during that doctor's appointment and before getting on the plane.  You just know his dad is going to be in his face during the visit.  I hope they both seek counseling because the death of child would never be easy and she has soo many people who are not supportive in her atmosphere that she needs neutral ground to share her thoughts, feelings without feeling she should be "grateful" this happened like her father is expecting her to be.  Amazing to me how sometimes the most pious is the most judgemental when only God has the right to judge us.  Barb, stop sharing your sister's life to this stalker.  She needs to back the hell up.   I still think she has a thing for the guy herself.  You have also made me wonder if I ever looked at someone in the OB/GYN office similarly when I was pregnant.  Not that I could think of but it makes you think, you never know what is going on with someone else.

So he didn't call?  I hope she uses this time to pull herself together--it's hard, but she can heal in time.  I really hope she and Anthony work things out, BC he is a better man than his son and Talia needs to tell Barb to back off.  Thanks for the great update!

The last two chapters were heartbreakers. Its a long time I havent gotten so emotionally distress from reading a story. You captured their sorrow and her shame and guilt so well. I can't imagine before now the world of grief a woman would be in in such a situation and yet you were able to make us feel what she feels. But I am glad that she hasnt rejected Anthony. There are some strong emotions at play that are keeping them in each other's orbit and I hope they continue to do so despite their current circumstances. The real shame would be if they draw away from each other now.

Anthony's visit back home may be sad, but interesting one. If his pop pop dies he would be in double pain and how that manifest in terms of his relationship with his dad would be something to see.

Thanks for sharing our talent. Though I am still distressed it was a privilege to read.