Sad chapter. The way you convey emotions through words is just wonderful. 

I really need you to ffinish this,  i love them both

Really enjoy this story! hope that your writers block goes away and you can update soon.

You once wrote this short story (3 chapters) about a couple in which the husband was in the CIA and was undercover as a  mechanic. His wife would come visit him disgusing herself as a woman whose car costantly gave her problems. Can you PLEASEEE put that story back up or maybe make it into a longer story? it was my absolute fav story of yours.

Ahhhhh. I am so mad at you right now because I am at work trying not to ugly cry. This story is so good. Your writing us terrific. I just love how you describe things. Please give me more but cut Natalia a break and I am not opposed to killing her sister off. 

I was not expecting this. 

She needs to kick those people out of her house. They're sickening. They better pray she doesn't chase them with a knife a la Soul Food. 

You literally broke my heart!  This is one of the most interesting stories I've read.  Natalia is so well fleshed out with all her flaws and complexities.  I really hope they have a chance and as much as this hurts at least it gives them a chance to start again for the right reasons.

Thanks!

i really really - and i mean really - can't stand Barb. the words she was saying made my blood boil and to read that Natalia wasnt pregnant is just heartbreaking. her parents weren't much better - gave no support. none at all. if anyone is toxic then it's Natalia's family - the people that should be her support system. God. Knowing Barb. she is going to force that Dr Guy (can't even remember his name) on Natalia the day after all of this -__- Blah!

i loved loved loooved the end when Natalia went to Anthony - that's exactly where she needs to be and i PRAY that Natalia remembers that!!! knowing her she is going to start pushing Anthony away again and she needs him now - just like HE needs her too...!

you wrote the hell of these two chapters - simply amazing!!

rating: 1000000/10 just superb!

I had tears in my eyes reading this because as a mother, I can't imagine not giving birth to any of my children.  I can't believe her Dad took that time in her life to deliver a sermon on sinners vs being a comfort to her.  At this point all of them are hypocrites and if she never spoke to them again, I wouldn't blame her.  Here I am 38yrs old, discarded as being unimportant to my ex-husband that his family never knew about me and in my hurt, vulnerable state, I seduce his son and drag his son away from his life b/c I believed I was pregnant.  I have been feeling an obscene amount of guilt and now that I have let that go, I find out my body betrayed me with this pretend pregnancy.  This was my last hope of having children(hopefully or so I thought). 

I hope this brings her and Anthony closer together vs having her forcing him out of her life.  I can see she could revert back to her savior/martyr mode and say, "you have your life back to do with what you want and who you want.  You don't have to be tied down to an old woman."  Barb will fill in whatever else and probably go blabbing to that doctor.  I'm serious I would change my locks, set an alarm on the house along with an electrical fence with family of Nat keep out signs before you meet your maker today.  Could her and Anthony move and start over somewhere else.  I feel like she needs thousands of miles away from her family. 

Why did I just think of something so evil.  What if Anthony took her home to his family gathering and announced she was his girlfriend?  *smirks evilly* what would good old dad do then?  Can't say she is his ex anything because why haven't we  heard of her.  Please let them go on a cruise or trip or even a wknd getaway to a nice bed and breakfast once she heals.  Just want her and Anthony to be happy.

Great writing!!

Awww crap.  That was so sad, I never thought she wasn't really pregnant. I hate that she is so sad, please don't let her push him away.  This could make them even closer.  Your writing was beautiful in these two chapters.  I was so upset for her and Anthony, oh and I wanted to slap Barbara and her parents.  Great update.  We need a cheerful one soon, but this one was very good.

Her family is evil. and I want something bad to happen to them all. That is awful, does that mean that she will could never have a baby?  She is going to have change the locks on her house to keep the bitch Barbara out.  Natalia's relationship with her parents will never be the same.  It shouldn't be after all of the things that they have said to her. Are you trying to make a sister cry?

Barbara is evil and I want her dead please?  Oh no, she lost the baby!?

Thank goodness. I'm glad Anthony told her about herself. Although he could've been a bit kinder. All her what will people think thoughts were working my nerves too.